B写作实战
自然灾害会对人类生活造成很大的影响,请你写一篇80词左右的英语短文,选择一种自然灾害(如暴雨、台风、地震等),具体描述它带来的危害;说明面对该灾害时的应对方法,并谈谈你对“人与自然和谐相处”的看法。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Nature sometimes shows its bad temper, like typhoons.
请做: 单元检测(七) 勤演练,汇真知

One possible version:
Nature sometimes shows its bad temper,
like typhoons. When a typhoon comes, strong
winds blow down trees and heavy rain causes
floods. It can destroy houses and make people
lose their homes. To stay safe, we should listen
to weather reports and stay indoors. We can also
prepare food and water in advance. In my
opinion, we must protect the environment.
Planting more trees and reducing pollution can
help us live in peace with nature. Let's take
action to care for our earth.

【分析】
本题要求写一篇80词左右的英语短文，需选定一种自然灾害（如台风），涵盖灾害危害、应对方法、人与自然和谐相处的看法，且开头已给出。解题思路：1. 选定台风作为描述对象（易展开且贴合要求）；2. 围绕台风，先写具体危害（强风毁树、暴雨致洪、房屋损毁、人们流离失所）；3. 再写实用应对措施（关注天气预报、待在室内、提前储备食物水）；4. 最后表达看法，点明要保护环境，通过种树、减污染实现人与自然和谐，呼吁行动；5. 控制词数，衔接自然，覆盖所有要求要点。
【解析】
1. 确定写作主题：选台风为描述的自然灾害，符合题目要求；
2. 描述危害：结合台风特点，写出具体危害（强风刮倒树木、暴雨引发洪水、损毁房屋、使人们无家可归）；
3. 说明应对方法：给出实用避险措施，如关注天气预报、待在室内、提前准备食物和水；
4. 表达看法：点明要保护环境，通过种树、减少污染实现人与自然和谐共处，呼吁行动；
5. 控制词数，衔接自然，开头已给出，无需修改，确保内容符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Nature sometimes shows its bad temper, like typhoons. When a typhoon comes, strong winds blow down trees and heavy rain causes floods. It can destroy houses and make people lose their homes. To stay safe, we should listen to weather reports and stay indoors. We can also prepare food and water in advance. In my opinion, we must protect the environment. Planting more trees and reducing pollution can help us live in peace with nature. Let's take action to care for our earth.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、自然灾害英语表达、人与自然主题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，要点齐全，语言简洁流畅，准确传达了台风的危害、应对方法及人与自然和谐的理念，是符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.6