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二、书面表达。
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Jane给你留言说要来你的家乡旅游,她
想提前了解你那里的天气情况和活动等。请你根据提示用英语回复留言,
不少于80词。
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Jane给你留言说要来你的家乡旅游,她
想提前了解你那里的天气情况和活动等。请你根据提示用英语回复留言,
不少于80词。
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jane,
I'm so glad to hear that you're going to visit my
hometown in July. Hangzhou is in the southeast of
China. It's hot and sunny here as usual.
In summer, it's the best time to visit Jiuxi. I
think it is the most attractive at this time. I often
take a walk with my family through the forest. We
can feel the fresh air, see the clean streams and hear
the beautiful songs from birds in the trees. It's so
enjoyable. Now the sun is shining through the
clouds! What a lovely sight! My parents and I are
enjoying Longjing tea near a stream. We are talking
with each other and sharing the food we all like.
What a happy and relaxing day!
In short, it's a wonderful place and I'm sure
you will like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jane,
I'm so glad to hear that you're going to visit my
hometown in July. Hangzhou is in the southeast of
China. It's hot and sunny here as usual.
In summer, it's the best time to visit Jiuxi. I
think it is the most attractive at this time. I often
take a walk with my family through the forest. We
can feel the fresh air, see the clean streams and hear
the beautiful songs from birds in the trees. It's so
enjoyable. Now the sun is shining through the
clouds! What a lovely sight! My parents and I are
enjoying Longjing tea near a stream. We are talking
with each other and sharing the food we all like.
What a happy and relaxing day!
In short, it's a wonderful place and I'm sure
you will like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先明确写作要求：这是一篇写给笔友的回信，核心目的是向对方介绍家乡杭州7月的天气、特色活动，同时覆盖表格给出的全部提示信息。第一步先审题，确定文体是英文私人书信，字数要求不少于80词；第二步梳理所有必须用到的信息点：地点杭州、到访时间7月、季节夏季、天气炎热、气温35℃、推荐游览九溪散步、当下正在品茶闲谈；第三步规划行文逻辑：开头先表达得知对方要来游玩的喜悦，接着介绍杭州7月的气候特点，再推荐适合夏季开展的游玩活动，之后描述自己当下正在进行的惬意活动，最后收尾表达期待对方到来的心情，顺着这个思路写就不会逻辑混乱，也不容易漏点。
【解析】
1. 格式搭建：按照英文书信规范，开头写称呼Dear Jane，结尾标注落款Yours, Li Hua，符合书信写作的格式要求。
2. 内容填充：
① 开篇引入：直接点明收到对方要来杭州游玩的消息十分开心，自然引出对杭州的介绍，补充杭州的地理位置让内容更饱满。
② 气候介绍：对应表格信息说明7月杭州正值夏季，天气炎热，气温可达35℃，符合实际情况。
③ 活动推荐：介绍夏季游览九溪是绝佳选择，可以在林间散步，呼吸新鲜空气、看溪流听鸟鸣，把表格里的Visit Jiuxi, take a walk的信息拓展得更生动。
④ 当下状态描述：使用现在进行时，对应表格的Enjoying tea, talking，描述自己正和家人在溪边品龙井茶、闲谈分享美食的场景，贴合要求。
⑤ 结尾收尾：总结杭州是很值得游玩的地方，表达对对方到来的期待，让文章结构完整。
3. 语法校验：区分一般现在时（介绍常规气候、日常活动）和现在进行时（描述当下正在做的事）的使用，保证语句通顺，字数远超80词的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jane,
I'm so glad to hear that you're going to visit my hometown in July. Hangzhou is in the southeast of China. It's hot and sunny here as usual.
In summer, it's the best time to visit Jiuxi. I think it is the most attractive at this time. I often take a walk with my family through the forest. We can feel the fresh air, see the clean streams and hear the beautiful songs from birds in the trees. It's so enjoyable. Now the sun is shining through the clouds! What a lovely sight! My parents and I are enjoying Longjing tea near a stream. We are talking with each other and sharing the food we all like. What a happy and relaxing day!
In short, it's a wonderful place and I'm sure you will like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信写作，现在进行时，信息整合
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文写作，难度适中，核心得分点是完整覆盖表格给出的全部信息，同时符合书信的交流语气，写作时注意区分不同时态的使用场景，适当补充和杭州相关的特色细节比如龙井茶、九溪的自然风光，可以让文章更生动有亮点，避免生硬堆砌信息。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先先明确写作要求：这是一篇写给笔友的回信，核心目的是向对方介绍家乡杭州7月的天气、特色活动，同时覆盖表格给出的全部提示信息。第一步先审题，确定文体是英文私人书信，字数要求不少于80词；第二步梳理所有必须用到的信息点：地点杭州、到访时间7月、季节夏季、天气炎热、气温35℃、推荐游览九溪散步、当下正在品茶闲谈；第三步规划行文逻辑：开头先表达得知对方要来游玩的喜悦，接着介绍杭州7月的气候特点，再推荐适合夏季开展的游玩活动，之后描述自己当下正在进行的惬意活动，最后收尾表达期待对方到来的心情，顺着这个思路写就不会逻辑混乱，也不容易漏点。
【解析】
1. 格式搭建：按照英文书信规范，开头写称呼Dear Jane，结尾标注落款Yours, Li Hua，符合书信写作的格式要求。
2. 内容填充：
① 开篇引入：直接点明收到对方要来杭州游玩的消息十分开心，自然引出对杭州的介绍，补充杭州的地理位置让内容更饱满。
② 气候介绍：对应表格信息说明7月杭州正值夏季，天气炎热，气温可达35℃，符合实际情况。
③ 活动推荐：介绍夏季游览九溪是绝佳选择，可以在林间散步，呼吸新鲜空气、看溪流听鸟鸣，把表格里的Visit Jiuxi, take a walk的信息拓展得更生动。
④ 当下状态描述：使用现在进行时，对应表格的Enjoying tea, talking，描述自己正和家人在溪边品龙井茶、闲谈分享美食的场景，贴合要求。
⑤ 结尾收尾：总结杭州是很值得游玩的地方，表达对对方到来的期待，让文章结构完整。
3. 语法校验：区分一般现在时（介绍常规气候、日常活动）和现在进行时（描述当下正在做的事）的使用，保证语句通顺，字数远超80词的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jane,
I'm so glad to hear that you're going to visit my hometown in July. Hangzhou is in the southeast of China. It's hot and sunny here as usual.
In summer, it's the best time to visit Jiuxi. I think it is the most attractive at this time. I often take a walk with my family through the forest. We can feel the fresh air, see the clean streams and hear the beautiful songs from birds in the trees. It's so enjoyable. Now the sun is shining through the clouds! What a lovely sight! My parents and I are enjoying Longjing tea near a stream. We are talking with each other and sharing the food we all like. What a happy and relaxing day!
In short, it's a wonderful place and I'm sure you will like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信写作，现在进行时，信息整合
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文写作，难度适中，核心得分点是完整覆盖表格给出的全部信息，同时符合书信的交流语气，写作时注意区分不同时态的使用场景，适当补充和杭州相关的特色细节比如龙井茶、九溪的自然风光，可以让文章更生动有亮点，避免生硬堆砌信息。
【难度系数】
0.7
