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学校英语校刊正在开展以“Online Safety”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍一些网络安全守则。
Online Safety
Share with care
Keep personal information safe...
Make friends carefully
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Never meet online friends alone...
Be polite
Don't say bad words...
Online Safety
Online Safety
Share with care
Keep personal information safe...
Make friends carefully
图
Never meet online friends alone...
Be polite
Don't say bad words...
Online Safety
答案
Online Safety
As a saying goes,“No rules,no standards.” Many accidents happened because of our carelessness or breaking the rules. Here are the basic rules for you to know in order to help you be safer online.
First,share with care. You should be careful when you post photos or other things online. Remember to keep your personal information safe. Never give your real information to anyone online. Second,never meet online friends alone. Tell your parents if you get in touch with anyone online. That way,it can stop people from hurting you. Finally,be polite! Don't hurt others with your bad words.
In short,safety must come first. With these rules,there will be fewer problems online.(共118词)
As a saying goes,“No rules,no standards.” Many accidents happened because of our carelessness or breaking the rules. Here are the basic rules for you to know in order to help you be safer online.
First,share with care. You should be careful when you post photos or other things online. Remember to keep your personal information safe. Never give your real information to anyone online. Second,never meet online friends alone. Tell your parents if you get in touch with anyone online. That way,it can stop people from hurting you. Finally,be polite! Don't hurt others with your bad words.
In short,safety must come first. With these rules,there will be fewer problems online.(共118词)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语主题征文写作，主题为“Online Safety”。解题思路：首先明确需围绕表格给出的三个核心要点（分享谨慎、交友小心、礼貌用语）展开；其次采用“总-分-总”结构，开头引出网络安全的重要性，中间分点阐述具体守则，结尾总结；最后用准确、连贯的英语组织内容，符合征文要求。
【解析】
按照写作步骤，先开篇点明网络安全需遵守规则；接着分述三个守则：一是分享时要谨慎，保护个人信息，不随意泄露真实信息；二是交友需小心，不单独见网友，及时告知家长；三是要礼貌，不说脏话；最后总结安全第一，用符合英语表达习惯的语句组织，确保内容紧扣主题。
【答案】
Online Safety
As a saying goes,“No rules,no standards.” Many accidents happened because of our carelessness or breaking the rules. Here are the basic rules for you to know in order to help you be safer online.
First,share with care. You should be careful when you post photos or other things online. Remember to keep your personal information safe. Never give your real information to anyone online. Second,never meet online friends alone. Tell your parents if you get in touch with anyone online. That way,it can stop people from hurting you. Finally,be polite! Don't hurt others with your bad words.
In short,safety must come first. With these rules,there will be fewer problems online.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，网络安全话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“网络安全”主题，结构清晰，分点明确，语言通顺自然，有效传递了网络安全的相关守则，符合征文要求，是一篇合格的主题短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语主题征文写作，主题为“Online Safety”。解题思路：首先明确需围绕表格给出的三个核心要点（分享谨慎、交友小心、礼貌用语）展开；其次采用“总-分-总”结构，开头引出网络安全的重要性，中间分点阐述具体守则，结尾总结；最后用准确、连贯的英语组织内容，符合征文要求。
【解析】
按照写作步骤，先开篇点明网络安全需遵守规则；接着分述三个守则：一是分享时要谨慎，保护个人信息，不随意泄露真实信息；二是交友需小心，不单独见网友，及时告知家长；三是要礼貌，不说脏话；最后总结安全第一，用符合英语表达习惯的语句组织，确保内容紧扣主题。
【答案】
Online Safety
As a saying goes,“No rules,no standards.” Many accidents happened because of our carelessness or breaking the rules. Here are the basic rules for you to know in order to help you be safer online.
First,share with care. You should be careful when you post photos or other things online. Remember to keep your personal information safe. Never give your real information to anyone online. Second,never meet online friends alone. Tell your parents if you get in touch with anyone online. That way,it can stop people from hurting you. Finally,be polite! Don't hurt others with your bad words.
In short,safety must come first. With these rules,there will be fewer problems online.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，网络安全话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“网络安全”主题，结构清晰，分点明确，语言通顺自然，有效传递了网络安全的相关守则，符合征文要求，是一篇合格的主题短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
