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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
假如你是陈洁,你所在的学校将举办英语文化节活动,现面向全体学生招募志愿者,协助老师完成活动组织工作。志愿服务时间安排在中午休息时段及下午放学后。你有意参与此次志愿活动,请根据以下
Why do you want to be a volunteer?
What skills or talents do you have?
Why do you think you are a good choice?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Teachers,
I'm writing to apply for the volunteer position of our school's English Cultural Festival.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Jie
假如你是陈洁,你所在的学校将举办英语文化节活动,现面向全体学生招募志愿者,协助老师完成活动组织工作。志愿服务时间安排在中午休息时段及下午放学后。你有意参与此次志愿活动,请根据以下
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,撰写一篇英语短文表达申请意愿。内
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:Why do you want to be a volunteer?
What skills or talents do you have?
Why do you think you are a good choice?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Teachers,
I'm writing to apply for the volunteer position of our school's English Cultural Festival.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Jie
答案
Dear Teachers,
I'm writing to apply for the volunteer position of our school's English Cultural Festival. I want to be a volunteer because I love English and hope to make the festival more lively. Also, it's a great chance to practise my communication skills and work with classmates. I have two useful skills. First, my English is good so I can help explain activity rules to students clearly. Second, I'm experienced. I once helped my class teacher arrange a reading activity. I think I'm a good choice because I'm responsible and flexible. I can work during noon breaks and after school, and I'll try my best to finish any task. I'm sure I can be a helpful volunteer.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Jie
I'm writing to apply for the volunteer position of our school's English Cultural Festival. I want to be a volunteer because I love English and hope to make the festival more lively. Also, it's a great chance to practise my communication skills and work with classmates. I have two useful skills. First, my English is good so I can help explain activity rules to students clearly. Second, I'm experienced. I once helped my class teacher arrange a reading activity. I think I'm a good choice because I'm responsible and flexible. I can work during noon breaks and after school, and I'll try my best to finish any task. I'm sure I can be a helpful volunteer.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Jie
解析
【解析】
这是一篇英语志愿者申请信写作，需严格遵循书信格式，围绕题目指定的三个核心要点展开创作：
1. 阐述申请志愿工作的原因：可从个人兴趣、能力提升等角度切入；
2. 介绍自身具备的技能与特长：结合英语能力、活动组织经验等具体内容说明；
3. 论证自身适合该志愿工作的理由：突出责任心、时间匹配度等关键优势。
写作时语言需正式得体，内容完整覆盖所有提示点，词数符合要求，同时结合题目给出的志愿服务时间安排增强内容说服力。
【答案】
Dear Teachers,
I'm writing to apply for the volunteer position of our school's English Cultural Festival. I want to be a volunteer because I love English and hope to make the festival more lively. Also, it's a great chance to practise my communication skills and work with classmates. I have two useful skills. First, my English is good so I can help explain activity rules to students clearly. Second, I'm experienced. I once helped my class teacher arrange a reading activity. I think I'm a good choice because I'm responsible and flexible. I can work during noon breaks and after school, and I'll try my best to finish any task. I'm sure I can be a helpful volunteer.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Jie
【知识点】
1. 英语申请信写作
2. 志愿话题表达
3. 书信格式规范
【点评】
范文内容完整，全面覆盖题目要求的三个核心要点，逻辑清晰、层次分明。语言流畅自然，用词准确恰当，既充分体现了对志愿工作的热情，又具体展示了自身的能力与优势，同时结合志愿服务时间安排增强了申请的说服力，符合英语书信正式得体的语气，词数也完全符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语志愿者申请信写作，需严格遵循书信格式，围绕题目指定的三个核心要点展开创作：
1. 阐述申请志愿工作的原因：可从个人兴趣、能力提升等角度切入；
2. 介绍自身具备的技能与特长：结合英语能力、活动组织经验等具体内容说明；
3. 论证自身适合该志愿工作的理由：突出责任心、时间匹配度等关键优势。
写作时语言需正式得体，内容完整覆盖所有提示点，词数符合要求，同时结合题目给出的志愿服务时间安排增强内容说服力。
【答案】
Dear Teachers,
I'm writing to apply for the volunteer position of our school's English Cultural Festival. I want to be a volunteer because I love English and hope to make the festival more lively. Also, it's a great chance to practise my communication skills and work with classmates. I have two useful skills. First, my English is good so I can help explain activity rules to students clearly. Second, I'm experienced. I once helped my class teacher arrange a reading activity. I think I'm a good choice because I'm responsible and flexible. I can work during noon breaks and after school, and I'll try my best to finish any task. I'm sure I can be a helpful volunteer.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Jie
【知识点】
1. 英语申请信写作
2. 志愿话题表达
3. 书信格式规范
【点评】
范文内容完整，全面覆盖题目要求的三个核心要点，逻辑清晰、层次分明。语言流畅自然，用词准确恰当，既充分体现了对志愿工作的热情，又具体展示了自身的能力与优势，同时结合志愿服务时间安排增强了申请的说服力，符合英语书信正式得体的语气，词数也完全符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
