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七、书面表达(满分25分)
学校英语俱乐部将开展以“My Happiness”为题的征文评比活动。请你根据以下内容,写一篇短文参赛。
Happiness comes from different things in our lives. Everyone has their own ideas about what makes them happy.
Some students think that happiness comes from staying with their family and friends；some students think that happiness comes from playing outside and enjoying nature；and other students think that happiness comes from taking care of pets and playing with them；some students think happiness comes from the world of fantastic stories or Chinese folk art.
Please write an article with the title “My Happiness”，describe one of your happy moments and talk about how you feel.
注意:1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;3. 根据所给提示,选择一个观点,并进行适当发挥;4. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Happiness
What's happiness? Different people have different answers.
学校英语俱乐部将开展以“My Happiness”为题的征文评比活动。请你根据以下内容,写一篇短文参赛。
Happiness comes from different things in our lives. Everyone has their own ideas about what makes them happy.
Some students think that happiness comes from staying with their family and friends；some students think that happiness comes from playing outside and enjoying nature；and other students think that happiness comes from taking care of pets and playing with them；some students think happiness comes from the world of fantastic stories or Chinese folk art.
Please write an article with the title “My Happiness”，describe one of your happy moments and talk about how you feel.
注意:1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;3. 根据所给提示,选择一个观点,并进行适当发挥;4. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Happiness
What's happiness? Different people have different answers.
答案
My Happiness
What's happiness? Different people have different answers.
For me, happiness comes from my parents' love. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a maths test. I was afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, and they said to me, "It doesn't matter, my child. Remember we'll always be beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up." I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents' love. I want to be a good child of my parents.
What's happiness? Different people have different answers.
For me, happiness comes from my parents' love. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a maths test. I was afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, and they said to me, "It doesn't matter, my child. Remember we'll always be beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up." I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents' love. I want to be a good child of my parents.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“My Happiness”为题参赛，需围绕“幸福来自生活中不同事物”的提示，选择一个幸福来源，描述具体的幸福时刻并表达自身感受。解题思路：① 承接给定开头，明确自身的幸福来源（如父母的爱）；② 选取真实具体的生活事例支撑观点，体现幸福的瞬间；③ 抒发个人感受，呼应主题，确保语言通顺、词数符合要求，不出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【解析】
范文严格遵循题目要求：① 开头承接给定句，点明幸福来源于父母的爱；② 选取“数学考试失利后父母鼓励”的具体事例，细节真实，情感自然；③ 结尾表达对父母之爱的感悟，升华主题，语言流畅，词数约100，符合书面表达的各项要求。
【答案】
My Happiness
What's happiness? Different people have different answers.
For me, happiness comes from my parents' love. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a maths test. I was afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, and they said to me, "It doesn't matter, my child. Remember we'll always be beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up." I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents' love. I want to be a good child of my parents.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、主题式英语写作
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣主题，选取贴近学生生活的父母之爱作为幸福来源，事例具体生动，情感真挚自然，结构清晰，语言通顺，符合题目对内容、语言、词数的所有要求，是一篇优秀的参赛短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“My Happiness”为题参赛，需围绕“幸福来自生活中不同事物”的提示，选择一个幸福来源，描述具体的幸福时刻并表达自身感受。解题思路：① 承接给定开头，明确自身的幸福来源（如父母的爱）；② 选取真实具体的生活事例支撑观点，体现幸福的瞬间；③ 抒发个人感受，呼应主题，确保语言通顺、词数符合要求，不出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【解析】
范文严格遵循题目要求：① 开头承接给定句，点明幸福来源于父母的爱；② 选取“数学考试失利后父母鼓励”的具体事例，细节真实，情感自然；③ 结尾表达对父母之爱的感悟，升华主题，语言流畅，词数约100，符合书面表达的各项要求。
【答案】
My Happiness
What's happiness? Different people have different answers.
For me, happiness comes from my parents' love. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a maths test. I was afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, and they said to me, "It doesn't matter, my child. Remember we'll always be beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up." I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents' love. I want to be a good child of my parents.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、主题式英语写作
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣主题，选取贴近学生生活的父母之爱作为幸福来源，事例具体生动，情感真挚自然，结构清晰，语言通顺，符合题目对内容、语言、词数的所有要求，是一篇优秀的参赛短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
