Ⅵ.书面表达。
同学们，在成长的道路上，我们身边总有许多值得敬仰与钦佩的人，比如父母、老师、朋友等。他们帮助过我们、激励过我们……。请根据以下要点提示，以“The Person I Admire the Most”为题，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，介绍你最钦佩的人。
要点提示：
1. Who is the person you admire the most?
2. Why do you admire him or her?
3. How does he or she influence your dream and what will you do for your dream?

One possible version：
The Person I Admire the Most
The person I admire the most is Yuan Longping. He was a great scientist who worked hard to develop hybrid rice. His research helped solve food problems for millions of people.
I admire him because he never gave up and always cared about others. His story influences my dream deeply.
I want to be a helpful person like him.
To achieve my dream, I will study hard and learn from his spirit.

【分析】
本题为英语要点式书面表达题，要求围绕“最钦佩的人”展开写作。解题思路：1. 确定写作核心人物（如袁隆平）；2. 紧扣三个要点：说明人物身份与贡献、钦佩的原因、对自身梦想的影响及自身行动；3. 组织语言，确保语句通顺、符合英语表达习惯，满足不少于80词的要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：① 开篇点题，明确最钦佩的人是袁隆平，介绍其身份（伟大科学家）及核心贡献（研发杂交水稻，解决数百万人的粮食问题）；② 阐述钦佩原因：他永不放弃的精神和关心他人的品质；③ 说明其对自身梦想的影响，以及为实现梦想将采取的行动（努力学习，学习他的精神）；④ 检查要点覆盖情况，确保符合词数要求。
【答案】
The Person I Admire the Most
The person I admire the most is Yuan Longping. He was a great scientist who worked hard to develop hybrid rice. His research helped solve food problems for millions of people.
I admire him because he never gave up and always cared about others. His story influences my dream deeply.
I want to be a helpful person like him.
To achieve my dream, I will study hard and learn from his spirit.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、要点式书面表达
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，准确表达了对钦佩人物的情感及自身规划，符合初中英语写作规范。
【难度系数】
0.6