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假如你是《美食天下》节目的主持人，请你按照下面的图示，介绍一下西红柿炒鸡蛋的做法。词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
提示:1. 所需原料为西红柿、鸡蛋各两个；少许食用油、盐和糖；2. 烹饪时间约3分钟。
参考词汇:pan 平底锅；scrambled eggs with tomatoes 西红柿炒鸡蛋
Ladies and gentlemen,
Glad to meet you here!
思路点拨
1. 审体裁:本文是一篇介绍烹饪的应用文。
2. 审内容:引出话题、烹饪方法、烹饪步骤、结束语。
3. 审时态:一般现在时为主。
4. 审篇幅:80词左右。第一段引出话题；第二段具体介绍烹饪方法，根据图示及内容提示可知，第一步应将鸡蛋打匀，第二步应将西红柿切块，第三步应在热锅中倒入油，稍等片刻，将鸡蛋倒入锅中炒熟，再加入西红柿，炒约3分钟，最后加入适量的盐和糖提味，最后出锅；第三段应写出节目的结束语。
范文欣赏
Ladies and gentlemen,
Glad to meet you here! Today, let me tell you how to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes—a delicious dish.
You need two eggs, two tomatoes, some oil, sugar and salt. Now, let's practise
假如你是《美食天下》节目的主持人，请你按照下面的图示，介绍一下西红柿炒鸡蛋的做法。词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
提示:1. 所需原料为西红柿、鸡蛋各两个；少许食用油、盐和糖；2. 烹饪时间约3分钟。
参考词汇:pan 平底锅；scrambled eggs with tomatoes 西红柿炒鸡蛋
Ladies and gentlemen,
Glad to meet you here!
思路点拨
1. 审体裁:本文是一篇介绍烹饪的应用文。
2. 审内容:引出话题、烹饪方法、烹饪步骤、结束语。
3. 审时态:一般现在时为主。
4. 审篇幅:80词左右。第一段引出话题；第二段具体介绍烹饪方法，根据图示及内容提示可知，第一步应将鸡蛋打匀，第二步应将西红柿切块，第三步应在热锅中倒入油，稍等片刻，将鸡蛋倒入锅中炒熟，再加入西红柿，炒约3分钟，最后加入适量的盐和糖提味，最后出锅；第三段应写出节目的结束语。
范文欣赏
Ladies and gentlemen,
Glad to meet you here! Today, let me tell you how to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes—a delicious dish.
You need two eggs, two tomatoes, some oil, sugar and salt. Now, let's practise
答案
Today, let me tell you how to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes—a delicious dish.
You need two eggs, two tomatoes, some oil, sugar and salt. Now let's make it together. First, break the eggs into a bowl and stir them well. Next, cut the tomatoes into small pieces. Then pour some oil into the hot pan. Fry the eggs first, then add tomatoes and cook for 3 minutes. Finally, add a little salt and sugar. Now the dish is ready. It's easy, you can have a try at home!
You need two eggs, two tomatoes, some oil, sugar and salt. Now let's make it together. First, break the eggs into a bowl and stir them well. Next, cut the tomatoes into small pieces. Then pour some oil into the hot pan. Fry the eggs first, then add tomatoes and cook for 3 minutes. Finally, add a little salt and sugar. Now the dish is ready. It's easy, you can have a try at home!
解析
本题要求写一篇介绍西红柿炒鸡蛋做法的说明文，以一般现在时为核心时态，写作需要覆盖全部提示要点：1. 先点明所需食材：2个鸡蛋、2个西红柿，以及少量食用油、盐和糖；2. 按照图示顺序清晰描述操作步骤：先把鸡蛋打入碗中搅匀，再将西红柿切块，热油后先倒入鸡蛋炒熟，再加入西红柿翻炒约3分钟，最后加盐和糖调味即可出锅；3. 补充简短的结束语，总词数控制在80左右，语言符合八年级英语表达水平，逻辑通顺、步骤清晰即可。
together. First, you should mix the two eggs together. Next, cut up the tomatoes. Then, pour some oil into the hot pan. After a while, put the eggs in the pan, and then the tomatoes. Cook them for about three minutes. Finally, add a little salt and sugar. Now you are able to have it.
Thanks for joining us. See you next time!
巩固练习
重阳节(The Double Ninth Festival)快到了,Andy 给爷爷奶奶制作了一张卡片。请你根据下面的要点,介绍一下卡片的制作过程。
要求:1. 覆盖要点,内容充实,条理清楚;2. 词数80 左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
The Double Ninth Festival is coming. Andy made a card for his grandparents yesterday.
Thanks for joining us. See you next time!
巩固练习
重阳节(The Double Ninth Festival)快到了,Andy 给爷爷奶奶制作了一张卡片。请你根据下面的要点,介绍一下卡片的制作过程。
要求:1. 覆盖要点,内容充实,条理清楚;2. 词数80 左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
The Double Ninth Festival is coming. Andy made a card for his grandparents yesterday.
First of all, Andy made a card out of the thick paper. Then he cut out some shapes of flowers with scissors.
After that, he painted the flowers yellow. They looked nice. Then, he stuck the flowers to the card with glue.
Finally, he wrote his best wishes to his grandparents on the card.
Andy felt very happy when the card was finished. Now he can't wait to give the card to his grandparents. He hopes they will like it.
答案
One possible version:
The Double Ninth Festival is coming. Andy made a card for his grandparents yesterday.
First of all, Andy made a card out of the thick paper. Then he cut out some shapes of flowers with scissors. After that, he painted the flowers yellow. They looked nice. Then, he stuck the flowers to the card with glue. Finally, he wrote his best wishes to his grandparents on the card.
Andy felt very happy when the card was finished. Now he can't wait to give the card to his grandparents. He hopes they will like it.
The Double Ninth Festival is coming. Andy made a card for his grandparents yesterday.
First of all, Andy made a card out of the thick paper. Then he cut out some shapes of flowers with scissors. After that, he painted the flowers yellow. They looked nice. Then, he stuck the flowers to the card with glue. Finally, he wrote his best wishes to his grandparents on the card.
Andy felt very happy when the card was finished. Now he can't wait to give the card to his grandparents. He hopes they will like it.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇流程说明类的英语小作文，解题时首先要明确核心要求：围绕给爷爷奶奶制作重阳节贺卡的过程展开，条理清晰，词数80左右。首先第一步先确定时态：动作发生在昨天，全程用一般过去时；第二步回忆这类步骤描述类作文的常用过渡词，比如first of all、then、after that、finally，和题干前文给出的炒蛋步骤的逻辑完全一致，可以直接迁移使用；第三步梳理做贺卡的合理先后顺序：先准备卡纸做基底，再剪装饰造型，接着涂色、粘贴，最后写祝福，最后补充完成后的心情和对长辈的心意，就能做到内容充实逻辑通顺，符合题目所有要求。
【解析】
1. 时态把控：所有描述制作过程的动词都要使用一般过去式，注意不规则动词的变形，比如make变为made，cut的过去式还是cut，避免时态错误。
2. 逻辑串联：用表示先后顺序的过渡词串联每一个制作步骤，让文章条理一目了然，符合题干“条理清楚”的要求。
3. 内容填充：按照手工制作的正常逻辑依次展开内容：首先用厚卡纸做出贺卡基底，接着用剪刀剪出花朵造型，之后给花朵涂上颜色，再用胶水把装饰花粘到贺卡上，最后在贺卡上写下给爷爷奶奶的美好祝愿，最后补充完成贺卡后的开心心情和想要送给长辈的期待，内容饱满贴合主题。
4. 篇幅控制：整体内容词数在80左右，不需要额外添加无关内容，符合题干词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Double Ninth Festival is coming. Andy made a card for his grandparents yesterday.
First of all, Andy made a card out of the thick paper. Then he cut out some shapes of flowers with scissors. After that, he painted the flowers yellow. They looked nice. Then, he stuck the flowers to the card with glue. Finally, he wrote his best wishes to his grandparents on the card.
Andy felt very happy when the card was finished. Now he can't wait to give the card to his grandparents. He hopes they will like it.
【知识点】
一般过去时，顺序过渡词，说明类写作
【点评】
本题属于应用类小写作，引导学生将前文学习的步骤描述逻辑迁移到手工制作场景中，既考察了基础时态的掌握，也锻炼了学生的逻辑表达能力，参考范文步骤完整清晰，情感贴合重阳节敬老的主题，语法准确，完全符合题干的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇流程说明类的英语小作文，解题时首先要明确核心要求：围绕给爷爷奶奶制作重阳节贺卡的过程展开，条理清晰，词数80左右。首先第一步先确定时态：动作发生在昨天，全程用一般过去时；第二步回忆这类步骤描述类作文的常用过渡词，比如first of all、then、after that、finally，和题干前文给出的炒蛋步骤的逻辑完全一致，可以直接迁移使用；第三步梳理做贺卡的合理先后顺序：先准备卡纸做基底，再剪装饰造型，接着涂色、粘贴，最后写祝福，最后补充完成后的心情和对长辈的心意，就能做到内容充实逻辑通顺，符合题目所有要求。
【解析】
1. 时态把控：所有描述制作过程的动词都要使用一般过去式，注意不规则动词的变形，比如make变为made，cut的过去式还是cut，避免时态错误。
2. 逻辑串联：用表示先后顺序的过渡词串联每一个制作步骤，让文章条理一目了然，符合题干“条理清楚”的要求。
3. 内容填充：按照手工制作的正常逻辑依次展开内容：首先用厚卡纸做出贺卡基底，接着用剪刀剪出花朵造型，之后给花朵涂上颜色，再用胶水把装饰花粘到贺卡上，最后在贺卡上写下给爷爷奶奶的美好祝愿，最后补充完成贺卡后的开心心情和想要送给长辈的期待，内容饱满贴合主题。
4. 篇幅控制：整体内容词数在80左右，不需要额外添加无关内容，符合题干词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Double Ninth Festival is coming. Andy made a card for his grandparents yesterday.
First of all, Andy made a card out of the thick paper. Then he cut out some shapes of flowers with scissors. After that, he painted the flowers yellow. They looked nice. Then, he stuck the flowers to the card with glue. Finally, he wrote his best wishes to his grandparents on the card.
Andy felt very happy when the card was finished. Now he can't wait to give the card to his grandparents. He hopes they will like it.
【知识点】
一般过去时，顺序过渡词，说明类写作
【点评】
本题属于应用类小写作，引导学生将前文学习的步骤描述逻辑迁移到手工制作场景中，既考察了基础时态的掌握，也锻炼了学生的逻辑表达能力，参考范文步骤完整清晰，情感贴合重阳节敬老的主题，语法准确，完全符合题干的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
