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假如你是Lucy，昨天下午你所居住的地方遭遇了一场暴风雨。请你给你的好友Lily写一封电子邮件，向她描述暴风雨来临时的情况，当时你的家人都在做什么以及暴风雨后的情况。
【要求】（1）邮件须包括所有要点内容，并适当拓展；（2）文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名；（3）80词左右。首句已给出，不计入总词数。
分数：______
书写：☆☆☆☆☆
结构：☆☆☆☆☆
内容：☆☆☆☆☆
Advice from your teacher：
______
______
【要求】（1）邮件须包括所有要点内容，并适当拓展；（2）文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名；（3）80词左右。首句已给出，不计入总词数。
分数：______
书写：☆☆☆☆☆
结构：☆☆☆☆☆
内容：☆☆☆☆☆
Advice from your teacher：
______
______
答案
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Dear Lily,
Let me tell you something about the rainstorm yesterday afternoon.
Yours,
Lucy
Let me tell you something about the rainstorm yesterday afternoon.
Yours,
Lucy
答案
At first, it was just another normal day. By four o'clock yesterday afternoon, everything was
; fine. However, at about half past four, I was doing my homework when I suddenly noticed it
; felt like midnight outside. Something turned day into night.
; At that time, my father was looking through the newspaper in the living room while my mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen. I was so scared, but I told my family what was happening loudly as quickly as possible—The rainstorm came! The dark cloud was spreading over the land like a flood. After the rainstorm, there was rubbish everywhere. With the support of our kind neighbours, we cleaned it and got back to our lives quickly. The disaster brought families and neighbours closer than before.
; fine. However, at about half past four, I was doing my homework when I suddenly noticed it
; felt like midnight outside. Something turned day into night.
; At that time, my father was looking through the newspaper in the living room while my mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen. I was so scared, but I told my family what was happening loudly as quickly as possible—The rainstorm came! The dark cloud was spreading over the land like a flood. After the rainstorm, there was rubbish everywhere. With the support of our kind neighbours, we cleaned it and got back to our lives quickly. The disaster brought families and neighbours closer than before.
