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三、实战演练
假设你是某中学学生李华,你曾经在电视里看到一位英国作家兼旅行者保护长城的令人感动的事迹报道。请根据以下提示,给你的英国好友 Peter 写一封信,与他分享你的感动。
1. 11 岁时,他第一次在地图上看见长城；
2. 30 岁时,他来到中国,登上长城；
3. 1998 年的一天,他去长城拍照,看到垃圾,感到伤心；
4. 他开始组织志愿者在长城捡垃圾,现已坚持 20 多年；
5. 你认为……
要求：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当拓展；
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名；
4. 词数 70 左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总
词数)。
参考词汇:organize 组织;litter 垃圾
Dear Peter,
How are you? The other day I watched a report about a British writer and traveller. He has been protecting and studying the Great Wall for many years.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是某中学学生李华,你曾经在电视里看到一位英国作家兼旅行者保护长城的令人感动的事迹报道。请根据以下提示,给你的英国好友 Peter 写一封信,与他分享你的感动。
1. 11 岁时,他第一次在地图上看见长城；
2. 30 岁时,他来到中国,登上长城；
3. 1998 年的一天,他去长城拍照,看到垃圾,感到伤心；
4. 他开始组织志愿者在长城捡垃圾,现已坚持 20 多年；
5. 你认为……
要求：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当拓展；
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名；
4. 词数 70 左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总
词数)。
参考词汇:organize 组织;litter 垃圾
Dear Peter,
How are you? The other day I watched a report about a British writer and traveller. He has been protecting and studying the Great Wall for many years.
At the age of 11, he first saw the Great Wall on a map. He dreamed of visiting it one day. At the age of 30, he finally came to China and climbed the Great Wall. He felt so excited. One day in 1998, he went to the Great Wall to take photos. He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere. So he began to organize volunteers to collect litter on the Great Wall. Now it is more than 20 years. I think every Chinese must try his best to protect the Great Wall. We should take actions to love the Great Wall.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
第5课时 单元写作指导
三、实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How are you? The other day I watched a report about a British writer and traveller. He has been protecting and studying the Great Wall for many years.
At the age of 11, he first saw the Great Wall on a map. He dreamed of visiting it one day. At the age of 30, he finally came to China and climbed the Great Wall. He felt so excited. One day in 1998, he went to the Great Wall to take photos. He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere. So he began to organize volunteers to collect litter on the Great Wall. Now it is more than 20 years.
I think every Chinese must try his best to protect the Great Wall. We should take actions to love the Great Wall.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
三、实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How are you? The other day I watched a report about a British writer and traveller. He has been protecting and studying the Great Wall for many years.
At the age of 11, he first saw the Great Wall on a map. He dreamed of visiting it one day. At the age of 30, he finally came to China and climbed the Great Wall. He felt so excited. One day in 1998, he went to the Great Wall to take photos. He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere. So he began to organize volunteers to collect litter on the Great Wall. Now it is more than 20 years.
I think every Chinese must try his best to protect the Great Wall. We should take actions to love the Great Wall.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【解析】
本题是一篇给英国好友的书信写作题，需按时间线叙述英国作家兼旅行者与长城的渊源及保护长城的事迹（11岁见地图、30岁登长城、1998年见垃圾伤心、组织志愿者捡垃圾20余年），并表达个人看法。写作时需注意时态转换，保证行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How are you? The other day I watched a report about a British writer and traveller. He has been protecting and studying the Great Wall for many years.
At the age of 11, he first saw the Great Wall on a map. He dreamed of visiting it one day. At the age of 30, he finally came to China and climbed the Great Wall. He felt so excited. One day in 1998, he went to the Great Wall to take photos. He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere. So he began to organize volunteers to collect litter on the Great Wall. Now it is more than 20 years.
I think every Chinese must try his best to protect the Great Wall. We should take actions to love the Great Wall.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
书信写作格式、时态灵活运用、观点表达
【点评】
范文完整覆盖所有提示要点，时间线清晰，逻辑连贯，语言表达通顺自然，符合词数要求，且合理抒发了对保护长城的个人见解，是一篇符合要求的优质范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是一篇给英国好友的书信写作题，需按时间线叙述英国作家兼旅行者与长城的渊源及保护长城的事迹（11岁见地图、30岁登长城、1998年见垃圾伤心、组织志愿者捡垃圾20余年），并表达个人看法。写作时需注意时态转换，保证行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How are you? The other day I watched a report about a British writer and traveller. He has been protecting and studying the Great Wall for many years.
At the age of 11, he first saw the Great Wall on a map. He dreamed of visiting it one day. At the age of 30, he finally came to China and climbed the Great Wall. He felt so excited. One day in 1998, he went to the Great Wall to take photos. He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere. So he began to organize volunteers to collect litter on the Great Wall. Now it is more than 20 years.
I think every Chinese must try his best to protect the Great Wall. We should take actions to love the Great Wall.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
书信写作格式、时态灵活运用、观点表达
【点评】
范文完整覆盖所有提示要点，时间线清晰，逻辑连贯，语言表达通顺自然，符合词数要求，且合理抒发了对保护长城的个人见解，是一篇符合要求的优质范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
