九、书面表达(根据横线后的写作素材提示补全句子)。(每小题3.5分,共17.5分)
假定你是李辉,你的美国笔友 Justin 来信说他最近因为学习压力大而常常感到厌烦甚至无法正常入睡。请你用英文给他写一封回信,提出一些建议并给予鼓励。
Dear Justin,
1.
First of all, stay positive and confident. 2.
3.
5.
Li Hui
假定你是李辉,你的美国笔友 Justin 来信说他最近因为学习压力大而常常感到厌烦甚至无法正常入睡。请你用英文给他写一封回信,提出一些建议并给予鼓励。
Dear Justin,
1.
I have heard that you are under a lot of stress
(我听说你承受着很大的压力). However, I am writing to tell you we are supposed to pull ourselves together to face the challenges.First of all, stay positive and confident. 2.
Positive minds not only let us become confident but also make us keep calm to solve the problems
(积极的心态不仅让我们变得自信,而且让我们保持冷静来解决问题). Besides, don’t just focus on results.3.
Paying too much attention to results can increase our pressure, always making us disappointed in the end
(过于关注结果会增加我们的压力,最终总是让我们失望). 4. In this way, we can relax ourselves and learn to accept the results
(这样,我们就可以放松自己,学会接受结果).5.
If we can avoid making the same mistakes, I do think success is on the way
(如果我们能避免犯同样的错误,我确实认为成功就在眼前).Li Hui
答案
1. I have heard that you are under a lot of stress 2. Positive minds not only let us become confident but also make us keep calm to solve the problems 3. Paying too much attention to results can increase our pressure, always making us disappointed in the end 4. In this way, we can relax ourselves and learn to accept the results 5. If we can avoid making the same mistakes, I do think success is on the way
解析
【分析】本题为英语书信写作的补全句子题,需根据中文提示完成汉译英,解题思路为:先明确每个中文提示的核心语义,再匹配对应的英语固定短语、常用句式(如not only...but also、动名词作主语、条件状语从句等),同时注意英语语法规则(如非谓语动词、强调结构等),确保翻译符合英语表达习惯,契合书信语境。
【解析】1. 中文“我听说你承受着很大的压力”,对应英语常用表达“I have heard that...”(现在完成时表结果),“承受很大压力”为固定搭配“be under a lot of stress”,组合得I have heard that you are under a lot of stress;2. 中文“积极的心态不仅让我们变得自信,而且让我们保持冷静来解决问题”,“积极的心态”是“Positive minds”,用“not only...but also”连接并列谓语,“让我们自信”为“let us become confident”,“保持冷静解决问题”为“make us keep calm to solve the problems”,组合得Positive minds not only let us become confident but also make us keep calm to solve the problems;3. 中文“过于关注结果会增加我们的压力,最终总是让我们失望”,“过于关注结果”用动名词短语作主语“Paying too much attention to results”,“增加压力”为“increase our pressure”,“最终让我们失望”用现在分词作伴随状语“always making us disappointed in the end”,组合得Paying too much attention to results can increase our pressure, always making us disappointed in the end;4. 中文“这样,我们就可以放松自己,学会接受结果”,“这样”对应“In this way”,“放松自己”为“relax ourselves”,“学会接受结果”为“learn to accept the results”,组合得In this way, we can relax ourselves and learn to accept the results;5. 中文“如果我们能避免犯同样的错误,我确实认为成功就在眼前”,“如果”引导条件状语从句“If we can avoid making the same mistakes”,“我确实认为”用强调结构“I do think”,“成功就在眼前”为“success is on the way”,组合得If we can avoid making the same mistakes, I do think success is on the way。
【答案】1. I have heard that you are under a lot of stress 2. Positive minds not only let us become confident but also make us keep calm to solve the problems 3. Paying too much attention to results can increase our pressure, always making us disappointed in the end 4. In this way, we can relax ourselves and learn to accept the results 5. If we can avoid making the same mistakes, I do think success is on the way
【知识点】英语汉译英、固定搭配应用、常用句式
【点评】本题考查英语基础应用能力,聚焦汉英转换与常用表达的掌握,是书信写作的基础题型,要求学生准确匹配中英对应语义,符合英语语法规则,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 中文“我听说你承受着很大的压力”,对应英语常用表达“I have heard that...”(现在完成时表结果),“承受很大压力”为固定搭配“be under a lot of stress”,组合得I have heard that you are under a lot of stress;2. 中文“积极的心态不仅让我们变得自信,而且让我们保持冷静来解决问题”,“积极的心态”是“Positive minds”,用“not only...but also”连接并列谓语,“让我们自信”为“let us become confident”,“保持冷静解决问题”为“make us keep calm to solve the problems”,组合得Positive minds not only let us become confident but also make us keep calm to solve the problems;3. 中文“过于关注结果会增加我们的压力,最终总是让我们失望”,“过于关注结果”用动名词短语作主语“Paying too much attention to results”,“增加压力”为“increase our pressure”,“最终让我们失望”用现在分词作伴随状语“always making us disappointed in the end”,组合得Paying too much attention to results can increase our pressure, always making us disappointed in the end;4. 中文“这样,我们就可以放松自己,学会接受结果”,“这样”对应“In this way”,“放松自己”为“relax ourselves”,“学会接受结果”为“learn to accept the results”,组合得In this way, we can relax ourselves and learn to accept the results;5. 中文“如果我们能避免犯同样的错误,我确实认为成功就在眼前”,“如果”引导条件状语从句“If we can avoid making the same mistakes”,“我确实认为”用强调结构“I do think”,“成功就在眼前”为“success is on the way”,组合得If we can avoid making the same mistakes, I do think success is on the way。
【答案】1. I have heard that you are under a lot of stress 2. Positive minds not only let us become confident but also make us keep calm to solve the problems 3. Paying too much attention to results can increase our pressure, always making us disappointed in the end 4. In this way, we can relax ourselves and learn to accept the results 5. If we can avoid making the same mistakes, I do think success is on the way
【知识点】英语汉译英、固定搭配应用、常用句式
【点评】本题考查英语基础应用能力,聚焦汉英转换与常用表达的掌握,是书信写作的基础题型,要求学生准确匹配中英对应语义,符合英语语法规则,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
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