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Ⅲ. 书面表达。
假设你是李华,你准备在"未来职业规划"英语课堂上做一次"我梦想的职业"的演讲。请你根据以下思维导图详细介绍你梦想的职业。
mermaid
graph TD
A[My dream job] --＞ B[Introduce the job
(介绍职业)]
A --＞ C[Describe the key
responsibilities
(描述关键职责)]
A --＞ D[Describe benefits
and challenges
(描述益处与挑战)]
A --＞ E[Comment the job
(评价职业)]
要求:
1. 须包含思维导图中的所有要点,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,书写规范。
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
4. 词数90左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
My dream job—
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my dream job with you. My dream is to be a/ an
假设你是李华,你准备在"未来职业规划"英语课堂上做一次"我梦想的职业"的演讲。请你根据以下思维导图详细介绍你梦想的职业。
mermaid
graph TD
A[My dream job] --＞ B[Introduce the job
(介绍职业)]
A --＞ C[Describe the key
responsibilities
(描述关键职责)]
A --＞ D[Describe benefits
and challenges
(描述益处与挑战)]
A --＞ E[Comment the job
(评价职业)]
要求:
1. 须包含思维导图中的所有要点,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,书写规范。
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
4. 词数90左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
My dream job—
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my dream job with you. My dream is to be a/ an
答案
Ⅲ. One possible version:
My dream job—an AI engineer
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my dream job with you. My dream
is to be an AI engineer.
AI engineers create computer programs. They usually work on the computer and solve
difficult problems. They spend a lot of time testing their programs to make sure they work
well.
This job is challenging and people can find a sense of achievement in the job. They can
create helpful things, like AI teachers and AI doctors.
This job will not be replaced by technology because we need people to create AI. It will
be greatly needed in the future.
I believe it is a rewarding job. It's my dream job. Thank you for listening!
My dream job—an AI engineer
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my dream job with you. My dream
is to be an AI engineer.
AI engineers create computer programs. They usually work on the computer and solve
difficult problems. They spend a lot of time testing their programs to make sure they work
well.
This job is challenging and people can find a sense of achievement in the job. They can
create helpful things, like AI teachers and AI doctors.
This job will not be replaced by technology because we need people to create AI. It will
be greatly needed in the future.
I believe it is a rewarding job. It's my dream job. Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】
首先，这是一篇“我梦想的职业”主题的英语演讲书面表达，需严格覆盖思维导图的四个核心要点：介绍职业、描述关键职责、阐述益处与挑战、评价职业。解题思路如下：
1. 确定具体职业：选择一个清晰明确的职业，比如AI工程师，补全标题和开头的空缺部分，开篇点明职业。
2. 分模块展开内容：
介绍职业：简单说明职业的基本定位，让听众快速了解职业属性。
描述职责：结合职业特点，列举具体的工作内容，使内容真实具体。
益处与挑战：既要说明职业带来的成就感、价值等益处，也要提及工作中的难点，体现内容的全面性。
评价职业：从职业的不可替代性、未来发展等角度进行总结评价，升华主题。
3. 注意行文连贯，控制词数，符合演讲的口语化且正式的语境，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 补全标题与开头：确定职业为AI工程师，标题写为“an AI engineer”，开头空缺处填“an AI engineer”，明确演讲主题。
2. 介绍职业：开篇直接点明梦想职业是AI工程师，让听众清晰了解主题。
3. 描述关键职责：详细说明AI工程师的日常工作，如编写计算机程序、解决难题、测试程序确保正常运行，使职责内容具体可感。
4. 阐述益处与挑战：指出工作具有挑战性，同时能获得成就感，还能创造出AI教师、AI医生这类有用的产品，兼顾挑战与益处两方面。
5. 评价职业：从职业的不可替代性，即不会被技术取代，、未来需求度，即未来需求大，进行评价，最后总结这是一份有价值的工作，呼应主题。
6. 结尾添加礼貌用语“Thank you for listening!”，符合演讲的格式要求。
【答案】
My dream job—an AI engineer
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my dream job with you. My dream is to be an AI engineer.
AI engineers create computer programs. They usually work on the computer and solve difficult problems. They spend a lot of time testing their programs to make sure they work well.
This job is challenging and people can find a sense of achievement in the job. They can create helpful things, like AI teachers and AI doctors.
This job will not be replaced by technology because we need people to create AI. It will be greatly needed in the future.
I believe it is a rewarding job. It's my dream job. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
职业类书面表达、英语演讲写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖思维导图的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯。内容充实具体，结合AI工程师的职业特点展开，既体现了工作的细节，又阐述了职业的价值，符合演讲的语境，用词准确，是一篇优秀的范文，能为同类写作提供良好的参考。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，这是一篇“我梦想的职业”主题的英语演讲书面表达，需严格覆盖思维导图的四个核心要点：介绍职业、描述关键职责、阐述益处与挑战、评价职业。解题思路如下：
1. 确定具体职业：选择一个清晰明确的职业，比如AI工程师，补全标题和开头的空缺部分，开篇点明职业。
2. 分模块展开内容：
介绍职业：简单说明职业的基本定位，让听众快速了解职业属性。
描述职责：结合职业特点，列举具体的工作内容，使内容真实具体。
益处与挑战：既要说明职业带来的成就感、价值等益处，也要提及工作中的难点，体现内容的全面性。
评价职业：从职业的不可替代性、未来发展等角度进行总结评价，升华主题。
3. 注意行文连贯，控制词数，符合演讲的口语化且正式的语境，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 补全标题与开头：确定职业为AI工程师，标题写为“an AI engineer”，开头空缺处填“an AI engineer”，明确演讲主题。
2. 介绍职业：开篇直接点明梦想职业是AI工程师，让听众清晰了解主题。
3. 描述关键职责：详细说明AI工程师的日常工作，如编写计算机程序、解决难题、测试程序确保正常运行，使职责内容具体可感。
4. 阐述益处与挑战：指出工作具有挑战性，同时能获得成就感，还能创造出AI教师、AI医生这类有用的产品，兼顾挑战与益处两方面。
5. 评价职业：从职业的不可替代性，即不会被技术取代，、未来需求度，即未来需求大，进行评价，最后总结这是一份有价值的工作，呼应主题。
6. 结尾添加礼貌用语“Thank you for listening!”，符合演讲的格式要求。
【答案】
My dream job—an AI engineer
Hello, everyone. Today, I am very excited to share my dream job with you. My dream is to be an AI engineer.
AI engineers create computer programs. They usually work on the computer and solve difficult problems. They spend a lot of time testing their programs to make sure they work well.
This job is challenging and people can find a sense of achievement in the job. They can create helpful things, like AI teachers and AI doctors.
This job will not be replaced by technology because we need people to create AI. It will be greatly needed in the future.
I believe it is a rewarding job. It's my dream job. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
职业类书面表达、英语演讲写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖思维导图的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯。内容充实具体，结合AI工程师的职业特点展开，既体现了工作的细节，又阐述了职业的价值，符合演讲的语境，用词准确，是一篇优秀的范文，能为同类写作提供良好的参考。
【难度系数】
0.6
