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七、书面表达(满分35分)
A)句子翻译(每小题2分,满分10分)
66. 难民们一路互相支撑着,最终抵达了救助站。
The refugees
67. 你最好多喝点水,否则你会很渴。
68. 露营者们靠自己把帐篷搭建了起来。
69. 医生们工作了十个小时,但是没有一个人休息。
70. 你是否曾遇到过难以集中精力工作的情况呢?
A)句子翻译(每小题2分,满分10分)
66. 难民们一路互相支撑着,最终抵达了救助站。
The refugees
supported each other all the way
and finally arrived at
the rescue station.67. 你最好多喝点水,否则你会很渴。
You'd better drink more water
, or you'll get very thirsty
.68. 露营者们靠自己把帐篷搭建了起来。
The campers put up the tents on their own.
69. 医生们工作了十个小时,但是没有一个人休息。
The doctors worked for ten hours, but none of them took a break.
70. 你是否曾遇到过难以集中精力工作的情况呢?
Did you ever have trouble focusing on your work?
答案
66. supported each other all the way; arrived at
知识拓展 英语中表达“到达”意义的短语和单词有很多:get to到达,后跟宾语;reach到达,是及物动词,后不跟介词;arrive at到达,后跟小地点;arrive in到达,后跟大地点。
67. You'd better drink more water; get very thirsty
68. The campers put up the tents on their own.
69. The doctors worked for ten hours, but none of them took a break.
70. Did you ever have trouble focusing on your work?
知识拓展 英语中表达“到达”意义的短语和单词有很多:get to到达,后跟宾语;reach到达,是及物动词,后不跟介词;arrive at到达,后跟小地点;arrive in到达,后跟大地点。
67. You'd better drink more water; get very thirsty
68. The campers put up the tents on their own.
69. The doctors worked for ten hours, but none of them took a break.
70. Did you ever have trouble focusing on your work?
解析
【分析】
做这类汉译英句子翻译题时，首先通读中文原句，判断动作发生的时间，确定正确的时态；其次拆解中文语义，对应回忆学过的固定短语、常用句型，不要逐字直译，要符合英语的表达习惯；最后还要注意主谓一致、介词搭配等细节，比如表示“到达”的不同短语要区分大地点小地点的用法，had better后面要接动词原形等，逐题对应语义匹配正确的表达即可顺利作答。
【解析】
66. 句子描述过去发生的动作，使用一般过去时：第一空“一路互相支撑”对应固定搭配support each other all the way，support的过去式为supported，因此填supported each other all the way；第二空“抵达”后接小地点the rescue station，用短语arrive at，arrive的过去式为arrived，因此填arrived at。
67. 第一空“你最好多喝点水”对应固定句型had better do sth（最好做某事），表达为You'd better drink more water；第二空“你会很渴”中will后接动词原形，“变得口渴”用短语get very thirsty，因此填get very thirsty。
68. 整句翻译：主语为The campers（露营者们），“搭建帐篷”对应固定短语put up the tents，put的过去式仍为put，“靠自己”对应状语on their own，组合后得到完整句子。
69. 整句翻译：前半句主语为The doctors，“工作了十个小时”表达为worked for ten hours，用转折连词but衔接后半句，“没有一个人休息”对应表达none of them took a break，take的过去式为took，组合后得到完整句子。
70. 整句翻译：询问过往经历用一般过去时的一般疑问句，核心固定结构have trouble doing sth表示“做某事有困难”，“集中精力工作”对应focus on your work，组合后得到符合英语表达习惯的完整句子。
【答案】
66. supported each other all the way; arrived at
67. You'd better drink more water; get very thirsty
68. The campers put up the tents on their own.
69. The doctors worked for ten hours, but none of them took a break.
70. Did you ever have trouble focusing on your work?
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，动词时态，常用句型
【点评】
本题侧重考察初中英语核心基础翻译能力，覆盖了日常场景的常见表达，易错点集中在相近含义短语的区分（比如不同“到达”的用法）、时态误用，学生备考时要多积累场景化的常用搭配，避免逐字翻译导致的中式英语错误。
【难度系数】
0.7
做这类汉译英句子翻译题时，首先通读中文原句，判断动作发生的时间，确定正确的时态；其次拆解中文语义，对应回忆学过的固定短语、常用句型，不要逐字直译，要符合英语的表达习惯；最后还要注意主谓一致、介词搭配等细节，比如表示“到达”的不同短语要区分大地点小地点的用法，had better后面要接动词原形等，逐题对应语义匹配正确的表达即可顺利作答。
【解析】
66. 句子描述过去发生的动作，使用一般过去时：第一空“一路互相支撑”对应固定搭配support each other all the way，support的过去式为supported，因此填supported each other all the way；第二空“抵达”后接小地点the rescue station，用短语arrive at，arrive的过去式为arrived，因此填arrived at。
67. 第一空“你最好多喝点水”对应固定句型had better do sth（最好做某事），表达为You'd better drink more water；第二空“你会很渴”中will后接动词原形，“变得口渴”用短语get very thirsty，因此填get very thirsty。
68. 整句翻译：主语为The campers（露营者们），“搭建帐篷”对应固定短语put up the tents，put的过去式仍为put，“靠自己”对应状语on their own，组合后得到完整句子。
69. 整句翻译：前半句主语为The doctors，“工作了十个小时”表达为worked for ten hours，用转折连词but衔接后半句，“没有一个人休息”对应表达none of them took a break，take的过去式为took，组合后得到完整句子。
70. 整句翻译：询问过往经历用一般过去时的一般疑问句，核心固定结构have trouble doing sth表示“做某事有困难”，“集中精力工作”对应focus on your work，组合后得到符合英语表达习惯的完整句子。
【答案】
66. supported each other all the way; arrived at
67. You'd better drink more water; get very thirsty
68. The campers put up the tents on their own.
69. The doctors worked for ten hours, but none of them took a break.
70. Did you ever have trouble focusing on your work?
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，动词时态，常用句型
【点评】
本题侧重考察初中英语核心基础翻译能力，覆盖了日常场景的常见表达，易错点集中在相近含义短语的区分（比如不同“到达”的用法）、时态误用，学生备考时要多积累场景化的常用搭配，避免逐字翻译导致的中式英语错误。
【难度系数】
0.7
B)写作(满分25分)
假如你叫李明,你是学校跑步俱乐部的成员,请你准备一个演讲稿,讲述同学们的课外活动,并鼓励
大家多参加体育锻炼,增强体质。
内容包括:1. 学校的课外活动现状;
2. 选择跑步作为锻炼方式,并说明原因;
3. 邀请同学们加入跑步俱乐部一起来锻炼。
要求:1. 不得在作文中出现真实校名和真实姓名等信息;
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Ming. Today, I will tell you something about our students' free time
activities.
That's all, thank you.
假如你叫李明,你是学校跑步俱乐部的成员,请你准备一个演讲稿,讲述同学们的课外活动,并鼓励
大家多参加体育锻炼,增强体质。
内容包括:1. 学校的课外活动现状;
2. 选择跑步作为锻炼方式,并说明原因;
3. 邀请同学们加入跑步俱乐部一起来锻炼。
要求:1. 不得在作文中出现真实校名和真实姓名等信息;
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Ming. Today, I will tell you something about our students' free time
activities.
That's all, thank you.
答案
【审题指导】
本文是一篇演讲稿;时态为一般现在时;根据提示内容讲述同学们的课外活动,并鼓励大家参加体育锻炼,增强体质,适当增加细节。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 介绍学校的课外活动现状;
第二步 介绍我们应该多锻炼,跑步就是最好的锻炼方式,并说明原因;
第三步 邀请同学们加入跑步俱乐部一起来锻炼。
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Ming. Today, I will tell you something about our students' free time activities.
Most students use the internet for a long time. Many of them watch TV or play computer games, but few students exercise. These are bad for the mind and body.
So, I think we should exercise every day, and running is the best way. First, running is fun and it is good for our bodies. Second, we can spend time with our family or friends as we run together. Also, running is the best way to relax.
For your health, come and join our running club, and then let's run together.
That's all, thank you.
本文是一篇演讲稿;时态为一般现在时;根据提示内容讲述同学们的课外活动,并鼓励大家参加体育锻炼,增强体质,适当增加细节。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 介绍学校的课外活动现状;
第二步 介绍我们应该多锻炼,跑步就是最好的锻炼方式,并说明原因;
第三步 邀请同学们加入跑步俱乐部一起来锻炼。
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Ming. Today, I will tell you something about our students' free time activities.
Most students use the internet for a long time. Many of them watch TV or play computer games, but few students exercise. These are bad for the mind and body.
So, I think we should exercise every day, and running is the best way. First, running is fun and it is good for our bodies. Second, we can spend time with our family or friends as we run together. Also, running is the best way to relax.
For your health, come and join our running club, and then let's run together.
That's all, thank you.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇校园主题的英语演讲稿写作题，解题时首先要紧扣题干给出的三个核心要点梳理写作逻辑：第一步承接给定开头，先描述当前学校课外活动的普遍现状，点明多数同学课余时间多用于上网、玩电子设备，缺乏运动的问题；第二步自然引出推荐跑步作为锻炼方式，结合日常场景给出2-3个贴合实际的理由，比如跑步门槛低、能强身健体、还能结伴放松缓解学习压力；第三步顺理成章发出邀请，号召大家加入跑步俱乐部。写作时要注意语气符合面向同学演讲的亲切有号召力的特点，控制总词数在80左右，不要出现真实校名姓名，保证语句连贯。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：文体为校园演讲稿，主体时态用一般现在时，人称以第一、第二人称为主，必须覆盖题干全部3个内容要点，词数控制在80左右，不得出现真实个人、学校信息。
2. 要点填充：① 描述课外活动现状：点明当下多数同学课余长时间上网、看电视玩游戏，极少参与体育锻炼，这类习惯对身心都有负面影响；② 介绍跑步的优势：说明跑步是性价比极高的锻炼方式，首先能有效增强体质，其次不受场地器材限制，还可以和同伴结伴跑步，在运动中放松身心，缓解学业压力；③ 发出邀请：呼吁大家为了自身健康，加入跑步俱乐部共同锻炼。
3. 衔接润色：将三个部分的内容用逻辑连接词串联，保证表达流畅自然，符合演讲稿的发言语境，核对词数符合要求，排查违规信息。
【答案】
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Ming. Today, I will tell you something about our students' free time activities.
Most students use the internet for a long time. Many of them watch TV or play computer games, but few students exercise. These are bad for the mind and body.
So, I think we should exercise every day, and running is the best way. First, running is fun and it is good for our bodies. Second, we can spend time with our family or friends as we run together. Also, running is the best way to relax.
For your health, come and join our running club, and then let's run together.
That's all, thank you.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，提纲类应用文，建议类表达
【点评】
本题是贴近学生校园生活的应用文写作题，题干给出的写作要点清晰明确，难度适中，既考查学生基础的语句组织能力，也要求学生能结合场景写出符合演讲稿号召力的表达，避免生硬堆砌要点，同时引导学生关注日常体育锻炼的重要性。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇校园主题的英语演讲稿写作题，解题时首先要紧扣题干给出的三个核心要点梳理写作逻辑：第一步承接给定开头，先描述当前学校课外活动的普遍现状，点明多数同学课余时间多用于上网、玩电子设备，缺乏运动的问题；第二步自然引出推荐跑步作为锻炼方式，结合日常场景给出2-3个贴合实际的理由，比如跑步门槛低、能强身健体、还能结伴放松缓解学习压力；第三步顺理成章发出邀请，号召大家加入跑步俱乐部。写作时要注意语气符合面向同学演讲的亲切有号召力的特点，控制总词数在80左右，不要出现真实校名姓名，保证语句连贯。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：文体为校园演讲稿，主体时态用一般现在时，人称以第一、第二人称为主，必须覆盖题干全部3个内容要点，词数控制在80左右，不得出现真实个人、学校信息。
2. 要点填充：① 描述课外活动现状：点明当下多数同学课余长时间上网、看电视玩游戏，极少参与体育锻炼，这类习惯对身心都有负面影响；② 介绍跑步的优势：说明跑步是性价比极高的锻炼方式，首先能有效增强体质，其次不受场地器材限制，还可以和同伴结伴跑步，在运动中放松身心，缓解学业压力；③ 发出邀请：呼吁大家为了自身健康，加入跑步俱乐部共同锻炼。
3. 衔接润色：将三个部分的内容用逻辑连接词串联，保证表达流畅自然，符合演讲稿的发言语境，核对词数符合要求，排查违规信息。
【答案】
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Ming. Today, I will tell you something about our students' free time activities.
Most students use the internet for a long time. Many of them watch TV or play computer games, but few students exercise. These are bad for the mind and body.
So, I think we should exercise every day, and running is the best way. First, running is fun and it is good for our bodies. Second, we can spend time with our family or friends as we run together. Also, running is the best way to relax.
For your health, come and join our running club, and then let's run together.
That's all, thank you.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，提纲类应用文，建议类表达
【点评】
本题是贴近学生校园生活的应用文写作题，题干给出的写作要点清晰明确，难度适中，既考查学生基础的语句组织能力，也要求学生能结合场景写出符合演讲稿号召力的表达，避免生硬堆砌要点，同时引导学生关注日常体育锻炼的重要性。
【难度系数】
0.6
