登录
九、写作(15 分)
良好的饮食习惯是身体健康的保证。请你根据以下要点和要求,以“My Eating Habits”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的饮食习惯。
要点:
1. 你的一日三餐经常吃些什么?
2. 你最喜欢的食物和饮料是什么?
3. 你认为你的饮食习惯健康吗?你应该怎么做。
要求:1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。2. 词数为 70 左右。
My Eating Habits
良好的饮食习惯是身体健康的保证。请你根据以下要点和要求,以“My Eating Habits”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的饮食习惯。
要点:
1. 你的一日三餐经常吃些什么?
2. 你最喜欢的食物和饮料是什么?
3. 你认为你的饮食习惯健康吗?你应该怎么做。
要求:1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。2. 词数为 70 左右。
My Eating Habits
答案
One possible version:
My Eating Habits
Good eating habits are important for our bodies.
As for me, I have bread, eggs and milk for breakfast. And I have rice and chicken at noon. I have noodles, vegetables and soup for dinner. Eating more vegetables can make our bodies stronger. I also eat some meat and some fruit.
When it comes to the food, the hamburger is my favourite. My favourite drink is cola. But they are bad for my health. I seldom have them.
Healthy eating habits are important for us. So we'd better keep away from junk food. I think my eating habits are healthy. I still need to eat more fruit and vegetables to keep healthy.
My Eating Habits
Good eating habits are important for our bodies.
As for me, I have bread, eggs and milk for breakfast. And I have rice and chicken at noon. I have noodles, vegetables and soup for dinner. Eating more vegetables can make our bodies stronger. I also eat some meat and some fruit.
When it comes to the food, the hamburger is my favourite. My favourite drink is cola. But they are bad for my health. I seldom have them.
Healthy eating habits are important for us. So we'd better keep away from junk food. I think my eating habits are healthy. I still need to eat more fruit and vegetables to keep healthy.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My Eating Habits”为题写英语短文，需紧扣三个要点：介绍一日三餐的食物、说明最喜欢的食物和饮料、评价自身饮食习惯并提出改进方向。写作时要先开篇点出饮食习惯对健康的重要性，再按要点依次展开，语言需简单规范，控制词数在70左右，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明主题：说明良好饮食习惯对身体的重要性；
2. 介绍一日三餐：早餐吃面包、鸡蛋、牛奶，午餐吃米饭、鸡肉，晚餐吃面条、蔬菜、汤；
3. 说明喜好与健康关联：最喜欢的食物是汉堡、饮料是可乐，但这类食物不健康，所以很少吃；
4. 评价与改进：认为自己的饮食习惯较健康，还需多吃果蔬来保持健康。
【答案】
My Eating Habits
Good eating habits are important for our bodies.
As for me, I have bread, eggs and milk for breakfast. And I have rice and chicken at noon. I have noodles, vegetables and soup for dinner. Eating more vegetables can make our bodies stronger. I also eat some meat and some fruit.
When it comes to the food, the hamburger is my favourite. My favourite drink is cola. But they are bad for my health. I seldom have them.
Healthy eating habits are important for us. So we'd better keep away from junk food. I think my eating habits are healthy. I still need to eat more fruit and vegetables to keep healthy.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、饮食习惯英语表达、要点式短文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰，语言简单易懂，符合初中英语写作要求，既介绍了三餐情况，又表达了对喜好食物的健康认知，还明确了自身习惯的评价与改进方向，是一篇合格的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“My Eating Habits”为题写英语短文，需紧扣三个要点：介绍一日三餐的食物、说明最喜欢的食物和饮料、评价自身饮食习惯并提出改进方向。写作时要先开篇点出饮食习惯对健康的重要性，再按要点依次展开，语言需简单规范，控制词数在70左右，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明主题：说明良好饮食习惯对身体的重要性；
2. 介绍一日三餐：早餐吃面包、鸡蛋、牛奶，午餐吃米饭、鸡肉，晚餐吃面条、蔬菜、汤；
3. 说明喜好与健康关联：最喜欢的食物是汉堡、饮料是可乐，但这类食物不健康，所以很少吃；
4. 评价与改进：认为自己的饮食习惯较健康，还需多吃果蔬来保持健康。
【答案】
My Eating Habits
Good eating habits are important for our bodies.
As for me, I have bread, eggs and milk for breakfast. And I have rice and chicken at noon. I have noodles, vegetables and soup for dinner. Eating more vegetables can make our bodies stronger. I also eat some meat and some fruit.
When it comes to the food, the hamburger is my favourite. My favourite drink is cola. But they are bad for my health. I seldom have them.
Healthy eating habits are important for us. So we'd better keep away from junk food. I think my eating habits are healthy. I still need to eat more fruit and vegetables to keep healthy.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、饮食习惯英语表达、要点式短文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰，语言简单易懂，符合初中英语写作要求，既介绍了三餐情况，又表达了对喜好食物的健康认知，还明确了自身习惯的评价与改进方向，是一篇合格的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
