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假如你的外国朋友想了解中国的传统节日，请根据下面要点并结合自己的实际经历，写一篇短文向他介绍一个你以前度过的并且印象比较深刻的节日。
【要点】1.你要介绍的节日是什么？
2.你和亲朋好友在那天是怎样庆祝这个节日的？
3.节日之后，你们的感触是什么？
【要求】1.短文必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实地名，校名和人名，词数80左右。
【参考词汇】realgar wine雄黄酒；Chinese mugwort艾蒿
a spice bag香包
假如你的外国朋友想了解中国的传统节日，请根据下面要点并结合自己的实际经历，写一篇短文向他介绍一个你以前度过的并且印象比较深刻的节日。
【要点】1.你要介绍的节日是什么？
2.你和亲朋好友在那天是怎样庆祝这个节日的？
3.节日之后，你们的感触是什么？
【要求】1.短文必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实地名，校名和人名，词数80左右。
【参考词汇】realgar wine雄黄酒；Chinese mugwort艾蒿
a spice bag香包
Let me tell you something about my favourite festival.
My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which has a long history. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth Chinese lunar month every year. It is a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet. On this day, we eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races.
We also drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort around the door and carry a spice bag with us.
What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race. I took part in the dragon boat race with my friend this year.
I also like to make zongzi.
The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit that everybody tries their best to win the race.
答案
One possible version
Let me tell you something about my favourite festival.
My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which has a long history. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth Chinese lunar month every year. It is a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet. On this day, we eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races. We also drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort around the door and carry a spice bag with us.
What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race. I took part in the dragon boat race with my friend this year. I also like to make zongzi. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit that everybody tries their best to win the race.
Let me tell you something about my favourite festival.
My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which has a long history. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth Chinese lunar month every year. It is a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet. On this day, we eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races. We also drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort around the door and carry a spice bag with us.
What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race. I took part in the dragon boat race with my friend this year. I also like to make zongzi. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit that everybody tries their best to win the race.
解析
【分析】写作时首先确定介绍的中国传统节日，此处选择端午节；再紧扣题目三个要点展开：1. 明确节日名称、时间及纪念意义；2. 列举节日当天的庆祝活动，结合自身经历（如参加龙舟赛）；3. 表达个人对节日的感触。同时需控制词数在80左右，不出现真实地名、校名、人名，适当运用参考词汇。
【解析】第一步，开篇点明要介绍的节日是端午节，说明其为中国重要传统节日，时间在农历五月初五，用于纪念诗人屈原；第二步，描述节日庆祝活动：吃粽子、赛龙舟、喝雄黄酒、挂艾蒿、带香包，结合自己参加龙舟赛的亲身经历；第三步，表达感触：从龙舟赛中体会到团队精神，感受到节日的特别意义。
【答案】One possible version
Let me tell you something about my favourite festival.
My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which has a long history. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth Chinese lunar month every year. It is a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet. On this day, we eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races. We also drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort around the door and carry a spice bag with us.
What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race. I took part in the dragon boat race with my friend this year. I also like to make zongzi. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit that everybody tries their best to win the race.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、中国传统节日英语表达
【点评】该短文紧扣题目要求，覆盖所有提示要点，结合个人经历，语言流畅自然，准确介绍了端午节的相关内容，符合词数要求，未出现真实信息，是一篇符合要求的应用文。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】第一步，开篇点明要介绍的节日是端午节，说明其为中国重要传统节日，时间在农历五月初五，用于纪念诗人屈原；第二步，描述节日庆祝活动：吃粽子、赛龙舟、喝雄黄酒、挂艾蒿、带香包，结合自己参加龙舟赛的亲身经历；第三步，表达感触：从龙舟赛中体会到团队精神，感受到节日的特别意义。
【答案】One possible version
Let me tell you something about my favourite festival.
My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which has a long history. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth Chinese lunar month every year. It is a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet. On this day, we eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races. We also drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort around the door and carry a spice bag with us.
What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race. I took part in the dragon boat race with my friend this year. I also like to make zongzi. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit that everybody tries their best to win the race.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、中国传统节日英语表达
【点评】该短文紧扣题目要求，覆盖所有提示要点，结合个人经历，语言流畅自然，准确介绍了端午节的相关内容，符合词数要求，未出现真实信息，是一篇符合要求的应用文。
【难度系数】0.3
