Ⅵ. 书面表达。(20 分)
假如你是 Judy,刚刚度过了一个难忘的假期,请用英文写一篇 70 词左右的短文,介绍一下你的假期经历。注意:文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
假如你是 Judy,刚刚度过了一个难忘的假期,请用英文写一篇 70 词左右的短文,介绍一下你的假期经历。注意:文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
答案
One possible version:
Last week, I went on vacation. On the first day, I went to the mountains. On the second day, I went to the zoo. I saw lots of interesting animals there. On the third day, I visited Aunt Sue. My aunt treated me with delicious food and I also played games with my cousins. On the fourth day, I went camping. Then I went swimming. On the fifth day, I visited the Palace Museum. I really had a great vacation!
Last week, I went on vacation. On the first day, I went to the mountains. On the second day, I went to the zoo. I saw lots of interesting animals there. On the third day, I visited Aunt Sue. My aunt treated me with delicious food and I also played games with my cousins. On the fourth day, I went camping. Then I went swimming. On the fifth day, I visited the Palace Museum. I really had a great vacation!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作要求:身份为Judy,主题是介绍难忘的假期经历,词数70左右,不能出现真实人名、校名、地名。解题思路:1. 确定时态为一般过去时(描述过去的假期活动);2. 采用时间顺序安排假期活动,选择具体且有细节的内容让文章充实;3. 结尾表达感受,呼应“难忘”的主题;4. 控制词数,避免真实信息。
【解析】
写作时需注意:① 时态统一使用一般过去时,准确描述过去的动作;② 采用“总-分-总”结构:开头点明度假,中间按时间顺序列举假期活动,结尾总结感受;③ 加入细节(如看到有趣动物、和表兄妹玩游戏等)丰富内容;④ 严格控制词数,不出现真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version: Last week, I went on vacation. On the first day, I went to the mountains. On the second day, I went to the zoo. I saw lots of interesting animals there. On the third day, I visited Aunt Sue. My aunt treated me with delicious food and I also played games with my cousins. On the fourth day, I went camping. Then I went swimming. On the fifth day, I visited the Palace Museum. I really had a great vacation!
【知识点】
英语书面表达(假期话题);一般过去时的运用
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题,结构清晰,按时间顺序叙述假期经历,细节丰富,时态正确,语言简洁流畅,符合词数要求,完美达成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作要求:身份为Judy,主题是介绍难忘的假期经历,词数70左右,不能出现真实人名、校名、地名。解题思路:1. 确定时态为一般过去时(描述过去的假期活动);2. 采用时间顺序安排假期活动,选择具体且有细节的内容让文章充实;3. 结尾表达感受,呼应“难忘”的主题;4. 控制词数,避免真实信息。
【解析】
写作时需注意:① 时态统一使用一般过去时,准确描述过去的动作;② 采用“总-分-总”结构:开头点明度假,中间按时间顺序列举假期活动,结尾总结感受;③ 加入细节(如看到有趣动物、和表兄妹玩游戏等)丰富内容;④ 严格控制词数,不出现真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version: Last week, I went on vacation. On the first day, I went to the mountains. On the second day, I went to the zoo. I saw lots of interesting animals there. On the third day, I visited Aunt Sue. My aunt treated me with delicious food and I also played games with my cousins. On the fourth day, I went camping. Then I went swimming. On the fifth day, I visited the Palace Museum. I really had a great vacation!
【知识点】
英语书面表达(假期话题);一般过去时的运用
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题,结构清晰,按时间顺序叙述假期经历,细节丰富,时态正确,语言简洁流畅,符合词数要求,完美达成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
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