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Ⅴ. 书面表达
本周是你校的健康周,你班举行了以“A Health Problem I had”为主题的班会。请你根据以下信息,结合自己的经历,用英语写一篇发言稿,介绍你曾经遇到过的一个健康问题(如感冒、头痛、胃痛等)。
写作提示:1. What was the matter with you?
2. How did it happen?
3. What did you do to deal with it?
4. What have you learned from this experience?
写作要求:1. 文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数 100 左右(已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Good morning, everyone.
Thank you for listening.
本周是你校的健康周,你班举行了以“A Health Problem I had”为主题的班会。请你根据以下信息,结合自己的经历,用英语写一篇发言稿,介绍你曾经遇到过的一个健康问题(如感冒、头痛、胃痛等)。
写作提示:1. What was the matter with you?
2. How did it happen?
3. What did you do to deal with it?
4. What have you learned from this experience?
写作要求:1. 文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数 100 左右(已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Good morning, everyone.
I once had a bad headache. It happened because I often stayed up late to play on my phone and didn't get enough rest. As a result, I felt terrible and weak, and I couldn't listen to teachers carefully or study well at school.
My mother was worried about me and took me to see a doctor. The doctor asked me to sleep early and take a good rest every day. I followed his advice and stopped staying up late. Soon I felt much better and became energetic again.
From this experience, I have learned that health is the most important thing.
We should form good living habits to keep healthy and study better.
Thank you for listening.
答案
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone.
I once had a bad headache. It happened because I often stayed up late to play on my phone and didn't get enough rest. As a result, I felt terrible and weak, and I couldn't listen to teachers carefully or study well at school.
My mother was worried about me and took me to see a doctor. The doctor asked me to sleep early and take a good rest every day. I followed his advice and stopped staying up late. Soon I felt much better and became energetic again.
From this experience, I have learned that health is the most important thing. We should form good living habits to keep healthy and study better.
Thank you for listening.
Good morning, everyone.
I once had a bad headache. It happened because I often stayed up late to play on my phone and didn't get enough rest. As a result, I felt terrible and weak, and I couldn't listen to teachers carefully or study well at school.
My mother was worried about me and took me to see a doctor. The doctor asked me to sleep early and take a good rest every day. I followed his advice and stopped staying up late. Soon I felt much better and became energetic again.
From this experience, I have learned that health is the most important thing. We should form good living habits to keep healthy and study better.
Thank you for listening.
解析
【分析】
本次写作是英语发言稿，主题为“A Health Problem I had”，需紧扣写作提示的4个核心要点：说明自身遇到的健康问题、问题产生的原因、应对该问题的措施、从经历中获得的感悟。写作时要遵循发言稿的格式，开头问候、结尾致谢，不得出现真实姓名和学校，控制词数100左右，适当发挥让内容连贯自然。
【解析】
首先以“Good morning, everyone.”开启发言稿；接着点明健康问题是头痛，说明原因是经常熬夜玩手机、缺乏休息；然后讲述应对措施：妈妈带自己看医生，遵医嘱早睡休息、改掉熬夜习惯；最后点明感悟：健康最重要，要养成良好生活习惯。内容需覆盖所有提示点，语言符合初中英语水平，结构清晰。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone.
I once had a bad headache. It happened because I often stayed up late to play on my phone and didn't get enough rest. As a result, I felt terrible and weak, and I couldn't listen to teachers carefully or study well at school.
My mother was worried about me and took me to see a doctor. The doctor asked me to sleep early and take a good rest every day. I followed his advice and stopped staying up late. Soon I felt much better and became energetic again.
From this experience, I have learned that health is the most important thing. We should form good living habits to keep healthy and study better.
Thank you for listening.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有写作提示要点，结构清晰，符合发言稿格式，语言流畅自然，传递了正确的健康观念，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作是英语发言稿，主题为“A Health Problem I had”，需紧扣写作提示的4个核心要点：说明自身遇到的健康问题、问题产生的原因、应对该问题的措施、从经历中获得的感悟。写作时要遵循发言稿的格式，开头问候、结尾致谢，不得出现真实姓名和学校，控制词数100左右，适当发挥让内容连贯自然。
【解析】
首先以“Good morning, everyone.”开启发言稿；接着点明健康问题是头痛，说明原因是经常熬夜玩手机、缺乏休息；然后讲述应对措施：妈妈带自己看医生，遵医嘱早睡休息、改掉熬夜习惯；最后点明感悟：健康最重要，要养成良好生活习惯。内容需覆盖所有提示点，语言符合初中英语水平，结构清晰。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone.
I once had a bad headache. It happened because I often stayed up late to play on my phone and didn't get enough rest. As a result, I felt terrible and weak, and I couldn't listen to teachers carefully or study well at school.
My mother was worried about me and took me to see a doctor. The doctor asked me to sleep early and take a good rest every day. I followed his advice and stopped staying up late. Soon I felt much better and became energetic again.
From this experience, I have learned that health is the most important thing. We should form good living habits to keep healthy and study better.
Thank you for listening.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有写作提示要点，结构清晰，符合发言稿格式，语言流畅自然，传递了正确的健康观念，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
