四、文段写作
请根据以下思维导图,用英文写一篇小作文来介绍你的爱好,词数在50词左右。

请根据以下思维导图,用英文写一篇小作文来介绍你的爱好,词数在50词左右。
答案
One possible version:
I am a fan of football. I love it because it makes me excited and helps me keep fit. I often play football with my classmates after school. It’s great fun. I want to be a football player. I play a lot and I am sure my dream can come true.
I am a fan of football. I love it because it makes me excited and helps me keep fit. I often play football with my classmates after school. It’s great fun. I want to be a football player. I play a lot and I am sure my dream can come true.
解析
【分析】首先根据思维导图确定写作核心:介绍爱好,需覆盖三个分支——爱好是什么、喜欢的原因、常做的相关事、自身梦想。先选定具体爱好(如足球),再对应每个分支组织简单通顺的英文内容,确保词数符合要求。
【解析】第一步:点明自己是某爱好的粉丝(如I am a fan of football.);第二步:说明喜欢的原因(如I love it because it makes me excited and helps me keep fit.);第三步:描述常做的事(如I often play football with my classmates after school.);第四步:表达自身梦想(如I want to be a football player.),补充内容使语句完整,控制总词数在50左右。
【答案】One possible version:
I am a fan of football. I love it because it makes me excited and helps me keep fit. I often play football with my classmates after school. It’s great fun. I want to be a football player. I play a lot and I am sure my dream can come true.
【知识点】英语写作、英文表达
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查英语写作,要求学生根据给定框架梳理内容并完成英文表达,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语应用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】第一步:点明自己是某爱好的粉丝(如I am a fan of football.);第二步:说明喜欢的原因(如I love it because it makes me excited and helps me keep fit.);第三步:描述常做的事(如I often play football with my classmates after school.);第四步:表达自身梦想(如I want to be a football player.),补充内容使语句完整,控制总词数在50左右。
【答案】One possible version:
I am a fan of football. I love it because it makes me excited and helps me keep fit. I often play football with my classmates after school. It’s great fun. I want to be a football player. I play a lot and I am sure my dream can come true.
【知识点】英语写作、英文表达
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查英语写作,要求学生根据给定框架梳理内容并完成英文表达,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语应用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
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