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五、书面表达。
琼花漫舞银装裹，冰城笑迎四海客。假如你是王华，你上个月到哈尔滨旅游，体验了哈尔滨冬天的美，喜欢哈尔滨的冬天。请你把参观的经历以“My favourite season: winter in Harbin”为题，写一篇英语短文向大家介绍哈尔滨的冬天，词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
| 主题 | 场景描述 |
| ---- | ---- |
| 冰雪节开幕时 | 冰雕城堡、彩灯闪耀、人群欢呼 |
| 漫步冰雪城堡 |
冰滑梯、拍照留念、手捧热奶茶 |
| 偶遇南方游客 | 南方游客穿厚衣、尝试滑雪 |
参考词汇:城堡 castle;冰滑梯 ice slide
My favourite season: winter in Harbin
Winter turns Harbin into a white wonderland.
I will always love Harbin's winter!
琼花漫舞银装裹，冰城笑迎四海客。假如你是王华，你上个月到哈尔滨旅游，体验了哈尔滨冬天的美，喜欢哈尔滨的冬天。请你把参观的经历以“My favourite season: winter in Harbin”为题，写一篇英语短文向大家介绍哈尔滨的冬天，词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
| 主题 | 场景描述 |
| ---- | ---- |
| 冰雪节开幕时 | 冰雕城堡、彩灯闪耀、人群欢呼 |
| 漫步冰雪城堡 |
冰滑梯、拍照留念、手捧热奶茶 || 偶遇南方游客 | 南方游客穿厚衣、尝试滑雪 |
参考词汇:城堡 castle;冰滑梯 ice slide
My favourite season: winter in Harbin
Winter turns Harbin into a white wonderland.
I will always love Harbin's winter!
答案
One possible version:
My favourite season: winter in Harbin
Winter turns Harbin into a white wonderland. Last month, I went to the Ice and Snow Festival. Giant ice castles shone under colourful lights, and crowds cheered excitedly.
The best part was sliding down a long ice slide—it felt like flying through the air! As I walked through the ice castles, I took funny photos with snowmen and drank hot milk tea to warm my hands. Suddenly, I saw some visitors from southern China. They wore thick coats and kept falling while learning to ski. Everyone laughed together.
Winter here is more than just cold weather. It's a season of happiness, beauty, and friendship.
I will always love Harbin's winter!
My favourite season: winter in Harbin
Winter turns Harbin into a white wonderland. Last month, I went to the Ice and Snow Festival. Giant ice castles shone under colourful lights, and crowds cheered excitedly.
The best part was sliding down a long ice slide—it felt like flying through the air! As I walked through the ice castles, I took funny photos with snowmen and drank hot milk tea to warm my hands. Suddenly, I saw some visitors from southern China. They wore thick coats and kept falling while learning to ski. Everyone laughed together.
Winter here is more than just cold weather. It's a season of happiness, beauty, and friendship.
I will always love Harbin's winter!
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My favourite season: winter in Harbin”为题写英语短文，需结合给定的三个主题场景（冰雪节开幕、漫步冰雪城堡、偶遇南方游客），承接已给开头结尾，词数约90词。解题思路：1. 承接开头点明参加冰雪节，描述冰雕、彩灯、人群的场景；2. 写漫步城堡的活动（冰滑梯、拍照、热奶茶）；3. 描述偶遇南方游客的细节；4. 升华主题连接结尾，确保覆盖所有提示内容，语言流畅。
【解析】
1. 承接开头“Winter turns Harbin into a white wonderland.”，引出“Last month, I went to the Ice and Snow Festival.”，接着描述场景：“Giant ice castles shone under colourful lights, and crowds cheered excitedly.”；
2. 过渡到漫步城堡的经历：“The best part was sliding down a long ice slide—it felt like flying through the air! As I walked through the ice castles, I took funny photos and drank hot milk tea to warm my hands.”；
3. 加入偶遇南方游客的细节：“Suddenly, I saw some visitors from southern China. They wore thick coats and kept falling while learning to ski. Everyone laughed together.”；
4. 升华主题连接结尾：“Winter here is more than just cold weather. It's a season of happiness, beauty, and friendship.”，确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season: winter in Harbin
Winter turns Harbin into a white wonderland. Last month, I went to the Ice and Snow Festival. Giant ice castles shone under colourful lights, and crowds cheered excitedly.
The best part was sliding down a long ice slide—it felt like flying through the air! As I walked through the ice castles, I took funny photos with snowmen and drank hot milk tea to warm my hands. Suddenly, I saw some visitors from southern China. They wore thick coats and kept falling while learning to ski. Everyone laughed together.
Winter here is more than just cold weather. It's a season of happiness, beauty, and friendship.
I will always love Harbin's winter!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、场景描写、词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示场景，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合初中英语写作要求，准确传递了对哈尔滨冬天的喜爱之情。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“My favourite season: winter in Harbin”为题写英语短文，需结合给定的三个主题场景（冰雪节开幕、漫步冰雪城堡、偶遇南方游客），承接已给开头结尾，词数约90词。解题思路：1. 承接开头点明参加冰雪节，描述冰雕、彩灯、人群的场景；2. 写漫步城堡的活动（冰滑梯、拍照、热奶茶）；3. 描述偶遇南方游客的细节；4. 升华主题连接结尾，确保覆盖所有提示内容，语言流畅。
【解析】
1. 承接开头“Winter turns Harbin into a white wonderland.”，引出“Last month, I went to the Ice and Snow Festival.”，接着描述场景：“Giant ice castles shone under colourful lights, and crowds cheered excitedly.”；
2. 过渡到漫步城堡的经历：“The best part was sliding down a long ice slide—it felt like flying through the air! As I walked through the ice castles, I took funny photos and drank hot milk tea to warm my hands.”；
3. 加入偶遇南方游客的细节：“Suddenly, I saw some visitors from southern China. They wore thick coats and kept falling while learning to ski. Everyone laughed together.”；
4. 升华主题连接结尾：“Winter here is more than just cold weather. It's a season of happiness, beauty, and friendship.”，确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season: winter in Harbin
Winter turns Harbin into a white wonderland. Last month, I went to the Ice and Snow Festival. Giant ice castles shone under colourful lights, and crowds cheered excitedly.
The best part was sliding down a long ice slide—it felt like flying through the air! As I walked through the ice castles, I took funny photos with snowmen and drank hot milk tea to warm my hands. Suddenly, I saw some visitors from southern China. They wore thick coats and kept falling while learning to ski. Everyone laughed together.
Winter here is more than just cold weather. It's a season of happiness, beauty, and friendship.
I will always love Harbin's winter!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、场景描写、词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示场景，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合初中英语写作要求，准确传递了对哈尔滨冬天的喜爱之情。
【难度系数】
0.5
