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六、(2025·盐城模拟改编) 书面表达。
假如你是王安，你在学完《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》后，晚上做了一个神奇的梦；梦中内容见下表。请你根据表中的要点，写一篇 80 词以上的短文，向你的同学讲述一下这个梦。
2. 突然，一匹马对你喊道：“来这儿！”；
Last night, I had a really interesting and strange dream. In the dream,
What a wonderful dream!
假如你是王安，你在学完《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》后，晚上做了一个神奇的梦；梦中内容见下表。请你根据表中的要点，写一篇 80 词以上的短文，向你的同学讲述一下这个梦。
2. 突然，一匹马对你喊道：“来这儿！”；
Last night, I had a really interesting and strange dream. In the dream,
I met a tiger when I walked
through the forest. Then the tiger started to run after me and I didn't know what to do. Suddenly a horse shouted, "Come here!" I followed the horse and went to a river. The horse told me to drink the water in the river. After that, I could run as fast as the horse. The tiger tried to catch me but I ran too fast. At last, I got away from the tiger.
What a wonderful dream!
答案
六、One possible version:
Last night, I had a really interesting and strange dream. In the dream, I met a tiger when I walked
through the forest. Then the tiger started to run after me and I didn't know what to do. Suddenly a horse shouted, "Come here!" I followed the horse and went to a river. The horse told me to drink the water in the river. After that, I could run as fast as the horse. The tiger tried to catch me but I ran too fast. At last, I got away from the tiger.
What a wonderful dream!
Last night, I had a really interesting and strange dream. In the dream, I met a tiger when I walked
through the forest. Then the tiger started to run after me and I didn't know what to do. Suddenly a horse shouted, "Come here!" I followed the horse and went to a river. The horse told me to drink the water in the river. After that, I could run as fast as the horse. The tiger tried to catch me but I ran too fast. At last, I got away from the tiger.
What a wonderful dream!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题我们可以按清晰的思路完成写作：首先明确这是第一人称的叙事类记叙文，讲述梦境故事，全文统一使用一般过去时；接着对照表格把所有给定的情节要点逐一梳理，避免遗漏：开端是穿越森林看见老虎，中途三个情节分别是老虎追赶自己不知所措、马呼喊自己过去、跟随马到河边后马让自己喝河水；最后按照要求发挥想象，补充2-3句贴合《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》奇幻风格的合理结局，再用then、suddenly、at last这类衔接词把所有内容串联起来，保证字数达到80词以上即可。
【解析】
写作分步完成：
1. 承接题干给出的开头句，先交代故事开端：说明自己穿越森林时偶遇老虎，紧接着老虎开始追赶自己，自己慌乱无措，完成开篇情节的表述；
2. 按顺序推进中途的所有给定情节：先写突然听到马的呼喊，接着写自己听从马的指引来到河边，马让自己饮用河里的水，把三个中途要点完整呈现；
3. 补充符合奇幻设定的结局：设定喝完水后自己获得了和马一样快的奔跑速度，老虎追不上自己，最终成功脱险，情节通顺合理，最后衔接题干给出的结尾感叹句，全文时态统一，要点全覆盖，行文流畅。
【答案】
Last night, I had a really interesting and strange dream. In the dream, I met a tiger when I walked through the forest. Then the tiger started to run after me and I didn't know what to do. Suddenly a horse shouted, "Come here!" I followed the horse and went to a river. The horse told me to drink the water in the river. After that, I could run as fast as the horse. The tiger tried to catch me but I ran too fast. At last, I got away from the tiger.
What a wonderful dream!
【知识点】
一般过去时叙事，英语记叙文写作，情景作文要点整合
【点评】
本题是故事类情景书面表达，难度较低，学生只需要按照给定的情节时间线梳理内容，逐一覆盖所有提示要点，补充符合奇幻主题的合理结局，注意保持叙事时态统一，适当添加逻辑衔接词让行文流畅，很容易达到写作要求拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题我们可以按清晰的思路完成写作：首先明确这是第一人称的叙事类记叙文，讲述梦境故事，全文统一使用一般过去时；接着对照表格把所有给定的情节要点逐一梳理，避免遗漏：开端是穿越森林看见老虎，中途三个情节分别是老虎追赶自己不知所措、马呼喊自己过去、跟随马到河边后马让自己喝河水；最后按照要求发挥想象，补充2-3句贴合《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》奇幻风格的合理结局，再用then、suddenly、at last这类衔接词把所有内容串联起来，保证字数达到80词以上即可。
【解析】
写作分步完成：
1. 承接题干给出的开头句，先交代故事开端：说明自己穿越森林时偶遇老虎，紧接着老虎开始追赶自己，自己慌乱无措，完成开篇情节的表述；
2. 按顺序推进中途的所有给定情节：先写突然听到马的呼喊，接着写自己听从马的指引来到河边，马让自己饮用河里的水，把三个中途要点完整呈现；
3. 补充符合奇幻设定的结局：设定喝完水后自己获得了和马一样快的奔跑速度，老虎追不上自己，最终成功脱险，情节通顺合理，最后衔接题干给出的结尾感叹句，全文时态统一，要点全覆盖，行文流畅。
【答案】
Last night, I had a really interesting and strange dream. In the dream, I met a tiger when I walked through the forest. Then the tiger started to run after me and I didn't know what to do. Suddenly a horse shouted, "Come here!" I followed the horse and went to a river. The horse told me to drink the water in the river. After that, I could run as fast as the horse. The tiger tried to catch me but I ran too fast. At last, I got away from the tiger.
What a wonderful dream!
【知识点】
一般过去时叙事，英语记叙文写作，情景作文要点整合
【点评】
本题是故事类情景书面表达，难度较低，学生只需要按照给定的情节时间线梳理内容，逐一覆盖所有提示要点，补充符合奇幻主题的合理结局，注意保持叙事时态统一，适当添加逻辑衔接词让行文流畅，很容易达到写作要求拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
