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(二)书面表达(本题15分)
请根据要求完成短文写作。
假如你是李华,近期你校将开展防震演练活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,给你校校刊英语专栏写一封关于在地震中如何保护自己的建议信,加强同学们的灾难应对能力。
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)不能照抄原文;
(3)语句连贯,词数70左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear boys and girls,
Many people get hurt or even die in the earthquake every year. So it's very important to know how to protect yourself in the earthquake. Here are some suggestions for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
请根据要求完成短文写作。
假如你是李华,近期你校将开展防震演练活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,给你校校刊英语专栏写一封关于在地震中如何保护自己的建议信,加强同学们的灾难应对能力。
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)不能照抄原文;
(3)语句连贯,词数70左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear boys and girls,
Many people get hurt or even die in the earthquake every year. So it's very important to know how to protect yourself in the earthquake. Here are some suggestions for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
(二）One possible version:
When an earthquake happens, if you are in the classroom, you should stay under the desk and protect your head with your schoolbag or your arms. Stay away from windows or anything that may fall on you. As soon as you are safe to move, walk down the stairs to the playground in order. You shouldn't get close to teaching buildings or stand under trees. You shouldn't stand near the fallen power poles either. When it is safe to move around, try to help others in need.
In a word, the most important thing is to stay calm in an earthquake. I hope the suggestions above may help you.
When an earthquake happens, if you are in the classroom, you should stay under the desk and protect your head with your schoolbag or your arms. Stay away from windows or anything that may fall on you. As soon as you are safe to move, walk down the stairs to the playground in order. You shouldn't get close to teaching buildings or stand under trees. You shouldn't stand near the fallen power poles either. When it is safe to move around, try to help others in need.
In a word, the most important thing is to stay calm in an earthquake. I hope the suggestions above may help you.
解析
【解析】
这是一篇应用文类建议信写作，写作步骤如下：
1. 紧扣主题：围绕地震中自我保护的核心要求，结合思维导图的三个模块展开内容。
2. 内容排布：
① 先说明身处教室时的正确做法：躲在书桌下方，用书包或手臂护住头部，远离窗户等易坠落的物品，确认安全后有序沿楼梯撤离到操场。
② 再点明地震中的禁忌行为：不要靠近教学楼、不要站在树下，也不要靠近倒地的电线杆。
③ 最后补充安全后可适当帮扶他人，收尾点明地震中保持冷静是最重要的原则，呼应开头的倡议。
3. 控制词数：内容贴合要求，总词数符合70左右的规定，衔接自然，不生硬照搬提示内容。
【答案】
When an earthquake happens, if you are in the classroom, you should stay under the desk and protect your head with your schoolbag or your arms. Stay away from windows or anything that may fall on you. As soon as you are safe to move, walk down the stairs to the playground in order. You shouldn't get close to teaching buildings or stand under trees. You shouldn't stand near the fallen power poles either. When it is safe to move around, try to help others in need.
In a word, the most important thing is to stay calm in an earthquake. I hope the suggestions above may help you.
【知识点】
英语建议信写作
地震安全常识
英语语句衔接
【点评】
本题属于校园主题的应用文写作，难度适中，要求学生结合提示要点组织语言，既考查基础的英语表达能力，也引导学生掌握实用的防灾知识，需要注意内容覆盖所有提示模块，同时保证语句通顺、词数符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇应用文类建议信写作，写作步骤如下：
1. 紧扣主题：围绕地震中自我保护的核心要求，结合思维导图的三个模块展开内容。
2. 内容排布：
① 先说明身处教室时的正确做法：躲在书桌下方，用书包或手臂护住头部，远离窗户等易坠落的物品，确认安全后有序沿楼梯撤离到操场。
② 再点明地震中的禁忌行为：不要靠近教学楼、不要站在树下，也不要靠近倒地的电线杆。
③ 最后补充安全后可适当帮扶他人，收尾点明地震中保持冷静是最重要的原则，呼应开头的倡议。
3. 控制词数：内容贴合要求，总词数符合70左右的规定，衔接自然，不生硬照搬提示内容。
【答案】
When an earthquake happens, if you are in the classroom, you should stay under the desk and protect your head with your schoolbag or your arms. Stay away from windows or anything that may fall on you. As soon as you are safe to move, walk down the stairs to the playground in order. You shouldn't get close to teaching buildings or stand under trees. You shouldn't stand near the fallen power poles either. When it is safe to move around, try to help others in need.
In a word, the most important thing is to stay calm in an earthquake. I hope the suggestions above may help you.
【知识点】
英语建议信写作
地震安全常识
英语语句衔接
【点评】
本题属于校园主题的应用文写作，难度适中，要求学生结合提示要点组织语言，既考查基础的英语表达能力，也引导学生掌握实用的防灾知识，需要注意内容覆盖所有提示模块，同时保证语句通顺、词数符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
