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六、书面表达。（满分 20 分）
水是生命之源。学校英文网站将开展题目为"Protecting Rivers Around Us"的征文活动，请结合所给提示用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示：
1. 为什么我们应该保护水源？
2. 我们可以做些什么来保护它们？
要求：
1. 词数 80 左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 征文必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Protecting Rivers Around Us
水是生命之源。学校英文网站将开展题目为"Protecting Rivers Around Us"的征文活动，请结合所给提示用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示：
1. 为什么我们应该保护水源？
2. 我们可以做些什么来保护它们？
要求：
1. 词数 80 左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 征文必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Protecting Rivers Around Us
Rivers are very important to us.
They provide clean water for people and
animals to use. Many plants also grow
well near rivers, making our environment
more beautiful and lively. Just like the
Yangtze River is protected by law, our
hometown rivers need care too.
What can we do to protect them?
First, we must never throw rubbish into
rivers. Second, we can save water in
daily life and tell our friends to do the
same. Third, we can plant trees along
the river banks to stop soil from washing
away.
Let's work together to keep our
rivers clean forever!
They provide clean water for people and
animals to use. Many plants also grow
well near rivers, making our environment
more beautiful and lively. Just like the
Yangtze River is protected by law, our
hometown rivers need care too.
What can we do to protect them?
First, we must never throw rubbish into
rivers. Second, we can save water in
daily life and tell our friends to do the
same. Third, we can plant trees along
the river banks to stop soil from washing
away.
Let's work together to keep our
rivers clean forever!
答案
One possible version:
Protecting Rivers Around Us
Rivers are very important to us.
They provide clean water for people and
animals to use. Many plants also grow
well near rivers, making our environment
more beautiful and lively. Just like the
Yangtze River is protected by law, our
hometown rivers need care too.
What can we do to protect them?
First, we must never throw rubbish into
rivers. Second, we can save water in
daily life and tell our friends to do the
same. Third, we can plant trees along
the river banks to stop soil from washing
away.
Let's work together to keep our
rivers clean forever!
Protecting Rivers Around Us
Rivers are very important to us.
They provide clean water for people and
animals to use. Many plants also grow
well near rivers, making our environment
more beautiful and lively. Just like the
Yangtze River is protected by law, our
hometown rivers need care too.
What can we do to protect them?
First, we must never throw rubbish into
rivers. Second, we can save water in
daily life and tell our friends to do the
same. Third, we can plant trees along
the river banks to stop soil from washing
away.
Let's work together to keep our
rivers clean forever!
解析
【分析】
本次书面表达主题为"Protecting Rivers Around Us"，需覆盖两个核心要点：保护河流的原因、具体保护措施。开头已给出，需先衔接开头阐述保护河流的意义，再分点说明可采取的行动，最后发出呼吁，确保词数80左右，无真实信息，语言连贯。
【解析】
写作时，先承接给定开头，说明保护河流的原因：河流为人类和动物提供清洁水源，利于沿岸植物生长，美化环境；接着分三点阐述保护措施：不向河流扔垃圾、日常生活中节约用水并呼吁他人、在河岸植树防止水土流失；最后发出共同保护河流的呼吁，确保要点齐全，结构清晰，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Protecting Rivers Around Us
Rivers are very important to us.
They provide clean water for people and animals to use. Many plants also grow well near rivers, making our environment more beautiful and lively. Just like the Yangtze River is protected by law, our hometown rivers need care too.
What can we do to protect them? First, we must never throw rubbish into rivers. Second, we can save water in daily life and tell our friends to do the same. Third, we can plant trees along the river banks to stop soil from washing away.
Let's work together to keep our rivers clean forever!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；环境保护主题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，要点完整，结构清晰（原因-措施-呼吁），语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的英语书面表达范文，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.7
本次书面表达主题为"Protecting Rivers Around Us"，需覆盖两个核心要点：保护河流的原因、具体保护措施。开头已给出，需先衔接开头阐述保护河流的意义，再分点说明可采取的行动，最后发出呼吁，确保词数80左右，无真实信息，语言连贯。
【解析】
写作时，先承接给定开头，说明保护河流的原因：河流为人类和动物提供清洁水源，利于沿岸植物生长，美化环境；接着分三点阐述保护措施：不向河流扔垃圾、日常生活中节约用水并呼吁他人、在河岸植树防止水土流失；最后发出共同保护河流的呼吁，确保要点齐全，结构清晰，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Protecting Rivers Around Us
Rivers are very important to us.
They provide clean water for people and animals to use. Many plants also grow well near rivers, making our environment more beautiful and lively. Just like the Yangtze River is protected by law, our hometown rivers need care too.
What can we do to protect them? First, we must never throw rubbish into rivers. Second, we can save water in daily life and tell our friends to do the same. Third, we can plant trees along the river banks to stop soil from washing away.
Let's work together to keep our rivers clean forever!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；环境保护主题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，要点完整，结构清晰（原因-措施-呼吁），语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的英语书面表达范文，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.7
