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Ⅵ.书面表达
音乐将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每当听着音乐，我们就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷魅力！音乐是世界上最美的语言！请你以“Music Makes Me
要求:1.请补全标题；
2.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息；
3.词数:80—100。
Music Makes Me
音乐将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每当听着音乐，我们就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷魅力！音乐是世界上最美的语言！请你以“Music Makes Me
Free
”为题写一篇英语短文。要求:1.请补全标题；
2.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息；
3.词数:80—100。
Music Makes Me
Free
答案
One possible version:
Music Makes Me Free
Music is the most beautiful language in the world. It has the magic to take away all my worries and bring me into a wonderful world.
Whenever I feel tired or upset, I listen to my favourite songs. The sweet melodies seem to hug me gently, and all the sadness disappears. I feel like a bird flying freely in the sky—nothing can hold me back.
Music also gives me courage. It encourages me to face difficulties and never give up. It makes me believe that tomorrow will be better.
Music makes me free, and I always love it!
Music Makes Me Free
Music is the most beautiful language in the world. It has the magic to take away all my worries and bring me into a wonderful world.
Whenever I feel tired or upset, I listen to my favourite songs. The sweet melodies seem to hug me gently, and all the sadness disappears. I feel like a bird flying freely in the sky—nothing can hold me back.
Music also gives me courage. It encourages me to face difficulties and never give up. It makes me believe that tomorrow will be better.
Music makes me free, and I always love it!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达，需先补全标题（如“Free”），写作思路为：1. 开头点明音乐是世界最美语言，引出音乐对自身的积极影响；2. 中间分两点阐述：一是疲惫/沮丧时听音乐能带走烦恼，带来自由的感受；二是音乐给予勇气面对困难；3. 结尾呼应主题，表达对音乐的热爱。需注意控制词数80-100，不出现真实人名、校名等信息。
【解析】
1. 补全标题：选择“Free”，紧扣音乐带来的自由感受；2. 开头：“Music is the most beautiful language in the world. It has the magic to take away all my worries and bring me into a wonderful world.” 点题并引出音乐的作用；3. 中间：① 描述疲惫或沮丧时听音乐的感受，如“The sweet melodies seem to hug me gently, and all the sadness disappears. I feel like a bird flying freely in the sky—nothing can hold me back.”；② 说明音乐给予勇气，如“Music also gives me courage. It encourages me to face difficulties and never give up. It makes me believe that tomorrow will be better.”；4. 结尾：“Music makes me free, and I always love it!” 总结呼应主题，控制词数符合要求，无违规信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Music Makes Me Free
Music is the most beautiful language in the world. It has the magic to take away all my worries and bring me into a wonderful world.
Whenever I feel tired or upset, I listen to my favourite songs. The sweet melodies seem to hug me gently, and all the sadness disappears. I feel like a bird flying freely in the sky—nothing can hold me back.
Music also gives me courage. It encourages me to face difficulties and never give up. It makes me believe that tomorrow will be better.
Music makes me free, and I always love it!
【知识点】
英语话题写作；英语书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“Music Makes Me Free”主题，结构清晰，层次分明，用词恰当，准确表达了音乐对自身的积极影响，符合题目所有要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语话题书面表达，需先补全标题（如“Free”），写作思路为：1. 开头点明音乐是世界最美语言，引出音乐对自身的积极影响；2. 中间分两点阐述：一是疲惫/沮丧时听音乐能带走烦恼，带来自由的感受；二是音乐给予勇气面对困难；3. 结尾呼应主题，表达对音乐的热爱。需注意控制词数80-100，不出现真实人名、校名等信息。
【解析】
1. 补全标题：选择“Free”，紧扣音乐带来的自由感受；2. 开头：“Music is the most beautiful language in the world. It has the magic to take away all my worries and bring me into a wonderful world.” 点题并引出音乐的作用；3. 中间：① 描述疲惫或沮丧时听音乐的感受，如“The sweet melodies seem to hug me gently, and all the sadness disappears. I feel like a bird flying freely in the sky—nothing can hold me back.”；② 说明音乐给予勇气，如“Music also gives me courage. It encourages me to face difficulties and never give up. It makes me believe that tomorrow will be better.”；4. 结尾：“Music makes me free, and I always love it!” 总结呼应主题，控制词数符合要求，无违规信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Music Makes Me Free
Music is the most beautiful language in the world. It has the magic to take away all my worries and bring me into a wonderful world.
Whenever I feel tired or upset, I listen to my favourite songs. The sweet melodies seem to hug me gently, and all the sadness disappears. I feel like a bird flying freely in the sky—nothing can hold me back.
Music also gives me courage. It encourages me to face difficulties and never give up. It makes me believe that tomorrow will be better.
Music makes me free, and I always love it!
【知识点】
英语话题写作；英语书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“Music Makes Me Free”主题，结构清晰，层次分明，用词恰当，准确表达了音乐对自身的积极影响，符合题目所有要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
