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本单元我们学习了很多著名的童话故事，为提高同学们的写作能力，英语老师组织了续写故事大赛。下面是其中的一个参赛题目，请你展开联想，为下面的故事写一个80词左右的完美结局。
A Lazy Bear
Once upon a time, there was a lazy bear.
He always wanted to make money without working hard. One day he found some money on his way home.
思路点拨
1. 人称:第三人称
2. 时态:一般现在时和一般过去时
3. 结构:

素材积累
1. 主题词块
①从前;很久以前
②咬穿
③起初;最初
④赚钱
⑤逃脱;离开
⑥到处;遍及
⑦嘲笑
⑧走开
⑨寻找
⑩出乎某人的意料
⑪只有
⑫出现;盛开
⑬许下诺言
⑭最后;终究
⑮成功做成某事
2. 句型仿写
①What an ugly duckling!
句型:What+a/an+adj.+可数名词单数!
仿写:多么幸运的一天啊!

②He met many other birds, but all of them thought that he was ugly too.
句型:..., but ...
仿写:他过了几天幸福生活,但是很快他就没钱了。

③... so he decided to search for a new home.
句型:主语+decide to do sth.
仿写:从那以后,他决定努力工作。

连句成篇
A Lazy Bear
Once upon a time, there was a lazy bear.
He always wanted to make money without working hard. One day he found some money on his way home.

【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①once upon a time ②bite through
③at first ④make money ⑤get out
⑥all over ⑦laugh at ⑧go away
⑨search for ⑩to sb's surprise
⑪only if ⑫come out
⑬make a promise ⑭in the end
⑮succeed in doing sth
2. 句型仿写
①What a lucky day!
②He lived a happy life for some days,
but soon he didn't have any money.
③He decided to work hard from then on.
【连句成篇】
A Lazy Bear
Once upon a time, there was a lazy
bear. He always wanted to make money
without working hard. One day he found
some money on his way home. "What a
lucky day!" the bear said. At first, he lived a
happy life for some days, but soon he didn't
have any money. He said to himself, "I must
walk all over the city and the village. Maybe
I can find more money." So he went out and
travelled around, but he didn't find money
any more. When he travelled, he saw many
people working hard. He thought of the
saying, "No pain, no gain." He decided to
work hard from then on. In the end, he
became hard-working and lived a better life.

【分析】本题为英语故事续写题，需结合给定开头、思路点拨及素材积累，按照“开篇点题→主体描述→结尾思想变化”的结构完成续写。解题时，先承接“found some money”用感叹句开篇点题；接着描述起初有钱的状态，没钱后外出寻找却无果，看到他人努力后领悟道理；最后体现思想转变，呼应“不劳无获”的主题，时态以一般过去时为主，符合故事叙述逻辑。
【解析】1. 开篇点题：承接开头的“found some money”，用感叹句“What a lucky day!”引出，符合素材要求；2. 主体描述：先写起初有钱的快乐生活，很快花光后外出寻找更多钱却未找到，途中看到他人努力工作；3. 结尾思想变化：领悟“No pain, no gain”的道理，决定努力工作，最终成为勤劳的熊，过上更好的生活，完成故事逻辑闭环。
【答案】A Lazy Bear
Once upon a time, there was a lazy bear. He always wanted to make money without working hard. One day he found some money on his way home. "What a lucky day!" the bear said. At first, he lived a happy life for some days, but soon he didn't have any money. He said to himself, "I must walk all over the city and the village. Maybe I can find more money." So he went out and travelled around, but he didn't find money any more. When he travelled, he saw many people working hard. He thought of the saying, "No pain, no gain." He decided to work hard from then on. In the end, he became hard-working and lived a better life.
【知识点】英语故事续写、一般过去时运用、常用句型仿写
【点评】本题考查学生英语写作能力，要求结合给定素材完成逻辑连贯的故事续写，既巩固基础句型运用，又传递“不劳无获”的道理，结构清晰、主题明确，适合学生练习。
【难度系数】0.5