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Ⅴ. 书面表达。
假如你是李华,上周六你校师生去阳光儿童福利院（Sunshine Children’s Home）开展志愿活动。请根据下面表格,用英语在班上对本次活动做一个总结。
Time last Saturday
How to get there by bus
Activities 1. clean the room, make the bed;
2. tell sto
s;
3. play games;
4. give some gifts.
Feelings tired but happy
注意:1. 总结中必须包含表格中所有内容,可适当发挥,使句子通顺、连贯。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
3. 不少于80词。
假如你是李华,上周六你校师生去阳光儿童福利院（Sunshine Children’s Home）开展志愿活动。请根据下面表格,用英语在班上对本次活动做一个总结。
Time last Saturday
How to get there by bus
Activities 1. clean the room, make the bed;
2. tell sto
s;3. play games;
4. give some gifts.
Feelings tired but happy
注意:1. 总结中必须包含表格中所有内容,可适当发挥,使句子通顺、连贯。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
3. 不少于80词。
答案
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Last Saturday, all the teachers and students in our school went to the Sunshine Children's Home to do volunteer work. We set off early in the morning and got there by bus.
When we arrived, we first helped the kids clean their rooms and make the beds. After finishing the housework, we told many interesting stories to the children. We also played all kinds of fun games with them, and all the kids laughed happily. Before we left, we gave the children some nice gifts, such as picture books and cute toys.
All of us felt tired after the full day's work, but we were really happy. We all had a wonderful and meaningful day there.
When we arrived, we first helped the kids clean their rooms and make the beds. After finishing the housework, we told many interesting stories to the children. We also played all kinds of fun games with them, and all the kids laughed happily. Before we left, we gave the children some nice gifts, such as picture books and cute toys.
All of us felt tired after the full day's work, but we were really happy. We all had a wonderful and meaningful day there.
解析
这是一篇叙事类志愿活动主题的英语短文，写作注意事项如下：1. 叙事人称使用第一人称，整体时态统一为一般过去时，符合七年级的语法要求；2. 必须完整覆盖表格所有信息点：活动时间为上周六、出行方式是乘公交、四项具体活动、疲惫但开心的感受，不能遗漏要点；3. 可以适当补充简单细节让行文连贯通顺，保证词数不少于80，不出现真实校名和人名。
