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英文杂志《青年旅行》（Travel Youth）正在举办以“Amazing China”为主题的征文活动。该活动旨在邀请全球年轻探索者，用文字作画笔，勾勒中国大地上那些令人向往的风土人情。请你写一篇投稿文章，推荐一处中国的旅游胜地（教材出现的除外），向世界展现你心中的“大美中国”。
要求：1. 不少于90词；
2. 推荐内容需包括下方图中要点。
I want to recommend in China
英文杂志《青年旅行》（Travel Youth）正在举办以“Amazing China”为主题的征文活动。该活动旨在邀请全球年轻探索者，用文字作画笔，勾勒中国大地上那些令人向往的风土人情。请你写一篇投稿文章，推荐一处中国的旅游胜地（教材出现的除外），向世界展现你心中的“大美中国”。
要求：1. 不少于90词；
2. 推荐内容需包括下方图中要点。
I want to recommend in China
答案
A Fantastic City
Xiamen, a beautiful coastal city in Fujian Province, to all young
explorers around the world.
As a famous tourist city with both natural beauty and modern charm, Xiamen offers colorful
activities for visitors. You can walk along the clean Gulangyu Island, a car-free place with
European-style buildings, and enjoy the sound of piano music everywhere. You can also cycle on the seaside road of Huandao and watch the sunrise over the East China Sea.
What makes Xiamen special is its unique culture and delicious food. The local people are warm and friendly, and you must try the tasty seafood and peanut soup. Xiamen is truly a perfect place to relax and experience the beauty of southern China. I believe you will fall in love with it!
Xiamen, a beautiful coastal city in Fujian Province, to all young
explorers around the world.
As a famous tourist city with both natural beauty and modern charm, Xiamen offers colorful
activities for visitors. You can walk along the clean Gulangyu Island, a car-free place with
European-style buildings, and enjoy the sound of piano music everywhere. You can also cycle on the seaside road of Huandao and watch the sunrise over the East China Sea.
What makes Xiamen special is its unique culture and delicious food. The local people are warm and friendly, and you must try the tasty seafood and peanut soup. Xiamen is truly a perfect place to relax and experience the beauty of southern China. I believe you will fall in love with it!
解析
【解析】
这篇征文需紧扣“Amazing China”主题，推荐一处非教材出现的中国旅游胜地，要涵盖图示的Place（地点）、Type（类型）、Activities（活动）、Special things（特色事物）等要点。首先确定推荐地点为福建厦门，点明其滨海旅游城市的类型；接着列举漫步鼓浪屿、环岛路骑行看日出等特色活动；最后介绍厦门独特的人文氛围和美食等特色内容，组织语言时注意句式多样，语言流畅，满足词数要求。
【答案】
A Fantastic City
Xiamen, a beautiful coastal city in Fujian Province, to all young explorers around the world.
As a famous tourist city with both natural beauty and modern charm, Xiamen offers colorful activities for visitors. You can walk along the clean Gulangyu Island, a car-free place with European-style buildings, and enjoy the sound of piano music everywhere. You can also cycle on the seaside road of Huandao and watch the sunrise over the East China Sea.
What makes Xiamen special is its unique culture and delicious food. The local people are warm and friendly, and you must try the tasty seafood and peanut soup. Xiamen is truly a perfect place to relax and experience the beauty of southern China. I believe you will fall in love with it!
【知识点】
英语书面表达，游记类写作，要点整合写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“Amazing China”主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，地点明确，活动介绍具体，特色事物描写生动，语言表达流畅自然，句式丰富，符合征文的语言风格和内容要求，能很好地向世界展现中国城市的魅力。
【难度系数】
0.6
