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（二）书面表达
假如你是李华。临近新年，你所在的英语社团将举办一次关于新年计划的分享会。请你写一篇题为“My New Year’s Resolutions”的发言稿，和大家分享一下你的新年计划。要点如下：
（1）表明制定新年计划的目的；
（2）介绍你在生活、健康、学习三方面的具体计划和做法；
（3）表达完成新年计划的决心。
注意：语句连贯，词数70左右（作文标题已给出，不计入总词数）。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体：
（2）思路构建
My New Year’s Resolutions
假如你是李华。临近新年，你所在的英语社团将举办一次关于新年计划的分享会。请你写一篇题为“My New Year’s Resolutions”的发言稿，和大家分享一下你的新年计划。要点如下：
（1）表明制定新年计划的目的；
（2）介绍你在生活、健康、学习三方面的具体计划和做法；
（3）表达完成新年计划的决心。
注意：语句连贯，词数70左右（作文标题已给出，不计入总词数）。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体：
说明文
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
人称：第一人称
（2）思路构建
My New Year’s Resolutions
答案
（1）说明文；一般现在时和一般将来时；第一人称
One possible version:
My New Year’s Resolutions
The New Year is coming. To make some progress and improve myself, I make some New Year's resolutions. First, to make my life more colourful, I'm going to take up singing as my new hobby next year. I plan to have lessons and practise singing in my free time. Second, to stay healthy, I will do more exercise and eat less junk food to keep fit. Third, for my study. I'm going to study harder so that I can get good grades in the coming year.
Small steps can lead to big changes. I will stick to my plans and work hard to achieve these goals.
One possible version:
My New Year’s Resolutions
The New Year is coming. To make some progress and improve myself, I make some New Year's resolutions. First, to make my life more colourful, I'm going to take up singing as my new hobby next year. I plan to have lessons and practise singing in my free time. Second, to stay healthy, I will do more exercise and eat less junk food to keep fit. Third, for my study. I'm going to study harder so that I can get good grades in the coming year.
Small steps can lead to big changes. I will stick to my plans and work hard to achieve these goals.
解析
【分析】
首先审题确定文体、时态与人称：文体为说明文，时态结合一般现在时（介绍背景）和一般将来时（描述计划），人称用第一人称。接着按照思维导图的结构分三步写作：第一步表明制定新年计划的目的；第二步从生活、健康、学习三方面写具体计划和做法；第三步表达实施计划的决心，同时注意语句连贯，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：明确文体为说明文，时态使用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称采用第一人称。
2. 写作步骤：
开头：点明新年到来，说明制定计划的目的（如取得进步、提升自己），对应句式“To ..., I make some New Year's resolutions.”
中间：分三点阐述计划：①生活方面：让生活更丰富多彩，具体计划为学唱歌，安排上课和练习；②健康方面：保持健康，做法是多锻炼、少吃垃圾食品；③学习方面：努力学习，目标是取得好成绩，用First、Second、Third衔接。
结尾：表达实施计划的决心，对应句式“Small steps can lead to big changes. I will ... and ... to achieve these goals.”
3. 调整语句，确保连贯，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】
My New Year’s Resolutions
The New Year is coming. To make some progress and improve myself, I make some New Year's resolutions. First, to make my life more colourful, I'm going to take up singing as my new hobby next year. I plan to have lessons and practise singing in my free time. Second, to stay healthy, I will do more exercise and eat less junk food to keep fit. Third, for my study, I'm going to study harder so that I can get good grades in the coming year.
Small steps can lead to big changes. I will stick to my plans and work hard to achieve these goals.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；一般将来时运用；话题写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，覆盖所有要点，语言连贯自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先审题确定文体、时态与人称：文体为说明文，时态结合一般现在时（介绍背景）和一般将来时（描述计划），人称用第一人称。接着按照思维导图的结构分三步写作：第一步表明制定新年计划的目的；第二步从生活、健康、学习三方面写具体计划和做法；第三步表达实施计划的决心，同时注意语句连贯，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：明确文体为说明文，时态使用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称采用第一人称。
2. 写作步骤：
开头：点明新年到来，说明制定计划的目的（如取得进步、提升自己），对应句式“To ..., I make some New Year's resolutions.”
中间：分三点阐述计划：①生活方面：让生活更丰富多彩，具体计划为学唱歌，安排上课和练习；②健康方面：保持健康，做法是多锻炼、少吃垃圾食品；③学习方面：努力学习，目标是取得好成绩，用First、Second、Third衔接。
结尾：表达实施计划的决心，对应句式“Small steps can lead to big changes. I will ... and ... to achieve these goals.”
3. 调整语句，确保连贯，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】
My New Year’s Resolutions
The New Year is coming. To make some progress and improve myself, I make some New Year's resolutions. First, to make my life more colourful, I'm going to take up singing as my new hobby next year. I plan to have lessons and practise singing in my free time. Second, to stay healthy, I will do more exercise and eat less junk food to keep fit. Third, for my study, I'm going to study harder so that I can get good grades in the coming year.
Small steps can lead to big changes. I will stick to my plans and work hard to achieve these goals.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；一般将来时运用；话题写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，覆盖所有要点，语言连贯自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
