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假如你是李华,你在美国的笔友 David 要来中国参观,他向你询问中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你根据提示给你的笔友写一封电子邮件,介绍一下中国的气候特点,并为他的参观提供一些建议。
要点提示:(1)What's the weather like in each season in China?
(2)What's your advice?
写作要求:(1)不少于80词;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)所写内容必须包括提示的信息,可作适当发挥。
Dear David,
I'm very glad that you will come to visit China.
刷题超酷鸭
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你在美国的笔友 David 要来中国参观,他向你询问中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你根据提示给你的笔友写一封电子邮件,介绍一下中国的气候特点,并为他的参观提供一些建议。
要点提示:(1)What's the weather like in each season in China?
(2)What's your advice?
写作要求:(1)不少于80词;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)所写内容必须包括提示的信息,可作适当发挥。
Dear David,
I'm very glad that you will come to visit China.
You asked me about the weather in China. There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It often rains heavily. And winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China. If you like snow, you can come at this time of a year. But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not cold or hot. It's very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai.
I hope you can come soon.
刷题超酷鸭
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I'm very glad that you will come to visit China.
You asked me about the weather in China. There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It often rains heavily. And winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China. If you like snow, you can come at this time of a year. But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not cold or hot. It's very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai.
I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear David,
I'm very glad that you will come to visit China.
You asked me about the weather in China. There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It often rains heavily. And winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China. If you like snow, you can come at this time of a year. But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not cold or hot. It's very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai.
I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语应用文写作题，要求给笔友David写邮件，需包含两个核心要点：一是介绍中国四季的天气特点，二是给出参观中国的建议。解题思路：1. 先回应David的问题，清晰描述春、夏、秋、冬的天气特征；2. 结合天气特点，推荐适合参观的最佳时间，补充适合游览的景点让内容更充实；3. 遵循书信格式，开头结尾已给出，只需补充中间内容，确保语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 点明中国有四季，分别说明各季节天气：夏季是一年中最热的季节，常下大雨；冬季最冷，北方有时会下雪。
2. 给出建议：最佳参观时间是春季或秋季，因为天气不冷不热，很舒适，适合游览中国的名胜古迹，比如长城、西湖、泰山等。
3. 补充问候语，使邮件完整。
【答案】
Dear David,
I'm very glad that you will come to visit China.
You asked me about the weather in China. There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It often rains heavily. And winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China. If you like snow, you can come at this time of a year. But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not cold or hot. It's very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai.
I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、季节天气表达、建议类句型
【点评】
本题考查实用英语书信写作，话题贴近生活，要求学生掌握季节描述及合理建议的表达，内容易于发挥，符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题是英语应用文写作题，要求给笔友David写邮件，需包含两个核心要点：一是介绍中国四季的天气特点，二是给出参观中国的建议。解题思路：1. 先回应David的问题，清晰描述春、夏、秋、冬的天气特征；2. 结合天气特点，推荐适合参观的最佳时间，补充适合游览的景点让内容更充实；3. 遵循书信格式，开头结尾已给出，只需补充中间内容，确保语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 点明中国有四季，分别说明各季节天气：夏季是一年中最热的季节，常下大雨；冬季最冷，北方有时会下雪。
2. 给出建议：最佳参观时间是春季或秋季，因为天气不冷不热，很舒适，适合游览中国的名胜古迹，比如长城、西湖、泰山等。
3. 补充问候语，使邮件完整。
【答案】
Dear David,
I'm very glad that you will come to visit China.
You asked me about the weather in China. There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It often rains heavily. And winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China. If you like snow, you can come at this time of a year. But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not cold or hot. It's very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai.
I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、季节天气表达、建议类句型
【点评】
本题考查实用英语书信写作，话题贴近生活，要求学生掌握季节描述及合理建议的表达，内容易于发挥，符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】
0.7
