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八(徐州市期末)书面表达。(8分)
观察图表中Ben一天的饮食，结合食物金字塔图，从以下两个方面写一写他的饮食情况。
范围：1. 描述Ben一天的饮食；2. 评价Ben的饮食习惯并给出建议。
要求：1. 所写内容须包含图表中的信息；2. 不少于40词(已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Ben's diet
Look! This is Ben's diet. ___
观察图表中Ben一天的饮食，结合食物金字塔图，从以下两个方面写一写他的饮食情况。
范围：1. 描述Ben一天的饮食；2. 评价Ben的饮食习惯并给出建议。
要求：1. 所写内容须包含图表中的信息；2. 不少于40词(已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Ben's diet
Look! This is Ben's diet. ___
答案
Ben's diet
Look! This is Ben's diet. For breakfast, he eats a hot dog, two pies and a carton of milk. At lunch, he has a bowl of rice, some fish and beef. He also drinks a big bottle of cola. And for dinner, he eats beef again, along with a piece of cake and some sweets.
Ben's diet has some problems. He eats too much meat and sweet food, but he doesn't eat enough vegetables, fruit or whole grains. According to the food pyramid, he should eat more healthy food like vegetables, fruit and whole grains instead of sweets and junk food. Also, drinking water is better than cola. If Ben improves his diet, he will be healthier!
Look! This is Ben's diet. For breakfast, he eats a hot dog, two pies and a carton of milk. At lunch, he has a bowl of rice, some fish and beef. He also drinks a big bottle of cola. And for dinner, he eats beef again, along with a piece of cake and some sweets.
Ben's diet has some problems. He eats too much meat and sweet food, but he doesn't eat enough vegetables, fruit or whole grains. According to the food pyramid, he should eat more healthy food like vegetables, fruit and whole grains instead of sweets and junk food. Also, drinking water is better than cola. If Ben improves his diet, he will be healthier!
解析
【分析】
解题思路分为两步：首先，需要准确描述Ben一天早、中、晚三餐的饮食内容，不能遗漏图表中的任何食物；其次，结合右侧的食物金字塔，分析Ben饮食的不合理之处，再给出符合健康饮食标准的建议。
第一步，先梳理三餐的食物：早餐有热狗、两个派、一盒牛奶；午餐有米饭、鱼、牛肉、一大瓶可乐；晚餐有牛肉、一块蛋糕、一些糖果，用通顺的英语把这些内容按三餐顺序表达出来。
第二步，对照食物金字塔，金字塔底层是谷物、主食，往上是蔬菜水果，再是肉、奶、鱼，最上层是少量的甜食和油炸食品。Ben的饮食中肉类和甜食占比过多，缺少蔬菜水果和足够的全谷物，据此指出问题，然后给出具体建议，比如多吃蔬果和谷物，用饮用水代替可乐，减少甜食和垃圾食品的摄入。
【解析】
1. 描述饮食部分：按照早餐（breakfast）、午餐（lunch）、晚餐（dinner）的顺序，依次列出Ben的食物，使用“For breakfast, he eats...”, “At lunch, he has...”, “And for dinner, he eats...”这样的结构，清晰呈现三餐内容。
2. 评价与建议部分：先点明Ben饮食存在问题，结合食物金字塔指出他肉类和甜食摄入过多，缺少蔬果、全谷物等健康食物；接着给出针对性建议，如多吃蔬果和全谷物，用饮用水替代可乐，减少甜食和垃圾食品的食用，最后说明改善饮食的好处。
【答案】
Ben's diet
Look! This is Ben's diet. For breakfast, he eats a hot dog, two pies and a carton of milk. At lunch, he has a bowl of rice, some fish and beef. He also drinks a big bottle of cola. And for dinner, he eats beef again, along with a piece of cake and some sweets.
Ben's diet has some problems. He eats too much meat and sweet food, but he doesn't eat enough vegetables, fruit or whole grains. According to the food pyramid, he should eat more healthy food like vegetables, fruit and whole grains instead of sweets and junk food. Also, drinking water is better than cola. If Ben improves his diet, he will be healthier!
【知识点】
饮食类英语表达；书面表达结构；健康饮食话题
【点评】
本文结构清晰，先准确描述了Ben的一日三餐，再结合食物金字塔客观评价其饮食习惯的问题，最后给出合理可行的建议，内容完整符合题目要求，语言表达流畅自然，能准确运用相关词汇和句式完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
解题思路分为两步：首先，需要准确描述Ben一天早、中、晚三餐的饮食内容，不能遗漏图表中的任何食物；其次，结合右侧的食物金字塔，分析Ben饮食的不合理之处，再给出符合健康饮食标准的建议。
第一步，先梳理三餐的食物：早餐有热狗、两个派、一盒牛奶；午餐有米饭、鱼、牛肉、一大瓶可乐；晚餐有牛肉、一块蛋糕、一些糖果，用通顺的英语把这些内容按三餐顺序表达出来。
第二步，对照食物金字塔，金字塔底层是谷物、主食，往上是蔬菜水果，再是肉、奶、鱼，最上层是少量的甜食和油炸食品。Ben的饮食中肉类和甜食占比过多，缺少蔬菜水果和足够的全谷物，据此指出问题，然后给出具体建议，比如多吃蔬果和谷物，用饮用水代替可乐，减少甜食和垃圾食品的摄入。
【解析】
1. 描述饮食部分：按照早餐（breakfast）、午餐（lunch）、晚餐（dinner）的顺序，依次列出Ben的食物，使用“For breakfast, he eats...”, “At lunch, he has...”, “And for dinner, he eats...”这样的结构，清晰呈现三餐内容。
2. 评价与建议部分：先点明Ben饮食存在问题，结合食物金字塔指出他肉类和甜食摄入过多，缺少蔬果、全谷物等健康食物；接着给出针对性建议，如多吃蔬果和全谷物，用饮用水替代可乐，减少甜食和垃圾食品的食用，最后说明改善饮食的好处。
【答案】
Ben's diet
Look! This is Ben's diet. For breakfast, he eats a hot dog, two pies and a carton of milk. At lunch, he has a bowl of rice, some fish and beef. He also drinks a big bottle of cola. And for dinner, he eats beef again, along with a piece of cake and some sweets.
Ben's diet has some problems. He eats too much meat and sweet food, but he doesn't eat enough vegetables, fruit or whole grains. According to the food pyramid, he should eat more healthy food like vegetables, fruit and whole grains instead of sweets and junk food. Also, drinking water is better than cola. If Ben improves his diet, he will be healthier!
【知识点】
饮食类英语表达；书面表达结构；健康饮食话题
【点评】
本文结构清晰，先准确描述了Ben的一日三餐，再结合食物金字塔客观评价其饮食习惯的问题，最后给出合理可行的建议，内容完整符合题目要求，语言表达流畅自然，能准确运用相关词汇和句式完成写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
