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四、书面表达。(30 分)
书籍是人类进步的阶梯,可以充实人的内心世界。相信你肯定有自己最喜欢的作家。请你以“My Favourite Writer”为题,根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的作家。
提示:
1. 作家是谁?
2. 这位作家的第一本书是什么时候出版的?
3. 这位作家取得了哪些成就?
4. 你认为这位作家的书怎样?
5. 你为什么喜欢这位作家?
要求:
1. 内容包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于 100 词;
3. 不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
书籍是人类进步的阶梯,可以充实人的内心世界。相信你肯定有自己最喜欢的作家。请你以“My Favourite Writer”为题,根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的作家。
提示:
1. 作家是谁?
2. 这位作家的第一本书是什么时候出版的?
3. 这位作家取得了哪些成就?
4. 你认为这位作家的书怎样?
5. 你为什么喜欢这位作家?
要求:
1. 内容包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于 100 词;
3. 不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
答案
My Favourite Writer
My favourite writer is J. K. Rowling.
Her first novel Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone came out in 1997. Later it became the bestseller and attracted millions of fans. So far the Harry Potter series has sold more than 700 million copies. Now she has been one of the most famous and successful writers all over the world.
I love reading her books because the world created in her books is amazing and full of adventures. And her books are usually about love and growing up, which can always touch readers' hearts.
Rowling is brave and strong in the face of difficulties. She has set a good example for teenagers worldwide. I like her and hope to read more of her books.
My favourite writer is J. K. Rowling.
Her first novel Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone came out in 1997. Later it became the bestseller and attracted millions of fans. So far the Harry Potter series has sold more than 700 million copies. Now she has been one of the most famous and successful writers all over the world.
I love reading her books because the world created in her books is amazing and full of adventures. And her books are usually about love and growing up, which can always touch readers' hearts.
Rowling is brave and strong in the face of difficulties. She has set a good example for teenagers worldwide. I like her and hope to read more of her books.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类英语说明文写作题，解题时首先要完成审题：明确体裁是人物介绍类短文，确定人称以第三人称介绍作家生平、第一人称表述个人感受为主，时态上介绍作家过往经历用一般过去时，描述至今取得的成就用现在完成时，表达自身观点用一般现在时。接下来要逐一对应题干给出的5个提示要点，避免漏点：第一步开篇直接点明你最喜欢的作家身份，第二步交代该作家首部作品的出版时间，第三步梳理该作家的核心成就，第四步阐述你对其作品的评价，最后说明你喜爱这位作家的原因，还可以适当补充符合逻辑的细节让内容更饱满，同时控制字数不少于100词，全程不要出现真实姓名和校名，最后检查语句通顺、语法无误即可。
【解析】
本篇范文严格按照题干要求完成写作，具体行文逻辑如下：
1. 开篇点题：直接说明自己最喜欢的作家是J.K.罗琳，开门见山，快速切入主题。
2. 生平与成就介绍：明确写出她的第一部小说《哈利·波特与魔法石》1997年出版，后续该系列销量超7亿册，她也成为全球最知名的成功作家之一，完整覆盖了“首部作品出版时间”“作家成就”两个要点。
3. 个人评价部分：说明她笔下的世界充满奇幻冒险，作品围绕爱与成长的主题，非常打动读者，清晰表达了自己对其书籍的看法。
4. 收尾部分：点明罗琳面对困难坚韧的品质为青少年树立了好榜样，说明自己喜爱她的原因，同时补充了想要阅读更多她的作品的合理延伸内容，全文所有提示要点全部覆盖，总词数符合不少于100词的要求，没有出现真实个人信息，逻辑连贯流畅。
【答案】
My Favourite Writer
My favourite writer is J. K. Rowling.
Her first novel Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone came out in 1997. Later it became the bestseller and attracted millions of fans. So far the Harry Potter series has sold more than 700 million copies. Now she has been one of the most famous and successful writers all over the world.
I love reading her books because the world created in her books is amazing and full of adventures. And her books are usually about love and growing up, which can always touch readers' hearts.
Rowling is brave and strong in the face of difficulties. She has set a good example for teenagers worldwide. I like her and hope to read more of her books.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，时态综合运用，语篇逻辑构建
【点评】
这篇范文完全覆盖题干全部提示要点，行文逻辑清晰层层递进，准确使用了come out、bestseller、set a good example等亮点短语，还合理运用了定语从句提升表达丰富度，语法零错误，字数达标，完全符合考场高分作文的要求，学生写作时可以参考该“点题-介绍生平成就-表达个人评价-说明喜爱原因”的结构，避免遗漏要点。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇提纲类英语说明文写作题，解题时首先要完成审题：明确体裁是人物介绍类短文，确定人称以第三人称介绍作家生平、第一人称表述个人感受为主，时态上介绍作家过往经历用一般过去时，描述至今取得的成就用现在完成时，表达自身观点用一般现在时。接下来要逐一对应题干给出的5个提示要点，避免漏点：第一步开篇直接点明你最喜欢的作家身份，第二步交代该作家首部作品的出版时间，第三步梳理该作家的核心成就，第四步阐述你对其作品的评价，最后说明你喜爱这位作家的原因，还可以适当补充符合逻辑的细节让内容更饱满，同时控制字数不少于100词，全程不要出现真实姓名和校名，最后检查语句通顺、语法无误即可。
【解析】
本篇范文严格按照题干要求完成写作，具体行文逻辑如下：
1. 开篇点题：直接说明自己最喜欢的作家是J.K.罗琳，开门见山，快速切入主题。
2. 生平与成就介绍：明确写出她的第一部小说《哈利·波特与魔法石》1997年出版，后续该系列销量超7亿册，她也成为全球最知名的成功作家之一，完整覆盖了“首部作品出版时间”“作家成就”两个要点。
3. 个人评价部分：说明她笔下的世界充满奇幻冒险，作品围绕爱与成长的主题，非常打动读者，清晰表达了自己对其书籍的看法。
4. 收尾部分：点明罗琳面对困难坚韧的品质为青少年树立了好榜样，说明自己喜爱她的原因，同时补充了想要阅读更多她的作品的合理延伸内容，全文所有提示要点全部覆盖，总词数符合不少于100词的要求，没有出现真实个人信息，逻辑连贯流畅。
【答案】
My Favourite Writer
My favourite writer is J. K. Rowling.
Her first novel Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone came out in 1997. Later it became the bestseller and attracted millions of fans. So far the Harry Potter series has sold more than 700 million copies. Now she has been one of the most famous and successful writers all over the world.
I love reading her books because the world created in her books is amazing and full of adventures. And her books are usually about love and growing up, which can always touch readers' hearts.
Rowling is brave and strong in the face of difficulties. She has set a good example for teenagers worldwide. I like her and hope to read more of her books.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，时态综合运用，语篇逻辑构建
【点评】
这篇范文完全覆盖题干全部提示要点，行文逻辑清晰层层递进，准确使用了come out、bestseller、set a good example等亮点短语，还合理运用了定语从句提升表达丰富度，语法零错误，字数达标，完全符合考场高分作文的要求，学生写作时可以参考该“点题-介绍生平成就-表达个人评价-说明喜爱原因”的结构，避免遗漏要点。
【难度系数】
0.6
