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七、书面表达(满分25分)
(2025·常州中考)假如你校英文报发起了关于学生说脏话现象的讨论,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话现象的观点和建议。
提示：
1. Why shouldn't we say dirty words?
2. How can we help others stop saying dirty words?
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右；文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I really don't think it's right for students to say dirty words.
(2025·常州中考)假如你校英文报发起了关于学生说脏话现象的讨论,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话现象的观点和建议。
提示：
1. Why shouldn't we say dirty words?
2. How can we help others stop saying dirty words?
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右；文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I really don't think it's right for students to say dirty words.
答案
I really don't think it's right for students to say dirty words. Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help dirty word speakers stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What's more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them. By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
To help dirty word speakers stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What's more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them. By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要紧扣题目要求，完成两个核心内容：阐述说脏话的危害，以及提出帮助他人改掉说脏话习惯的建议。
第一步，思考“为什么不能说脏话”：可以从对说话者和听者的双向影响入手，比如听者会感到不适，说话者会给人留下坏印象，难以交到朋友，这样能让理由更充分。
第二步，思考“如何帮助他人停止说脏话”：要给出具体可行的建议，比如借助老师和家长的力量沟通，让他们意识到危害；还可以通过制定规则，用提醒和表扬的方式督促，这样的建议更具操作性。
写作时要注意衔接词的使用，让文章逻辑清晰，同时控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，直接切入说脏话的危害：从对听者（feel uncomfortable）和说话者（leave a bad impression, no one wants to make friends）两个角度展开，全面回应第一个提示问题。
2. 第二段提出帮助他人的具体建议：
用“First of all”引出第一个建议：家人和老师与说脏话的人谈话，让他们认识到问题和危害（have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm）。
用“What's more”引出第二个建议：制定规则，通过提醒和表扬的方式督促（make rules, remind them, praise them）。
3. 结尾用“By doing these, I am sure...”总结，增强说服力，同时保证文章结构完整，词数符合要求。
【答案】
I really don't think it's right for students to say dirty words. Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help dirty word speakers stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What's more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them. By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
【知识点】
英语议论文写作、提建议句型、危害类话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了“说脏话的危害”和“帮助他人改陋习的建议”两个核心内容，逻辑清晰，衔接自然（运用了while, First of all, What's more等衔接词）。语言简洁准确，符合中学生的表达水平，且严格遵守了题目中关于真实信息和词数的要求，是一篇合格的中考书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们需要紧扣题目要求，完成两个核心内容：阐述说脏话的危害，以及提出帮助他人改掉说脏话习惯的建议。
第一步，思考“为什么不能说脏话”：可以从对说话者和听者的双向影响入手，比如听者会感到不适，说话者会给人留下坏印象，难以交到朋友，这样能让理由更充分。
第二步，思考“如何帮助他人停止说脏话”：要给出具体可行的建议，比如借助老师和家长的力量沟通，让他们意识到危害；还可以通过制定规则，用提醒和表扬的方式督促，这样的建议更具操作性。
写作时要注意衔接词的使用，让文章逻辑清晰，同时控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，直接切入说脏话的危害：从对听者（feel uncomfortable）和说话者（leave a bad impression, no one wants to make friends）两个角度展开，全面回应第一个提示问题。
2. 第二段提出帮助他人的具体建议：
用“First of all”引出第一个建议：家人和老师与说脏话的人谈话，让他们认识到问题和危害（have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm）。
用“What's more”引出第二个建议：制定规则，通过提醒和表扬的方式督促（make rules, remind them, praise them）。
3. 结尾用“By doing these, I am sure...”总结，增强说服力，同时保证文章结构完整，词数符合要求。
【答案】
I really don't think it's right for students to say dirty words. Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help dirty word speakers stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What's more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them. By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
【知识点】
英语议论文写作、提建议句型、危害类话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了“说脏话的危害”和“帮助他人改陋习的建议”两个核心内容，逻辑清晰，衔接自然（运用了while, First of all, What's more等衔接词）。语言简洁准确，符合中学生的表达水平，且严格遵守了题目中关于真实信息和词数的要求，是一篇合格的中考书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
