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你校的校刊英语专栏正在开展以"Getting Close to Nature"为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文向专栏投稿。
提示：What did you do during the nature trip?
How did you feel about the trip?
What do you think of getting close to nature? Something more about the topic.
要求：
1.80词左右；
2.标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Getting Close to Nature
范文欣赏
Getting Close to Nature
Last summer, I had a chance to go hiking in the mountains near my hometown. It was an unforgettable experience getting close to nature.
The fresh air, green trees, and the sound of birds singing all around made me feel relaxed and happy. As I climbed higher, I saw a breathtaking view of the valley below. It was like a painting that I could step into.
This trip taught me that nature is our best friend. It heals our hearts and gives us strength. I learned to appreciate the beauty of nature and to protect it for future generations.
【名师点评】
作者按照题目要求，运用所学词汇和句式，描述了自己在一次远足中看到的景色，并表达了自己的感受。文章文笔流畅，结构紧凑，用语准确，描述生动。
·亮点词汇：made me feel relaxed and happy; appreciate the beauty of ...等。
·高分句式 As I climbed higher ... ; It was like a painting that ...等。
你校的校刊英语专栏正在开展以"Getting Close to Nature"为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文向专栏投稿。
提示：What did you do during the nature trip?
How did you feel about the trip?
What do you think of getting close to nature? Something more about the topic.
要求：
1.80词左右；
2.标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Getting Close to Nature
范文欣赏
Getting Close to Nature
Last summer, I had a chance to go hiking in the mountains near my hometown. It was an unforgettable experience getting close to nature.
The fresh air, green trees, and the sound of birds singing all around made me feel relaxed and happy. As I climbed higher, I saw a breathtaking view of the valley below. It was like a painting that I could step into.
This trip taught me that nature is our best friend. It heals our hearts and gives us strength. I learned to appreciate the beauty of nature and to protect it for future generations.
【名师点评】
作者按照题目要求，运用所学词汇和句式，描述了自己在一次远足中看到的景色，并表达了自己的感受。文章文笔流畅，结构紧凑，用语准确，描述生动。
·亮点词汇：made me feel relaxed and happy; appreciate the beauty of ...等。
·高分句式 As I climbed higher ... ; It was like a painting that ...等。
答案
Getting Close to Nature
Last weekend, I went camping by a lake with my friends. We set up tents, picked wild flowers and watched the sunset together.
The warm wind, clear water and lovely little animals made me feel totally relaxed. I forgot all my study worries.
I think getting close to nature is really important. It not only brings us joy but also teaches us to love and protect the beautiful world around us.
Last weekend, I went camping by a lake with my friends. We set up tents, picked wild flowers and watched the sunset together.
The warm wind, clear water and lovely little animals made me feel totally relaxed. I forgot all my study worries.
I think getting close to nature is really important. It not only brings us joy but also teaches us to love and protect the beautiful world around us.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语征文写作题，主题为“Getting Close to Nature”，需围绕三个提示点（自然之旅的活动、个人感受、对亲近自然的看法）完成80词左右的短文。解题思路：1. 开头点明自然之旅的时间、参与对象及核心活动；2. 中间结合自然环境细节，描述具体活动并抒发真实感受；3. 结尾阐述亲近自然的意义，升华主题，同时控制词数，使用恰当的词汇与句式。
【解析】
按照题目要求，采用“总-分-总”结构写作：开头交代事件（和朋友去湖边露营），中间列举具体活动（搭帐篷、摘野花、看日落），结合环境描写（暖风、清水、小动物）表达放松的感受，最后点明亲近自然的意义（带来快乐、教会热爱与保护自然），确保语言流畅、词数符合要求。
【答案】
Getting Close to Nature
Last weekend, I went camping by a lake with my friends. We set up tents, picked wild flowers and watched the sunset together.
The warm wind, clear water and lovely little animals made me feel totally relaxed. I forgot all my study worries.
I think getting close to nature is really important. It not only brings us joy but also teaches us to love and protect the beautiful world around us.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；英语话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，覆盖所有提示要求，结构清晰紧凑，用词准确生动，通过具体细节展现自然之旅的经历与感受，结尾升华了对亲近自然意义的理解，符合征文要求，语言流畅自然。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语征文写作题，主题为“Getting Close to Nature”，需围绕三个提示点（自然之旅的活动、个人感受、对亲近自然的看法）完成80词左右的短文。解题思路：1. 开头点明自然之旅的时间、参与对象及核心活动；2. 中间结合自然环境细节，描述具体活动并抒发真实感受；3. 结尾阐述亲近自然的意义，升华主题，同时控制词数，使用恰当的词汇与句式。
【解析】
按照题目要求，采用“总-分-总”结构写作：开头交代事件（和朋友去湖边露营），中间列举具体活动（搭帐篷、摘野花、看日落），结合环境描写（暖风、清水、小动物）表达放松的感受，最后点明亲近自然的意义（带来快乐、教会热爱与保护自然），确保语言流畅、词数符合要求。
【答案】
Getting Close to Nature
Last weekend, I went camping by a lake with my friends. We set up tents, picked wild flowers and watched the sunset together.
The warm wind, clear water and lovely little animals made me feel totally relaxed. I forgot all my study worries.
I think getting close to nature is really important. It not only brings us joy but also teaches us to love and protect the beautiful world around us.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；英语话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，覆盖所有提示要求，结构清晰紧凑，用词准确生动，通过具体细节展现自然之旅的经历与感受，结尾升华了对亲近自然意义的理解，符合征文要求，语言流畅自然。
【难度系数】
0.6
