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五、书面表达（满分 20 分）
动物是人类的朋友，动物与人类的生活息息相关。今天在课堂上，你们小组对喜欢的动物进行了讨论，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. 你们喜欢的不同动物及原因。
2. 动物的重要性。
3. 关爱动物的方法。
要求：
1. 包含以上要点提示，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：80 词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
We talk about different animals in class today.
动物是人类的朋友，动物与人类的生活息息相关。今天在课堂上，你们小组对喜欢的动物进行了讨论，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. 你们喜欢的不同动物及原因。
2. 动物的重要性。
3. 关爱动物的方法。
要求：
1. 包含以上要点提示，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：80 词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
We talk about different animals in class today.
Ella likes giraffes because she thinks they are clever and interesting. Fu Xing likes elephants because he thinks they are strong and can help people do a lot of things. I like pandas best. I think they are the symbol of China. Animals are our close friends. We can't live happily without animals. We shouldn't kill animals. We can't cut down too many trees. Let's take action now to save animals.
答案
One possible version:
We talk about different animals in class today. Ella likes giraffes because she thinks they are clever and interesting. Fu Xing likes elephants because he thinks they are strong and can help people do a lot of things. I like pandas best. I think they are the symbol of China. Animals are our close friends. We can't live happily without animals. We shouldn't kill animals. We can't cut down too many trees. Let's take action now to save animals.
We talk about different animals in class today. Ella likes giraffes because she thinks they are clever and interesting. Fu Xing likes elephants because he thinks they are strong and can help people do a lot of things. I like pandas best. I think they are the symbol of China. Animals are our close friends. We can't live happily without animals. We shouldn't kill animals. We can't cut down too many trees. Let's take action now to save animals.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：需包含“不同动物及原因、动物重要性、关爱动物方法”三个要点，承接给定开头，词数80左右。解题思路：1. 先写小组同学喜欢的不同动物及对应原因，通过举例（如长颈鹿、大象、熊猫）让内容具体；2. 阐述动物作为人类朋友的重要性，说明与人类生活的关联；3. 提出关爱动物的具体做法，最后发出倡议，确保逻辑连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】We talk about different animals in class today. Ella likes giraffes because she thinks they are clever and interesting. Fu Xing likes elephants because he thinks they are strong and can help people do a lot of things. I like pandas best. I think they are the symbol of China. Animals are our close friends. We can't live happily without animals. We shouldn't kill animals. We can't cut down too many trees. Let's take action now to save animals.
【答案】We talk about different animals in class today. Ella likes giraffes because she thinks they are clever and interesting. Fu Xing likes elephants because he thinks they are strong and can help people do a lot of things. I like pandas best. I think they are the symbol of China. Animals are our close friends. We can't live happily without animals. We shouldn't kill animals. We can't cut down too many trees. Let's take action now to save animals.
【知识点】英语书面表达、动物话题写作、要点整合写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目所有要点，内容完整充实，逻辑清晰，语言简洁规范，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】We talk about different animals in class today. Ella likes giraffes because she thinks they are clever and interesting. Fu Xing likes elephants because he thinks they are strong and can help people do a lot of things. I like pandas best. I think they are the symbol of China. Animals are our close friends. We can't live happily without animals. We shouldn't kill animals. We can't cut down too many trees. Let's take action now to save animals.
【答案】We talk about different animals in class today. Ella likes giraffes because she thinks they are clever and interesting. Fu Xing likes elephants because he thinks they are strong and can help people do a lot of things. I like pandas best. I think they are the symbol of China. Animals are our close friends. We can't live happily without animals. We shouldn't kill animals. We can't cut down too many trees. Let's take action now to save animals.
【知识点】英语书面表达、动物话题写作、要点整合写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目所有要点，内容完整充实，逻辑清晰，语言简洁规范，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.3
