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七、书面表达。(9分)
假设今天是你的朋友 Nancy的生日,你们正在她家里给她举办生日聚会。请根据所给的思维导图及提示,发挥想象,以“Nancy's birthday”为题写一篇英语小短文,描述她生日聚会的情形。词数40左右(已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Nancy's birthday
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on ___
It's nine thirty in the morning. We are having a party at Nancy's house. Look! ___
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is making wishes. She wants to ___ We ___ at the party.
假设今天是你的朋友 Nancy的生日,你们正在她家里给她举办生日聚会。请根据所给的思维导图及提示,发挥想象,以“Nancy's birthday”为题写一篇英语小短文,描述她生日聚会的情形。词数40左右(已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Nancy's birthday
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on ___
It's nine thirty in the morning. We are having a party at Nancy's house. Look! ___
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is making wishes. She wants to ___ We ___ at the party.
答案
示例：
Nancy's birthday
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on the
twentieth of July. It's nine thirty in the morning. We are having a party at Nancy's house. Look!
Mike, Liu Tao and Wang Bing are in the living
room. They're playing games. Helen, Yang Ling
and I are singing songs around Nancy. Where are
Nancy's parents? They are both busy in the
kitchen. Her father is making a salad with a lot
of fruit like apples, oranges, grapes, bananas and
cherries. It looks colourful. Her mother is
cooking some nice food for the party.
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is making
wishes. She wants to have a nice doll and dance
well.
We all have a good time at the party.
Nancy's birthday
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on the
twentieth of July. It's nine thirty in the morning. We are having a party at Nancy's house. Look!
Mike, Liu Tao and Wang Bing are in the living
room. They're playing games. Helen, Yang Ling
and I are singing songs around Nancy. Where are
Nancy's parents? They are both busy in the
kitchen. Her father is making a salad with a lot
of fruit like apples, oranges, grapes, bananas and
cherries. It looks colourful. Her mother is
cooking some nice food for the party.
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is making
wishes. She wants to have a nice doll and dance
well.
We all have a good time at the party.
解析
【分析】
这是一道情景类英语书面表达题，解题思路如下：
1. 先结合思维导图的Date板块，补充生日日期，注意英语日期的规范表达，将“20th July”转换为符合英语习惯的“the twentieth of July”。
2. 接着依据Activities板块，利用“Look!”提示的现在进行时态，分别描述男孩、女孩、Nancy父母的聚会活动，可适当添加具体细节如具体人名、水果种类让内容更生动，要遵循现在进行时“be+动词ing”的结构。
3. 然后根据Wishes板块，将“have a nice doll, dance well”整合到“She wants to...”的句式中，用and连接两个愿望，符合want to do的语法结构。
4. 最后结合Feelings板块，用合适的句子表达聚会的感受，收尾呼应主题，同时注意控制词数，让短文连贯自然。
【解析】
1. 日期补充：根据思维导图的日期信息，英语日期常用“the + 序数词 + of + 月份”的结构，所以填写“the twentieth of July”。
2. 活动描写：使用现在进行时（am/is/are + 现在分词）来描绘正在进行的聚会场景，分别介绍男孩玩游戏、女孩唱歌、爸爸制作水果沙拉、妈妈烹饪美食的细节，添加具体人物或食材让内容更充实。
3. 愿望表达：运用“want to do sth.”的结构，将思维导图中的两个愿望用and连接，写成“She wants to have a nice doll and dance well”。
4. 感受总结：用“We all have a good time at the party.”来总结聚会的感受，贴合主题。
【答案】
Nancy's birthday
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on the
twentieth of July. It's nine thirty in the morning. We are having a party at Nancy's house. Look!
Mike, Liu Tao and Wang Bing are in the living
room. They're playing games. Helen, Yang Ling
and I are singing songs around Nancy. Where are
Nancy's parents? They are both busy in the
kitchen. Her father is making a salad with a lot
of fruit like apples, oranges, grapes, bananas and
cherries. It looks colourful. Her mother is
cooking some nice food for the party.
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is making
wishes. She wants to have a nice doll and dance
well.
We all have a good time at the party.
【知识点】
现在进行时用法，英语日期表达，情景英语写作
【点评】
本文围绕Nancy的生日聚会展开，严格结合思维导图的信息，用现在进行时生动还原了聚会场景，内容涵盖生日日期、聚会活动、生日愿望和聚会感受，逻辑清晰，语言流畅，还适当添加细节让短文更具体真实，符合情景写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一道情景类英语书面表达题，解题思路如下：
1. 先结合思维导图的Date板块，补充生日日期，注意英语日期的规范表达，将“20th July”转换为符合英语习惯的“the twentieth of July”。
2. 接着依据Activities板块，利用“Look!”提示的现在进行时态，分别描述男孩、女孩、Nancy父母的聚会活动，可适当添加具体细节如具体人名、水果种类让内容更生动，要遵循现在进行时“be+动词ing”的结构。
3. 然后根据Wishes板块，将“have a nice doll, dance well”整合到“She wants to...”的句式中，用and连接两个愿望，符合want to do的语法结构。
4. 最后结合Feelings板块，用合适的句子表达聚会的感受，收尾呼应主题，同时注意控制词数，让短文连贯自然。
【解析】
1. 日期补充：根据思维导图的日期信息，英语日期常用“the + 序数词 + of + 月份”的结构，所以填写“the twentieth of July”。
2. 活动描写：使用现在进行时（am/is/are + 现在分词）来描绘正在进行的聚会场景，分别介绍男孩玩游戏、女孩唱歌、爸爸制作水果沙拉、妈妈烹饪美食的细节，添加具体人物或食材让内容更充实。
3. 愿望表达：运用“want to do sth.”的结构，将思维导图中的两个愿望用and连接，写成“She wants to have a nice doll and dance well”。
4. 感受总结：用“We all have a good time at the party.”来总结聚会的感受，贴合主题。
【答案】
Nancy's birthday
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on the
twentieth of July. It's nine thirty in the morning. We are having a party at Nancy's house. Look!
Mike, Liu Tao and Wang Bing are in the living
room. They're playing games. Helen, Yang Ling
and I are singing songs around Nancy. Where are
Nancy's parents? They are both busy in the
kitchen. Her father is making a salad with a lot
of fruit like apples, oranges, grapes, bananas and
cherries. It looks colourful. Her mother is
cooking some nice food for the party.
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is making
wishes. She wants to have a nice doll and dance
well.
We all have a good time at the party.
【知识点】
现在进行时用法，英语日期表达，情景英语写作
【点评】
本文围绕Nancy的生日聚会展开，严格结合思维导图的信息，用现在进行时生动还原了聚会场景，内容涵盖生日日期、聚会活动、生日愿望和聚会感受，逻辑清晰，语言流畅，还适当添加细节让短文更具体真实，符合情景写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
