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开学已经有一段时间了，请根据表格中的信息以“This is me”为题写一篇英语短文，向你的同学介绍自己。
【要求】1. 80词左右。
2. 内容必须包括表格中的要点并适当发挥，要求语句通顺、条理清晰、书写工整。
This is me
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel,
【要求】1. 80词左右。
2. 内容必须包括表格中的要点并适当发挥，要求语句通顺、条理清晰、书写工整。
This is me
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel,
and I am 13 years old. I come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine Middle School. I am tall and I have short hair. I don't wear glasses. I go to school by bus every day.
I like English best because I think it is interesting and useful. I have English classes five times a week. My English teacher is very kind.
I also like doing sport and I like playing basketball best, because it can make me happy and healthy.
I want to be a basketball player. I hope my dream can come true.
答案
实战演练
One possible version
This is me
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel, and I am 13 years old. I come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine Middle School. I am tall and I have short hair. I don't wear glasses. I go to school by bus every day.
I like English best because I think it is interesting and useful. I have English classes five times a week. My English teacher is very kind. I also like doing sport and I like playing basketball best, because it can make me happy and healthy.
I want to be a basketball player. I hope my dream can come true.
One possible version
This is me
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel, and I am 13 years old. I come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine Middle School. I am tall and I have short hair. I don't wear glasses. I go to school by bus every day.
I like English best because I think it is interesting and useful. I have English classes five times a week. My English teacher is very kind. I also like doing sport and I like playing basketball best, because it can make me happy and healthy.
I want to be a basketball player. I hope my dream can come true.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“This is me”为题写英语自我介绍短文，需整合表格所有要点并适当发挥。解题思路：1. 开头问候，依次介绍基本信息（姓名、年龄、籍贯、学校班级）；2. 描述外貌（结合表格的短发、不戴眼镜，可适当补充细节）；3. 说明最喜欢的科目及原因；4. 介绍兴趣爱好（篮球）及原因；5. 表达理想，确保语句通顺、要点齐全，符合词数要求。
【解析】先以“Hello, everyone!”引出自我介绍，依次呈现基本信息：姓名Daniel，13岁，来自姜堰，就读于阳光中学七年级9班；接着补充外貌细节（如身高），结合表格的短发、不戴眼镜；再说明最喜欢的科目（如英语）及原因；然后介绍篮球爱好及原因；最后表达成为篮球运动员的理想，用词准确，语句连贯。
【答案】This is me
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel, and I am 13 years old. I come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine Middle School. I am tall and I have short hair. I don't wear glasses. I like English best because I think it is interesting and useful. I also like playing basketball best, because it can make me happy and healthy. I want to be a basketball player. I hope my dream can come true.
【知识点】英语自我介绍写作、信息整合
【点评】本题考查初中英语书面表达能力，要求学生整合给定信息并清晰有条理地介绍自己，需注意语句通顺、要点完整，符合日常交际的表达逻辑。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】先以“Hello, everyone!”引出自我介绍，依次呈现基本信息：姓名Daniel，13岁，来自姜堰，就读于阳光中学七年级9班；接着补充外貌细节（如身高），结合表格的短发、不戴眼镜；再说明最喜欢的科目（如英语）及原因；然后介绍篮球爱好及原因；最后表达成为篮球运动员的理想，用词准确，语句连贯。
【答案】This is me
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel, and I am 13 years old. I come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine Middle School. I am tall and I have short hair. I don't wear glasses. I like English best because I think it is interesting and useful. I also like playing basketball best, because it can make me happy and healthy. I want to be a basketball player. I hope my dream can come true.
【知识点】英语自我介绍写作、信息整合
【点评】本题考查初中英语书面表达能力，要求学生整合给定信息并清晰有条理地介绍自己，需注意语句通顺、要点完整，符合日常交际的表达逻辑。
【难度系数】0.6
