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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展题为“The Change Made Me ”的征文活动，请参考信息，积极投稿。
要求:1.补全标题,表格内容仅供参考,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;3.内容积极向上,100词左右。
成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展题为“The Change Made Me ”的征文活动，请参考信息，积极投稿。
要求:1.补全标题,表格内容仅供参考,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;3.内容积极向上,100词左右。
答案
One possible version:
The Change Made Me Better
There are many things in our lives that can help us to be better. In my opinion, my changes have made me better.
In the past years, I have grown taller than before and have made a lot of friends. I used to be weak because of my bad habits. After communicating with my teacher, I started to eat regularly every day and take exercise often, so I am strong now. What's more, I used to be so careless that I made many mistakes in my exams. My teacher advised me to check my answers carefully and develop good learning habits.
These good changes made me feel better and brave enough to face new challenges.
The Change Made Me Better
There are many things in our lives that can help us to be better. In my opinion, my changes have made me better.
In the past years, I have grown taller than before and have made a lot of friends. I used to be weak because of my bad habits. After communicating with my teacher, I started to eat regularly every day and take exercise often, so I am strong now. What's more, I used to be so careless that I made many mistakes in my exams. My teacher advised me to check my answers carefully and develop good learning habits.
These good changes made me feel better and brave enough to face new challenges.
解析
【分析】
本题要求完成英语征文，需先补全标题，再结合表格提示的“改变方向（如弱变强、粗心变细心）、故事内容（经历的事件）、感受”三个要点，创作一篇100词左右、内容积极向上且无真实信息的短文。解题思路：1.补全标题，参考示例选择“Better”；2.选取自身两个具体变化（如身体和学习习惯），说明变化的原因与过程；3.表达改变后的积极感受，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 补全标题为“The Change Made Me Better”；2. 开头点明主题，说明改变让自己变得更好；3. 具体举例：过去因不良习惯身体虚弱，经老师建议后规律饮食、锻炼，如今变得强壮；过去考试粗心常出错，经老师提醒养成检查习惯，减少错误；4. 结尾表达改变后的感受，变得更勇敢面对挑战，符合征文要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Change Made Me Better
There are many things in our lives that can help us to be better. In my opinion, my changes have made me better.
In the past years, I have grown taller than before and have made a lot of friends. I used to be weak because of my bad habits. After communicating with my teacher, I started to eat regularly every day and take exercise often, so I am strong now. What's more, I used to be so careless that I made many mistakes in my exams. My teacher advised me to check my answers carefully and develop good learning habits.
These good changes made me feel better and brave enough to face new challenges.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、补全标题、记叙文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，结合自身真实经历，内容具体充实，情感积极向上，语言流畅自然，符合字数要求，完美契合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求完成英语征文，需先补全标题，再结合表格提示的“改变方向（如弱变强、粗心变细心）、故事内容（经历的事件）、感受”三个要点，创作一篇100词左右、内容积极向上且无真实信息的短文。解题思路：1.补全标题，参考示例选择“Better”；2.选取自身两个具体变化（如身体和学习习惯），说明变化的原因与过程；3.表达改变后的积极感受，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 补全标题为“The Change Made Me Better”；2. 开头点明主题，说明改变让自己变得更好；3. 具体举例：过去因不良习惯身体虚弱，经老师建议后规律饮食、锻炼，如今变得强壮；过去考试粗心常出错，经老师提醒养成检查习惯，减少错误；4. 结尾表达改变后的感受，变得更勇敢面对挑战，符合征文要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Change Made Me Better
There are many things in our lives that can help us to be better. In my opinion, my changes have made me better.
In the past years, I have grown taller than before and have made a lot of friends. I used to be weak because of my bad habits. After communicating with my teacher, I started to eat regularly every day and take exercise often, so I am strong now. What's more, I used to be so careless that I made many mistakes in my exams. My teacher advised me to check my answers carefully and develop good learning habits.
These good changes made me feel better and brave enough to face new challenges.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、补全标题、记叙文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，结合自身真实经历，内容具体充实，情感积极向上，语言流畅自然，符合字数要求，完美契合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
