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61.暑假快要来了,你想要提前规划自己的假期生活,尤其是培养每天阅读的好习惯。学校英语校刊正在开展"培养假期好习惯"专题征稿活动,请结合以下提示,写一篇短文向校刊投稿。
要求:
(1)包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)词数80—100;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
My Summer Reading Plan
I want to build a good reading habit this summer.
61.暑假快要来了,你想要提前规划自己的假期生活,尤其是培养每天阅读的好习惯。学校英语校刊正在开展"培养假期好习惯"专题征稿活动,请结合以下提示,写一篇短文向校刊投稿。
要求:
(1)包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)词数80—100;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
My Summer Reading Plan
I want to build a good reading habit this summer.
Reading can relax myself and help me learn new things, so I decide to make it an important part of my holiday life. I plan to read storybooks and some nonfiction books. I will read for about twenty minutes every morning. Sometimes I will stay at home,and sometimes I will go to the library to enjoy a quiet reading time.
To keep this habit, I will join the reading club and read every day. I hope reading can open my mind and make my summer more meaningful.
答案
My Summer Reading Plan
I want to build a good reading habit this
summer. Reading can relax myself and help me
learn new things, so I decide to make it an
important part of my holiday life. I plan to read
storybooks and some nonfiction books. I will read
for about twenty minutes every morning.
Sometimes I will stay at home,and sometimes I
will go to the library to enjoy a quiet reading
time.
To keep this habit, I will join the reading
club and read every day. I hope reading can open
my mind and make my summer more meaningful.
I want to build a good reading habit this
summer. Reading can relax myself and help me
learn new things, so I decide to make it an
important part of my holiday life. I plan to read
storybooks and some nonfiction books. I will read
for about twenty minutes every morning.
Sometimes I will stay at home,and sometimes I
will go to the library to enjoy a quiet reading
time.
To keep this habit, I will join the reading
club and read every day. I hope reading can open
my mind and make my summer more meaningful.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题，先明确核心要求是写一篇主题为暑假阅读计划的投稿短文，需要完整覆盖表格给出的4个要点：阅读的原因、计划阅读的内容、阅读的时间和地点、坚持阅读习惯的方法。第一步先承接题目给出的开头，先点明阅读的作用，对应第一个要点，除了提示的放松自我，还可以补充增长见识这类合理的内容；第二步说明自己计划阅读的书目类型，比如故事书、科普类书籍；第三步交代阅读的时间和场景，比如固定每天的阅读时长，选择在家或者图书馆这类合适的地点；第四步说明坚持习惯的具体方法，最后简单收尾升华阅读的意义，全程控制词数在80-100之间，不要出现真实姓名和校名即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，点明阅读的价值：既可以放松自我，也能帮助自己学习新知识，说明自己把阅读列为假期的重要安排，完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 接下来说明阅读的内容：计划阅读故事书和部分非虚构类科普书籍，完成第二个要点。
3. 之后交代阅读的时间和地点：安排每天早上阅读20分钟，既可以在家阅读，也可以去图书馆享受安静的阅读氛围，完成第三个要点。
4. 最后说明坚持习惯的方法：加入阅读俱乐部，保证每日阅读，最后点出阅读能开阔眼界，让暑假更有意义，完成第四个要点的同时收尾全文，整体时态以一般将来时为主，逻辑连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
My Summer Reading Plan
I want to build a good reading habit this summer. Reading can relax myself and help me learn new things, so I decide to make it an important part of my holiday life. I plan to read storybooks and some nonfiction books. I will read for about twenty minutes every morning. Sometimes I will stay at home,and sometimes I will go to the library to enjoy a quiet reading time.
To keep this habit, I will join the reading club and read every day. I hope reading can open my mind and make my summer more meaningful.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
一般将来时运用
要点式写作
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生日常生活的应用文写作，所有写作要点都已经明确给出，学生只需要按照提示的四个维度依次展开内容，适当补充符合生活逻辑的细节，控制好词数，规避真实个人信息，就可以完成合格的短文，能够很好地锻炼学生梳理写作逻辑、完整覆盖写作要点的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道写作题，先明确核心要求是写一篇主题为暑假阅读计划的投稿短文，需要完整覆盖表格给出的4个要点：阅读的原因、计划阅读的内容、阅读的时间和地点、坚持阅读习惯的方法。第一步先承接题目给出的开头，先点明阅读的作用，对应第一个要点，除了提示的放松自我，还可以补充增长见识这类合理的内容；第二步说明自己计划阅读的书目类型，比如故事书、科普类书籍；第三步交代阅读的时间和场景，比如固定每天的阅读时长，选择在家或者图书馆这类合适的地点；第四步说明坚持习惯的具体方法，最后简单收尾升华阅读的意义，全程控制词数在80-100之间，不要出现真实姓名和校名即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，点明阅读的价值：既可以放松自我，也能帮助自己学习新知识，说明自己把阅读列为假期的重要安排，完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 接下来说明阅读的内容：计划阅读故事书和部分非虚构类科普书籍，完成第二个要点。
3. 之后交代阅读的时间和地点：安排每天早上阅读20分钟，既可以在家阅读，也可以去图书馆享受安静的阅读氛围，完成第三个要点。
4. 最后说明坚持习惯的方法：加入阅读俱乐部，保证每日阅读，最后点出阅读能开阔眼界，让暑假更有意义，完成第四个要点的同时收尾全文，整体时态以一般将来时为主，逻辑连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
My Summer Reading Plan
I want to build a good reading habit this summer. Reading can relax myself and help me learn new things, so I decide to make it an important part of my holiday life. I plan to read storybooks and some nonfiction books. I will read for about twenty minutes every morning. Sometimes I will stay at home,and sometimes I will go to the library to enjoy a quiet reading time.
To keep this habit, I will join the reading club and read every day. I hope reading can open my mind and make my summer more meaningful.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
一般将来时运用
要点式写作
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生日常生活的应用文写作，所有写作要点都已经明确给出，学生只需要按照提示的四个维度依次展开内容，适当补充符合生活逻辑的细节，控制好词数，规避真实个人信息，就可以完成合格的短文，能够很好地锻炼学生梳理写作逻辑、完整覆盖写作要点的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
