实战演练
假如你是李林，在暑假期间你跟父母去了北京，请你向同学们介绍一下北京，包括天气、景点、美食等。
提示：长城 the Great Wall 故宫 the Palace Museum 颐和园 the Summer Palace 天安门 Tian'anmen Square ...
要求：1.80词左右；
2.语言表达准确，语句通顺、连贯。

【高分范文】
I had a great trip to Beijing with my
parents this summer vacation. The weather in
Beijing was very nice. We visited many famous
places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the
Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and
Tian'anmen Square. These structures are
extraordinarily amazing. We also tasted a lot
of delicious food, like Beijing Roast Duck. I
had a wonderful time in Beijing and I hope to
go there again.

【分析】
本题要求以李林的身份，写一篇介绍北京的英语短文，需包含天气、景点、美食，词数80左右。解题思路：①开头点明暑假与父母去北京的背景；②介绍北京的天气情况；③结合提示列举著名景点并简单评价；④提及特色美食（如北京烤鸭）；⑤结尾表达旅行感受与愿望，确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作遵循“总-分-总”结构：1. 开篇点明旅行背景：I had a great trip to Beijing with my parents this summer vacation.；2. 介绍天气：The weather in Beijing was very nice.；3. 列举景点并评价：We visited many famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and Tian'anmen Square. These structures are extraordinarily amazing.；4. 提及美食：We also tasted a lot of delicious food, like Beijing Roast Duck.；5. 结尾总结感受：I had a wonderful time in Beijing and I hope to go there again. 全程控制词数，保证语言准确连贯。
【答案】
I had a great trip to Beijing with my parents this summer vacation. The weather in Beijing was very nice. We visited many famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and Tian'anmen Square. These structures are extraordinarily amazing. We also tasted a lot of delicious food, like Beijing Roast Duck. I had a wonderful time in Beijing and I hope to go there again.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、城市话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，覆盖天气、景点、美食三大核心要素，结构清晰，用词准确恰当，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇优秀的旅行介绍类短文。
【难度系数】
0.5