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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
“广大青年要厚植家国情怀、涵养进取品格，以奋斗姿态激扬青春，不负时代，不负华年。”习近平总书记对青年一代提出殷切希望，为当代青年的成长指引航向。为此，Kashgar Weekly发起以“How to be a sunshine teenager”为题的征文。请根据以下提示写一篇关于自己的征文。
内容提示:1. Have you read any classics?
2. Have you ever been to some meaningful places?
3. Do you help your parents with chores?
4. Do you have a healthy lifestyle(生活方式)?
要求:1.参考所给提示,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
4.80—120词。
“广大青年要厚植家国情怀、涵养进取品格，以奋斗姿态激扬青春，不负时代，不负华年。”习近平总书记对青年一代提出殷切希望，为当代青年的成长指引航向。为此，Kashgar Weekly发起以“How to be a sunshine teenager”为题的征文。请根据以下提示写一篇关于自己的征文。
内容提示:1. Have you read any classics?
2. Have you ever been to some meaningful places?
3. Do you help your parents with chores?
4. Do you have a healthy lifestyle(生活方式)?
要求:1.参考所给提示,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
4.80—120词。
答案
One possible version:
How to be a sunshine teenager
To be a sunshine teenager,we should have a healthy lifestyle. Let me tell you what I've learnt in the past year and what I will do in the coming summer vacation.
I have read a lot of classics which have helped me understand the importance of family and country. At the same time, I have visited different kinds of museums and enriched my experience. I often help my parents with chores,such as cooking dinner, washing clothes and so on. I exercise every day and I have a healthy lifestyle.
I plan to improve my life skills and take part in volunteer activities during the summer holiday. I will work hard to be a sunshine teenager.
How to be a sunshine teenager
To be a sunshine teenager,we should have a healthy lifestyle. Let me tell you what I've learnt in the past year and what I will do in the coming summer vacation.
I have read a lot of classics which have helped me understand the importance of family and country. At the same time, I have visited different kinds of museums and enriched my experience. I often help my parents with chores,such as cooking dinner, washing clothes and so on. I exercise every day and I have a healthy lifestyle.
I plan to improve my life skills and take part in volunteer activities during the summer holiday. I will work hard to be a sunshine teenager.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“How to be a sunshine teenager”为题写征文，需结合四个提示点（阅读经典、去过的有意义的地方、帮父母做家务、健康生活方式），适当发挥，符合80-120词、语句通顺等要求。解题思路：1. 开篇点题，明确做阳光少年的核心方向；2. 依次回应四个提示点，补充具体内容（如读经典的收获、参观博物馆的经历、帮父母做家务的事例、日常锻炼的习惯）；3. 适当添加未来计划（如暑假安排），最后总结表态，确保内容连贯、语法正确。
【解析】按照题目要求，先开篇点明要做阳光少年的主题；接着结合提示展开：提及阅读经典帮助理解家国重要性，参观不同博物馆丰富阅历，帮父母做做饭、洗衣服等家务，每天锻炼保持健康生活方式；最后补充暑假计划提升生活技能、参与志愿活动，呼应主题完成征文。
【答案】One possible version:
How to be a sunshine teenager
To be a sunshine teenager,we should have a healthy lifestyle. Let me tell you what I've learnt in the past year and what I will do in the coming summer vacation.
I have read a lot of classics which have helped me understand the importance of family and country. At the same time, I have visited different kinds of museums and enriched my experience. I often help my parents with chores,such as cooking dinner, washing clothes and so on. I exercise every day and I have a healthy lifestyle.
I plan to improve my life skills and take part in volunteer activities during the summer holiday. I will work hard to be a sunshine teenager.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】本题结合时政热点，围绕青年成长主题设题，既考查学生英语语言运用能力，又引导学生树立正确的价值观，符合英语学科核心素养的培养要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照题目要求，先开篇点明要做阳光少年的主题；接着结合提示展开：提及阅读经典帮助理解家国重要性，参观不同博物馆丰富阅历，帮父母做做饭、洗衣服等家务，每天锻炼保持健康生活方式；最后补充暑假计划提升生活技能、参与志愿活动，呼应主题完成征文。
【答案】One possible version:
How to be a sunshine teenager
To be a sunshine teenager,we should have a healthy lifestyle. Let me tell you what I've learnt in the past year and what I will do in the coming summer vacation.
I have read a lot of classics which have helped me understand the importance of family and country. At the same time, I have visited different kinds of museums and enriched my experience. I often help my parents with chores,such as cooking dinner, washing clothes and so on. I exercise every day and I have a healthy lifestyle.
I plan to improve my life skills and take part in volunteer activities during the summer holiday. I will work hard to be a sunshine teenager.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】本题结合时政热点，围绕青年成长主题设题，既考查学生英语语言运用能力，又引导学生树立正确的价值观，符合英语学科核心素养的培养要求。
【难度系数】0.6
