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假设你是李华，你将在学校演讲大赛上介绍自己家乡的变化，请根据以下表格中的内容提示，写一篇题为“Changes in My Hometown”的演讲稿。
内容提示：
注意：
1. 演讲稿须包含表格中的关键词，请增加细节以使文章完整；
2. 演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80～100。（演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Changes in My Hometown
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to talk about the great changes in my hometown.
假设你是李华，你将在学校演讲大赛上介绍自己家乡的变化，请根据以下表格中的内容提示，写一篇题为“Changes in My Hometown”的演讲稿。
内容提示：
注意：
1. 演讲稿须包含表格中的关键词，请增加细节以使文章完整；
2. 演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80～100。（演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Changes in My Hometown
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to talk about the great changes in my hometown.
In the past, people lived in crowded houses and the roads were narrow. Their living conditions were poor. But nowadays, there are many high and beautiful buildings. The roads are wide and smooth. People's living conditions have become more comfortable. Transportation has become convenient. People used to go to work on foot or by bike, but now they can drive cars, take buses or the underground.
I love my hometown and I'm proud of its changes. I hope it will become better and better.
答案
One possible version：
Changes in My Hometown
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to talk about the great changes in my hometown.
In the past, people lived in crowded houses and the roads were narrow. Their living conditions were poor. But nowadays, there are many high and beautiful buildings. The roads are wide and smooth. People's living conditions have become more comfortable. Transportation has become convenient. People used to go to work on foot or by bike, but now they can drive cars, take buses or the underground.
I love my hometown and I'm proud of its changes. I hope it will become better and better.
Changes in My Hometown
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to talk about the great changes in my hometown.
In the past, people lived in crowded houses and the roads were narrow. Their living conditions were poor. But nowadays, there are many high and beautiful buildings. The roads are wide and smooth. People's living conditions have become more comfortable. Transportation has become convenient. People used to go to work on foot or by bike, but now they can drive cars, take buses or the underground.
I love my hometown and I'm proud of its changes. I hope it will become better and better.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以李华的身份写题为“Changes in My Hometown”的演讲稿，介绍家乡变化，需包含表格关键词、补充细节，词数80～100，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 先对应表格写家乡过去的状况（拥挤的房子、狭窄的道路、差的生活条件）；2. 再写现在的变化（高楼、宽阔的道路、舒适的生活，补充交通方式变化等细节）；3. 最后表达对家乡的情感，完成演讲稿。
【解析】
按照“过去情况→现在变化→情感表达”的结构写作：
1. 承接开头，写过去：In the past, people lived in crowded houses and the roads were narrow. Their living conditions were poor.
2. 写现在的变化：But nowadays, there are many high and beautiful buildings. The roads are wide and smooth. People's living conditions have become more comfortable. 补充交通细节：People used to go to work on foot or by bike, but now they can drive cars, take buses or the underground.
3. 结尾表达情感：I love my hometown and I'm proud of its changes. I hope it will become better and better. 确保内容完整、词数符合要求。
【答案】
Changes in My Hometown
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to talk about the great changes in my hometown.
In the past, people lived in crowded houses and the roads were narrow. Their living conditions were poor. But nowadays, there are many high and beautiful buildings. The roads are wide and smooth. People's living conditions have become more comfortable. Transportation has become convenient. People used to go to work on foot or by bike, but now they can drive cars, take buses or the underground.
I love my hometown and I'm proud of its changes. I hope it will become better and better.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、演讲稿写作、形容词比较级
【点评】
本题考查学生的信息整合与书面表达能力，要求结合表格提示完成演讲稿，需准确运用过去与现在的对比表达，适当拓展细节使文章完整，符合演讲稿的语气要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：以李华的身份写题为“Changes in My Hometown”的演讲稿，介绍家乡变化，需包含表格关键词、补充细节，词数80～100，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 先对应表格写家乡过去的状况（拥挤的房子、狭窄的道路、差的生活条件）；2. 再写现在的变化（高楼、宽阔的道路、舒适的生活，补充交通方式变化等细节）；3. 最后表达对家乡的情感，完成演讲稿。
【解析】
按照“过去情况→现在变化→情感表达”的结构写作：
1. 承接开头，写过去：In the past, people lived in crowded houses and the roads were narrow. Their living conditions were poor.
2. 写现在的变化：But nowadays, there are many high and beautiful buildings. The roads are wide and smooth. People's living conditions have become more comfortable. 补充交通细节：People used to go to work on foot or by bike, but now they can drive cars, take buses or the underground.
3. 结尾表达情感：I love my hometown and I'm proud of its changes. I hope it will become better and better. 确保内容完整、词数符合要求。
【答案】
Changes in My Hometown
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to talk about the great changes in my hometown.
In the past, people lived in crowded houses and the roads were narrow. Their living conditions were poor. But nowadays, there are many high and beautiful buildings. The roads are wide and smooth. People's living conditions have become more comfortable. Transportation has become convenient. People used to go to work on foot or by bike, but now they can drive cars, take buses or the underground.
I love my hometown and I'm proud of its changes. I hope it will become better and better.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、演讲稿写作、形容词比较级
【点评】
本题考查学生的信息整合与书面表达能力，要求结合表格提示完成演讲稿，需准确运用过去与现在的对比表达，适当拓展细节使文章完整，符合演讲稿的语气要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
