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我们作为新时代的青少年,必须具备优秀的品质。只有勇于改变自我,不断蜕变,才能成为更好的自己。下学期你校英语社将开展以“Make Myself Better”为主题的征文活动。假如你是张华,请根据表格内容写一篇短文(先分析自己的优缺点,再谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己,最后再说明做出这些改变的理由),向英语社投稿。
要求:1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4. 词数:80—100(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Make Myself Better
Everyone wants to become a better person.
我们作为新时代的青少年,必须具备优秀的品质。只有勇于改变自我,不断蜕变,才能成为更好的自己。下学期你校英语社将开展以“Make Myself Better”为主题的征文活动。假如你是张华,请根据表格内容写一篇短文(先分析自己的优缺点,再谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己,最后再说明做出这些改变的理由),向英语社投稿。
要求:1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4. 词数:80—100(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Make Myself Better
Everyone wants to become a better person.
I have some advantages. I do well in listening and helping others. However, I also have disadvantages. I sometimes put off my homework until the last minute and I don't exercise enough.
To make myself better, I decide to form two new habits. First, I will make a daily plan and finish my homework right after school. Second, I want to play basketball or go running three times a week.
I also plan to read more books to improve my mind.
I'm going to do these things because good habits can make me healthier, more organized, and more confident. I believe small changes can lead to big progress.
答案
One possible version:
Make Myself Better
Everyone wants to become a better person.
I have some advantages. I do well in listening and helping others. However, I also have disadvantages. I sometimes put off my homework until the last minute and I don't exercise enough.
To make myself better, I decide to form two new habits. First, I will make a daily plan and finish my homework right after school. Second, I want to play basketball or go running three times a week. I also plan to read more books to improve my mind.
I'm going to do these things because good habits can make me healthier, more organized, and more confident. I believe small changes can lead to big progress.
Make Myself Better
Everyone wants to become a better person.
I have some advantages. I do well in listening and helping others. However, I also have disadvantages. I sometimes put off my homework until the last minute and I don't exercise enough.
To make myself better, I decide to form two new habits. First, I will make a daily plan and finish my homework right after school. Second, I want to play basketball or go running three times a week. I also plan to read more books to improve my mind.
I'm going to do these things because good habits can make me healthier, more organized, and more confident. I believe small changes can lead to big progress.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语话题写作，主题为“Make Myself Better”。解题思路：首先承接已给开头，运用参考句型“I do well in...”说明自身优点，清晰列举缺点；接着用“I decide/want to...”句型，从习惯、运动等方面阐述提升自我的具体计划；最后用“I'm going to/will...”句型说明做出改变的理由，确保覆盖所有写作要点，语句通顺、词数符合要求，且不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，用“I do well in...”说明优点（如倾听、乐于助人），用转折词引出缺点（如拖延作业、缺乏运动）；2. 运用“I decide/want to...”句型，从制定作业计划、每周运动、多读书等方面写提升计划；3. 用“I'm going to/will...”句型说明理由，如好习惯让人更健康、有条理、自信；最后检查内容完整性、语句通顺度及词数是否达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Make Myself Better
Everyone wants to become a better person.
I have some advantages. I do well in listening and helping others. However, I also have disadvantages. I sometimes put off my homework until the last minute and I don't exercise enough.
To make myself better, I decide to form two new habits. First, I will make a daily plan and finish my homework right after school. Second, I want to play basketball or go running three times a week. I also plan to read more books to improve my mind.
I'm going to do these things because good habits can make me healthier, more organized, and more confident. I believe small changes can lead to big progress.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、常用句型运用、个人表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖写作要点，灵活运用参考句型，语句通顺连贯，符合词数要求，无真实信息，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语话题写作，主题为“Make Myself Better”。解题思路：首先承接已给开头，运用参考句型“I do well in...”说明自身优点，清晰列举缺点；接着用“I decide/want to...”句型，从习惯、运动等方面阐述提升自我的具体计划；最后用“I'm going to/will...”句型说明做出改变的理由，确保覆盖所有写作要点，语句通顺、词数符合要求，且不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，用“I do well in...”说明优点（如倾听、乐于助人），用转折词引出缺点（如拖延作业、缺乏运动）；2. 运用“I decide/want to...”句型，从制定作业计划、每周运动、多读书等方面写提升计划；3. 用“I'm going to/will...”句型说明理由，如好习惯让人更健康、有条理、自信；最后检查内容完整性、语句通顺度及词数是否达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Make Myself Better
Everyone wants to become a better person.
I have some advantages. I do well in listening and helping others. However, I also have disadvantages. I sometimes put off my homework until the last minute and I don't exercise enough.
To make myself better, I decide to form two new habits. First, I will make a daily plan and finish my homework right after school. Second, I want to play basketball or go running three times a week. I also plan to read more books to improve my mind.
I'm going to do these things because good habits can make me healthier, more organized, and more confident. I believe small changes can lead to big progress.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、常用句型运用、个人表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖写作要点，灵活运用参考句型，语句通顺连贯，符合词数要求，无真实信息，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
