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某社区慈善机构正在开展一项公益项目,现招募志愿者来帮助盲人儿童学习英语口语,并通过音乐活动增强其自信。假设你是李华,想报名成为志愿者。请根据以下思维导图的提示写一封申请信。
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)语句连贯,词数70左右。
写作指导
(1)审题定调
文体:
人称:
(2)思路构建
Dear Sir or Madam,
Sincerely,
Li Hua
某社区慈善机构正在开展一项公益项目,现招募志愿者来帮助盲人儿童学习英语口语,并通过音乐活动增强其自信。假设你是李华,想报名成为志愿者。请根据以下思维导图的提示写一封申请信。
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)语句连贯,词数70左右。
写作指导
(1)审题定调
文体:
应用文
时态:一般现在时为主
人称:
第一人称为主
(2)思路构建
Dear Sir or Madam,
Sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
(1) 应用文；一般现在时为主；第一人称为主
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, an eighth-grade student at Sunshine Middle School. I am writing to volunteer to help blind children learn English and music.
Last year, I volunteered at a special education centre, where I learned how to communicate with disabled students. This experience made me realize the power of kindness and effective teaching.
What's more, as a music lover, I can teach simple English songs to make learning fun. Besides, my spoken English is pretty good, and I'm willing to help the children explore a new language world.
I promise to be a responsible volunteer. It would be a great honour to help these children get confidence and joy through learning. Thank you for considering me.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, an eighth-grade student at Sunshine Middle School. I am writing to volunteer to help blind children learn English and music.
Last year, I volunteered at a special education centre, where I learned how to communicate with disabled students. This experience made me realize the power of kindness and effective teaching.
What's more, as a music lover, I can teach simple English songs to make learning fun. Besides, my spoken English is pretty good, and I'm willing to help the children explore a new language world.
I promise to be a responsible volunteer. It would be a great honour to help these children get confidence and joy through learning. Thank you for considering me.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达中的申请信写作题，解题思路如下：①审题定调：明确文体为应用文（申请信），时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称；②思路构建：开头需说明自身身份及申请成为志愿者的目的；主体部分结合思维导图提示，补充自身优势（如相关志愿经验、良好英语口语、音乐特长）；结尾表达诚意与感谢，同时适当拓展内容，确保语句连贯、词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 审题：确定文体为申请信（应用文），时态以一般现在时为主，使用第一人称叙述。
2. 结构安排：
开头：问候并自我介绍（如“我是阳光中学八年级学生李华”），说明申请帮助盲人儿童学英语和音乐的意愿；
主体：阐述自身优势：①过往特殊教育中心的志愿经历，掌握与残障学生沟通的方法；②英语口语良好，可教英文歌让学习更有趣；
结尾：表达作为志愿者的责任感，感谢考虑，期待获得机会。
3. 语言要求：语句连贯，词数约70左右，适当拓展细节。
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, an eighth-grade student at Sunshine Middle School. I am writing to volunteer to help blind children learn English and music.
Last year, I volunteered at a special education centre, where I learned how to communicate with disabled students. This experience made me realize the power of kindness and effective teaching.
What's more, as a music lover, I can teach simple English songs to make learning fun. Besides, my spoken English is pretty good, and I'm willing to help the children explore a new language world.
I promise to be a responsible volunteer. It would be a great honour to help these children get confidence and joy through learning. Thank you for considering me.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语书面表达、志愿申请类写作
【点评】
本题考查英语申请信的写作能力，要求结合提示拓展内容，注重考察学生的审题、结构组织及语言表达能力，是初中英语常见的实用写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达中的申请信写作题，解题思路如下：①审题定调：明确文体为应用文（申请信），时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称；②思路构建：开头需说明自身身份及申请成为志愿者的目的；主体部分结合思维导图提示，补充自身优势（如相关志愿经验、良好英语口语、音乐特长）；结尾表达诚意与感谢，同时适当拓展内容，确保语句连贯、词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 审题：确定文体为申请信（应用文），时态以一般现在时为主，使用第一人称叙述。
2. 结构安排：
开头：问候并自我介绍（如“我是阳光中学八年级学生李华”），说明申请帮助盲人儿童学英语和音乐的意愿；
主体：阐述自身优势：①过往特殊教育中心的志愿经历，掌握与残障学生沟通的方法；②英语口语良好，可教英文歌让学习更有趣；
结尾：表达作为志愿者的责任感，感谢考虑，期待获得机会。
3. 语言要求：语句连贯，词数约70左右，适当拓展细节。
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, an eighth-grade student at Sunshine Middle School. I am writing to volunteer to help blind children learn English and music.
Last year, I volunteered at a special education centre, where I learned how to communicate with disabled students. This experience made me realize the power of kindness and effective teaching.
What's more, as a music lover, I can teach simple English songs to make learning fun. Besides, my spoken English is pretty good, and I'm willing to help the children explore a new language world.
I promise to be a responsible volunteer. It would be a great honour to help these children get confidence and joy through learning. Thank you for considering me.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语书面表达、志愿申请类写作
【点评】
本题考查英语申请信的写作能力，要求结合提示拓展内容，注重考察学生的审题、结构组织及语言表达能力，是初中英语常见的实用写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
