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地球上没有了动物，就如蓝天中没有了白云。某英文报正在举办以“保护野生动物”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Save wild animals”为题写一篇短文投稿，请从野生动物所面临的危险、我们为什么要保护野生动物以及如何保护野生动物三个方面进行阐述。
What animals are in danger?
pandas/ tigers/ wolves
Why do we have to protect them?
…(至少两点)
How do we protect them?
Not buy fur coats, make laws...(至少三点)
【要求】1.必须包括提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2.90词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
3.不得使用真实的姓名、校名、地名等。
Save wild animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of the wild animals are indanger.
What animals are in danger?
pandas/ tigers/ wolves
Why do we have to protect them?
…(至少两点)
How do we protect them?
Not buy fur coats, make laws...(至少三点)
【要求】1.必须包括提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2.90词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
3.不得使用真实的姓名、校名、地名等。
Save wild animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of the wild animals are indanger.
答案
One possible version
Save wild animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because they are our friends, but also because they can help keep a balance between humans and nature.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect wild animals.
Save wild animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because they are our friends, but also because they can help keep a balance between humans and nature.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect wild animals.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇以“Save wild animals”为主题的英语征文，需从三个指定方面（野生动物面临的危险、保护原因、保护方法）写作，必须包含提示的动物（熊猫、老虎、狼）及对应要求的信息。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，先阐述野生动物面临的危险，结合提示动物说明具体原因；2. 说明保护野生动物的至少两点原因；3. 提出至少三点保护措施，控制词数在90左右，避免真实信息，确保逻辑连贯、覆盖所有要求。
【解析】
首先，承接开头点明野生动物的危险：熊猫因竹林缩小失去栖息地和食物，狼生存空间减少，老虎被人类猎杀获取皮毛等；其次，说明保护原因：野生动物是人类的朋友，还能维持人与自然的生态平衡；最后，提出保护措施：不购买野生动物皮草、宣传保护的重要性、政府制定相关法律，确保内容符合要求，词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version
Save wild animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because they are our friends, but also because they can help keep a balance between humans and nature.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect wild animals.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、保护野生动物主题表达、英语段落组织
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有信息点，结构清晰（危险-原因-措施），逻辑连贯，语言简洁准确，符合90词左右的要求，是一篇符合题目标准的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇以“Save wild animals”为主题的英语征文，需从三个指定方面（野生动物面临的危险、保护原因、保护方法）写作，必须包含提示的动物（熊猫、老虎、狼）及对应要求的信息。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，先阐述野生动物面临的危险，结合提示动物说明具体原因；2. 说明保护野生动物的至少两点原因；3. 提出至少三点保护措施，控制词数在90左右，避免真实信息，确保逻辑连贯、覆盖所有要求。
【解析】
首先，承接开头点明野生动物的危险：熊猫因竹林缩小失去栖息地和食物，狼生存空间减少，老虎被人类猎杀获取皮毛等；其次，说明保护原因：野生动物是人类的朋友，还能维持人与自然的生态平衡；最后，提出保护措施：不购买野生动物皮草、宣传保护的重要性、政府制定相关法律，确保内容符合要求，词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version
Save wild animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because they are our friends, but also because they can help keep a balance between humans and nature.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect wild animals.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、保护野生动物主题表达、英语段落组织
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有信息点，结构清晰（危险-原因-措施），逻辑连贯，语言简洁准确，符合90词左右的要求，是一篇符合题目标准的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.5
