七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
端午节 (Dragon Boat Festival) 是中国的传统节日之一。假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jimmy 对端午节很感兴趣,写信向你询问相关信息。请你根据以下
When and why do people celebrate Dragon Boat Festival in China?
What do people do to celebrate Dragon Boat Festival?
What’s your experience about Dragon Boat Festival?
Something more about your ideas.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 100 左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jimmy,
I’m glad you are interested in Dragon Boat Festival.
Yours,
Li Hua
端午节 (Dragon Boat Festival) 是中国的传统节日之一。假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jimmy 对端午节很感兴趣,写信向你询问相关信息。请你根据以下
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,用英语给他写一封回信,介绍端午节并分享你的节日经历。内
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:When and why do people celebrate Dragon Boat Festival in China?
What do people do to celebrate Dragon Boat Festival?
What’s your experience about Dragon Boat Festival?
Something more about your ideas.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 100 左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jimmy,
I’m glad you are interested in Dragon Boat Festival.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
[参考范文]
Dear Jimmy,
I'm glad you are interested in Dragon Boat Festival. It's one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals. With a history of more than 2,000 years, it is celebrated on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month.
To honor the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself in the river. People celebrate the day by holding dragon boat races and eating zongzi. Besides, we hang wormwood leaves for good luck. This year, I helped my grandma make zongzi. It was fun but tricky. With loud drums and cheering crowds, the dragon boat races are exciting.
In short, Dragon Boat Festival is important and meaningful in Chinese culture. It is our duty to respect and value our traditions.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jimmy,
I'm glad you are interested in Dragon Boat Festival. It's one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals. With a history of more than 2,000 years, it is celebrated on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month.
To honor the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself in the river. People celebrate the day by holding dragon boat races and eating zongzi. Besides, we hang wormwood leaves for good luck. This year, I helped my grandma make zongzi. It was fun but tricky. With loud drums and cheering crowds, the dragon boat races are exciting.
In short, Dragon Boat Festival is important and meaningful in Chinese culture. It is our duty to respect and value our traditions.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【解析】
1. 写作思路:先回应笔友兴趣,介绍端午节的时间与纪念屈原的由来;接着列举赛龙舟、吃粽子、挂艾草等庆祝活动;再分享个人节日经历(如帮长辈包粽子、观看赛龙舟);最后表达对节日的看法,强调传承传统文化的重要性。
2. 注意事项:遵循书信格式,词数控制在要求范围内,不得透露真实个人信息,语言表达需流畅自然,紧扣题目所有要点。
【答案】
Dear Jimmy,
I'm glad you are interested in Dragon Boat Festival. It's one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals. With a history of more than 2,000 years, it is celebrated on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month.
To honor the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself in the river. People celebrate the day by holding dragon boat races and eating zongzi. Besides, we hang wormwood leaves for good luck. This year, I helped my grandma make zongzi. It was fun but tricky. With loud drums and cheering crowds, the dragon boat races are exciting.
In short, Dragon Boat Festival is important and meaningful in Chinese culture. It is our duty to respect and value our traditions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、传统节日英文介绍、记叙文写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰,内容完整,紧扣题目所有要求:从节日基本信息到个人经历,再到文化内涵的传达,层层递进。语言表达流畅自然,符合书信的语气,既完成了信息介绍,又融入了个人真情实感,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 写作思路:先回应笔友兴趣,介绍端午节的时间与纪念屈原的由来;接着列举赛龙舟、吃粽子、挂艾草等庆祝活动;再分享个人节日经历(如帮长辈包粽子、观看赛龙舟);最后表达对节日的看法,强调传承传统文化的重要性。
2. 注意事项:遵循书信格式,词数控制在要求范围内,不得透露真实个人信息,语言表达需流畅自然,紧扣题目所有要点。
【答案】
Dear Jimmy,
I'm glad you are interested in Dragon Boat Festival. It's one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals. With a history of more than 2,000 years, it is celebrated on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month.
To honor the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself in the river. People celebrate the day by holding dragon boat races and eating zongzi. Besides, we hang wormwood leaves for good luck. This year, I helped my grandma make zongzi. It was fun but tricky. With loud drums and cheering crowds, the dragon boat races are exciting.
In short, Dragon Boat Festival is important and meaningful in Chinese culture. It is our duty to respect and value our traditions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、传统节日英文介绍、记叙文写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰,内容完整,紧扣题目所有要求:从节日基本信息到个人经历,再到文化内涵的传达,层层递进。语言表达流畅自然,符合书信的语气,既完成了信息介绍,又融入了个人真情实感,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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