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四、书面表达
假如你是英国伦敦某中学的中国交换生李想。英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍自己的家乡。请
你根据提示，完成这篇英语演讲稿。
要点提示: Where is your hometown?
What is it famous for?
Why do you like it?
注意事项:
1.演讲稿须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.词数80左右，演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello,everyone.My name is Li Xiang and I come from China.A ow let me tell l you something about
my hometown.
I believe you will love this city like me.
假如你是英国伦敦某中学的中国交换生李想。英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍自己的家乡。请
你根据提示，完成这篇英语演讲稿。
要点提示: Where is your hometown?
What is it famous for?
Why do you like it?
注意事项:
1.演讲稿须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.词数80左右，演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello,everyone.My name is Li Xiang and I come from China.A ow let me tell l you something about
my hometown.
I believe you will love this city like me.
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Xiang and I come from China. Now let me tell you something about my hometown.
My hometown Qingdao is a beautiful seaside city in the east of China. It's great fun to take in fresh air by the sea. The natural view along the beach is wonderful. You can also try all kinds of traditional delicious seafood and learn about the local people's traditional way of life. At the end of your day, do not miss the amazing sunset. I love my hometown because it is so beautiful and relaxing. It is the perfect place to live.
I believe you will love this city like me.
(80 words)
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Xiang and I come from China. Now let me tell you something about my hometown.
My hometown Qingdao is a beautiful seaside city in the east of China. It's great fun to take in fresh air by the sea. The natural view along the beach is wonderful. You can also try all kinds of traditional delicious seafood and learn about the local people's traditional way of life. At the end of your day, do not miss the amazing sunset. I love my hometown because it is so beautiful and relaxing. It is the perfect place to live.
I believe you will love this city like me.
(80 words)
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要紧扣题目给出的三个核心要点来构思演讲稿：
1. 确定家乡位置：选择一个有特色的城市（比如青岛），用清晰的句型说明其地理位置；
2. 点明家乡特色：结合所选城市的特点，比如海边风光、海鲜等，描述它闻名的地方；
3. 阐述喜爱原因：从景色、生活氛围等角度，说明喜欢家乡的理由，同时衔接开头和结尾，保证语句连贯。
写作时要注意词数控制在80左右，语句通顺自然，符合演讲稿的口语化风格。
【解析】
步骤1：明确家乡并介绍位置，用"My hometown Qingdao is a beautiful seaside city in the east of China."清晰点明地理位置，让听众有直观认知；
步骤2：介绍家乡特色，通过描述海边活动（take in fresh air by the sea）、自然景观（wonderful natural view along the beach）、美食（traditional delicious seafood）等，体现家乡的闻名之处；
步骤3：阐述喜爱理由，用"I love my hometown because it is so beautiful and relaxing."直接表达情感，补充"It is the perfect place to live."强化喜爱的原因；
步骤4：衔接给定的开头和结尾，确保内容完整，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Xiang and I come from China. Now let me tell you something about my hometown.
My hometown Qingdao is a beautiful seaside city in the east of China. It's great fun to take in fresh air by the sea. The natural view along the beach is wonderful. You can also try all kinds of traditional delicious seafood and learn about the local people's traditional way of life. At the end of your day, do not miss the amazing sunset. I love my hometown because it is so beautiful and relaxing. It is the perfect place to live.
I believe you will love this city like me.
【知识点】
1. 英语演讲稿写作
2. 地点介绍句型
3. 情感表达句型
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目所有要点，内容完整连贯，选取青岛作为家乡，结合海边城市的特色展开描述，用词贴切地道，口语化的表达符合演讲稿的语境，词数也符合要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们需要紧扣题目给出的三个核心要点来构思演讲稿：
1. 确定家乡位置：选择一个有特色的城市（比如青岛），用清晰的句型说明其地理位置；
2. 点明家乡特色：结合所选城市的特点，比如海边风光、海鲜等，描述它闻名的地方；
3. 阐述喜爱原因：从景色、生活氛围等角度，说明喜欢家乡的理由，同时衔接开头和结尾，保证语句连贯。
写作时要注意词数控制在80左右，语句通顺自然，符合演讲稿的口语化风格。
【解析】
步骤1：明确家乡并介绍位置，用"My hometown Qingdao is a beautiful seaside city in the east of China."清晰点明地理位置，让听众有直观认知；
步骤2：介绍家乡特色，通过描述海边活动（take in fresh air by the sea）、自然景观（wonderful natural view along the beach）、美食（traditional delicious seafood）等，体现家乡的闻名之处；
步骤3：阐述喜爱理由，用"I love my hometown because it is so beautiful and relaxing."直接表达情感，补充"It is the perfect place to live."强化喜爱的原因；
步骤4：衔接给定的开头和结尾，确保内容完整，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Xiang and I come from China. Now let me tell you something about my hometown.
My hometown Qingdao is a beautiful seaside city in the east of China. It's great fun to take in fresh air by the sea. The natural view along the beach is wonderful. You can also try all kinds of traditional delicious seafood and learn about the local people's traditional way of life. At the end of your day, do not miss the amazing sunset. I love my hometown because it is so beautiful and relaxing. It is the perfect place to live.
I believe you will love this city like me.
【知识点】
1. 英语演讲稿写作
2. 地点介绍句型
3. 情感表达句型
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目所有要点，内容完整连贯，选取青岛作为家乡，结合海边城市的特色展开描述，用词贴切地道，口语化的表达符合演讲稿的语境，词数也符合要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
