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B. 书面表达
假设你是李明，上文作者暑假去拉萨旅行的短文让你想到了暑假时你和父母在国内游玩的经历。请你给你的笔友 John 写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你的旅行经历。要点如下：
(1)旅行地:写明你此行前往的国内目的地；
(2)旅行期间的活动:写出旅途中开展的游玩体验活动；
(3)旅行感受:总结这次旅行带给你的感受。
注意:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数 80 左右。电子邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
Thank you for your last email. I had a wonderful summer vacation. Let me tell you about my summer trip.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
假设你是李明，上文作者暑假去拉萨旅行的短文让你想到了暑假时你和父母在国内游玩的经历。请你给你的笔友 John 写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你的旅行经历。要点如下：
(1)旅行地:写明你此行前往的国内目的地；
(2)旅行期间的活动:写出旅途中开展的游玩体验活动；
(3)旅行感受:总结这次旅行带给你的感受。
注意:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数 80 左右。电子邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
Thank you for your last email. I had a wonderful summer vacation. Let me tell you about my summer trip.
I took a train trip to Qingdao with my parents. We got there in the afternoon. The weather was sunny and everyone felt comfortable. We couldn't wait to go to the beach near our hotel. The scenery was very beautiful. It took our breath away. We walked along the beach and enjoyed the soft sand and the blue sea. In the evening, we ate dinner beside the sea. Everything tasted good especially the seafood. The next day, we went to Laoshan Mountain. It is not high, but it is famous and the landscape is fantastic. There were thousands of visitors. We took quite a few photos there.
What a wonderful trip I had! I hope to have another visit to Qingdao next year!
How was your summer vacation? Can you tell me?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
I took a train trip to Qingdao with my parents. We got there in the afternoon. The weather was sunny and everyone felt comfortable. We couldn't wait to go to the beach near our hotel. The scenery was very beautiful. It took our breath away. We walked along the beach and enjoyed the soft sand and the blue sea. In the evening, we ate dinner beside the sea. Everything tasted good especially the seafood. The next day, we went to Laoshan Mountain. It is not high, but it is famous and the landscape is fantastic. There were thousands of visitors. We took quite a few photos there.
What a wonderful trip I had! I hope to have another visit to Qingdao next year!
How was your summer vacation? Can you tell me?
What a wonderful trip I had! I hope to have another visit to Qingdao next year!
How was your summer vacation? Can you tell me?
解析
【分析】本题是英语书面表达题，要求给笔友John写电子邮件介绍暑假和父母的国内旅行经历。解题思路：首先明确写作要点（旅行地、旅行活动、旅行感受），其次确定具体的国内旅行地（如青岛），然后围绕旅行地设计具体游玩活动（海滩游玩、海边用餐、爬崂山等），最后总结旅行感受，同时注意邮件格式（开头结尾已给出）、词数要求（80左右），避免使用真实信息，保证语句连贯。
【解析】1. 确定旅行地：选择国内的青岛，符合题目要求；2. 描述旅行活动：用一般过去时描述到达青岛后的天气、海滩游玩、海边晚餐，以及次日爬崂山的经历，内容具体充实；3. 表达旅行感受：总结旅行的美好，表达再次前往的期待，符合要求；4. 注意语言规范：语句连贯，符合邮件语气，词数符合要求，未出现真实信息。
【答案】I took a train trip to Qingdao with my parents. We got there in the afternoon. The weather was sunny and everyone felt comfortable. We couldn't wait to go to the beach near our hotel. The scenery was very beautiful. It took our breath away. We walked along the beach and enjoyed the soft sand and the blue sea. In the evening, we ate dinner beside the sea. Everything tasted good especially the seafood. The next day, we went to Laoshan Mountain. It is not high, but it is famous and the landscape is fantastic. There were thousands of visitors. We took quite a few photos there.
What a wonderful trip I had! I hope to have another visit to Qingdao next year!
How was your summer vacation? Can you tell me?
【知识点】英语书面表达、旅行话题写作、一般过去时
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，围绕旅行经历展开，要点清晰，要求明确，既考查话题词汇的运用，又考查语言组织能力，难度适中，适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 确定旅行地：选择国内的青岛，符合题目要求；2. 描述旅行活动：用一般过去时描述到达青岛后的天气、海滩游玩、海边晚餐，以及次日爬崂山的经历，内容具体充实；3. 表达旅行感受：总结旅行的美好，表达再次前往的期待，符合要求；4. 注意语言规范：语句连贯，符合邮件语气，词数符合要求，未出现真实信息。
【答案】I took a train trip to Qingdao with my parents. We got there in the afternoon. The weather was sunny and everyone felt comfortable. We couldn't wait to go to the beach near our hotel. The scenery was very beautiful. It took our breath away. We walked along the beach and enjoyed the soft sand and the blue sea. In the evening, we ate dinner beside the sea. Everything tasted good especially the seafood. The next day, we went to Laoshan Mountain. It is not high, but it is famous and the landscape is fantastic. There were thousands of visitors. We took quite a few photos there.
What a wonderful trip I had! I hope to have another visit to Qingdao next year!
How was your summer vacation? Can you tell me?
【知识点】英语书面表达、旅行话题写作、一般过去时
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，围绕旅行经历展开，要点清晰，要求明确，既考查话题词汇的运用，又考查语言组织能力，难度适中，适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.5
