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地球上没有了动物，就如蓝天中没有了白云。某英文报正在举办以“保护野生动物”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Save wild animals”为题写一篇短文投稿，请从野生动物所面临的危险、我们为什么要保护野生动物以及如何保护野生动物三个方面进行阐述。
野生动物所面临的危险
可举例说明，如熊、老虎……
为什么要保护野生动物
……(至少两点)
如何保护野生动物
不买用野生动物的皮毛制成的衣服，制定法律……(至少三点)
【要求】1.必须包括提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2.90词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
3.不得使用真实的姓名、校名、地名等。
Save wild animals
Humans and wild animals live in the same world, but many of the wild animals are indanger.
野生动物所面临的危险
可举例说明，如熊、老虎……
为什么要保护野生动物
……(至少两点)
如何保护野生动物
不买用野生动物的皮毛制成的衣服，制定法律……(至少三点)
【要求】1.必须包括提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2.90词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
3.不得使用真实的姓名、校名、地名等。
Save wild animals
Humans and wild animals live in the same world, but many of the wild animals are indanger.
答案
One possible version
Save wild animals
Humans and wild animals live in the same world, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because they are our friends, but also because they can help keep a balance between humans and nature.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect wild animals.
Save wild animals
Humans and wild animals live in the same world, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because they are our friends, but also because they can help keep a balance between humans and nature.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect wild animals.
解析
【分析】本次征文主题为“Save wild animals”，需围绕三个核心要求展开：一是列举野生动物面临的危险（如熊、老虎等的具体处境）；二是说明保护野生动物的原因（至少两点）；三是提出保护的方法（至少三点）。开头已给出，补充内容时需紧扣主题，避免真实信息，控制词数在90左右，确保结构清晰、逻辑通顺。
【解析】首先承接开头，举例说明野生动物的危险：老虎、熊因被人类猎杀获取皮毛、骨骼而濒危，熊猫因竹林缩减失去栖息地；接着阐述保护原因：野生动物是人类的朋友，且能维持人与自然的平衡；最后说明保护方法：不购买野生动物皮毛制品、宣传保护重要性、政府制定相关法律，覆盖所有要求要点，语言简洁符合词数要求。
【答案】Save wild animals
Humans and wild animals live in the same world, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because they are our friends, but also because they can help keep a balance between humans and nature.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect wild animals.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、野生动物保护话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇符合征文标准的稿件。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】首先承接开头，举例说明野生动物的危险：老虎、熊因被人类猎杀获取皮毛、骨骼而濒危，熊猫因竹林缩减失去栖息地；接着阐述保护原因：野生动物是人类的朋友，且能维持人与自然的平衡；最后说明保护方法：不购买野生动物皮毛制品、宣传保护重要性、政府制定相关法律，覆盖所有要求要点，语言简洁符合词数要求。
【答案】Save wild animals
Humans and wild animals live in the same world, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because they are our friends, but also because they can help keep a balance between humans and nature.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect wild animals.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、野生动物保护话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇符合征文标准的稿件。
【难度系数】0.7
