九、书面表达
阳光中学正在举行“我的朋友我来谈”活动。请你根据下面表格中提供的信息,写一篇短文介绍你和你最好的朋友 Nancy 的不同之处和相同之处。
要求:
1. 包括表格中提及的所有内容,语句通顺,条理清楚;
2. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数),可适当发挥。

Nancy is my best friend. We have both similarities and differences.
阳光中学正在举行“我的朋友我来谈”活动。请你根据下面表格中提供的信息,写一篇短文介绍你和你最好的朋友 Nancy 的不同之处和相同之处。
要求:
1. 包括表格中提及的所有内容,语句通顺,条理清楚;
2. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数),可适当发挥。
Nancy is my best friend. We have both similarities and differences.
答案
One possible version:
Nancy is my best friend. We have both similarities and differences.
Nancy is much taller and more outgoing than me. She has a great sense of humour and always makes everyone laugh. She is also better at singing and dancing. However, I love playing the guitar and I am better at playing badminton.
Nancy and I are similar in some ways. We both enjoy sports and work hard at school, so we can get good grades in all subjects. We also love reading and usually go to the library together on weekends.
In fact, I don't really care if my friends are similar to or different from me. I think differences make our friendship stronger. We should respect each other's differences and we are always there to help each other by lending a hand.
Nancy is my best friend. We have both similarities and differences.
Nancy is much taller and more outgoing than me. She has a great sense of humour and always makes everyone laugh. She is also better at singing and dancing. However, I love playing the guitar and I am better at playing badminton.
Nancy and I are similar in some ways. We both enjoy sports and work hard at school, so we can get good grades in all subjects. We also love reading and usually go to the library together on weekends.
In fact, I don't really care if my friends are similar to or different from me. I think differences make our friendship stronger. We should respect each other's differences and we are always there to help each other by lending a hand.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求介绍与朋友Nancy的异同并表达对朋友间异同的看法。解题思路:1. 承接给定开头,先写两人的不同点,需涵盖表格中Nancy的3个不同点和“我”的2个不同点,注意使用比较级体现对比;2. 再写相同点,完整覆盖表格中3个相同点;3. 最后表达对朋友异同的看法,至少两点,符合要求,同时保证语句通顺、词数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头已给出,承接后先阐述不同点:Nancy比我高得多、更外向,有幽默感爱讲笑话,擅长唱歌跳舞;我喜欢弹吉他,更擅长打羽毛球。2. 接着写相同点:两人都喜欢运动,学习努力、各门功课好,喜欢阅读,周末常一起去图书馆。3. 最后表达看法:不在乎朋友与自己是否相同,差异能让友谊更牢固,应尊重彼此差异、互相帮助。
【答案】
One possible version:
Nancy is my best friend. We have both similarities and differences.
Nancy is much taller and more outgoing than me. She has a great sense of humour and always makes everyone laugh. She is also better at singing and dancing. However, I love playing the guitar and I am better at playing badminton.
Nancy and I are similar in some ways. We both enjoy sports and work hard at school, so we can get good grades in all subjects. We also love reading and usually go to the library together on weekends.
In fact, I don't really care if my friends are similar to or different from me. I think differences make our friendship stronger. We should respect each other's differences and we are always there to help each other by lending a hand.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、形容词比较级应用、朋友话题写作
【点评】
本题为初中英语常规话题书面表达题,结合表格信息考查学生的信息整合与语言表达能力,贴近学生生活,要求涵盖所有要点,语句连贯,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题,要求介绍与朋友Nancy的异同并表达对朋友间异同的看法。解题思路:1. 承接给定开头,先写两人的不同点,需涵盖表格中Nancy的3个不同点和“我”的2个不同点,注意使用比较级体现对比;2. 再写相同点,完整覆盖表格中3个相同点;3. 最后表达对朋友异同的看法,至少两点,符合要求,同时保证语句通顺、词数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头已给出,承接后先阐述不同点:Nancy比我高得多、更外向,有幽默感爱讲笑话,擅长唱歌跳舞;我喜欢弹吉他,更擅长打羽毛球。2. 接着写相同点:两人都喜欢运动,学习努力、各门功课好,喜欢阅读,周末常一起去图书馆。3. 最后表达看法:不在乎朋友与自己是否相同,差异能让友谊更牢固,应尊重彼此差异、互相帮助。
【答案】
One possible version:
Nancy is my best friend. We have both similarities and differences.
Nancy is much taller and more outgoing than me. She has a great sense of humour and always makes everyone laugh. She is also better at singing and dancing. However, I love playing the guitar and I am better at playing badminton.
Nancy and I are similar in some ways. We both enjoy sports and work hard at school, so we can get good grades in all subjects. We also love reading and usually go to the library together on weekends.
In fact, I don't really care if my friends are similar to or different from me. I think differences make our friendship stronger. We should respect each other's differences and we are always there to help each other by lending a hand.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、形容词比较级应用、朋友话题写作
【点评】
本题为初中英语常规话题书面表达题,结合表格信息考查学生的信息整合与语言表达能力,贴近学生生活,要求涵盖所有要点,语句连贯,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
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