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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
陶行知曾说：“思想决定行动，行动养成习惯，习惯形成品质，品质决定命运。”本周你们班将组织“良好习惯，伴其一生”主题班会。假如你的好朋友Danny是个品学兼优的学生，为了号召同学们向他学习，请你根据下面表格的提示介绍他的好习惯，并谈谈自己的看法。
要求:1.包括表格的全部内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.80—100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits.
陶行知曾说：“思想决定行动，行动养成习惯，习惯形成品质，品质决定命运。”本周你们班将组织“良好习惯，伴其一生”主题班会。假如你的好朋友Danny是个品学兼优的学生，为了号召同学们向他学习，请你根据下面表格的提示介绍他的好习惯，并谈谈自己的看法。
要求:1.包括表格的全部内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.80—100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits.
答案
Ⅶ. Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits.
He exercises three or four times a week. He is in good health. His room is very tidy because he cleans it every day. On the weekend, he often helps his parents with housework. He enjoys reading a lot. He reads books for half an hour every night. He always finishes his homework on time. And he never stays up. He thinks getting enough sleep is necessary for students. What's more, he often eats fruit and vegetables. He drinks milk every morning. He has a very healthy lifestyle.
I think it's important for us to develop good habits. They can help us get good grades and enjoy a healthy life.
He exercises three or four times a week. He is in good health. His room is very tidy because he cleans it every day. On the weekend, he often helps his parents with housework. He enjoys reading a lot. He reads books for half an hour every night. He always finishes his homework on time. And he never stays up. He thinks getting enough sleep is necessary for students. What's more, he often eats fruit and vegetables. He drinks milk every morning. He has a very healthy lifestyle.
I think it's important for us to develop good habits. They can help us get good grades and enjoy a healthy life.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“良好习惯，伴其一生”为主题，介绍好朋友Danny的好习惯并谈看法，需包含表格中休闲活动、学习习惯、饮食健康的全部内容，语句通顺，字数80-100词。解题思路：先承接已给开头，依次将表格中的中文提示转化为符合英语表达的句子，适当补充细节使内容连贯，最后结合主题表达自己对好习惯重要性的看法，注意使用一般现在时描述日常习惯，确保词汇准确、逻辑清晰。
【解析】
首先承接开头，依次介绍Danny的好习惯：
1. 休闲活动：He exercises three or four times a week. He cleans his room every day and often helps his parents with housework on weekends.
2. 学习习惯：He reads books for half an hour every day, always finishes his homework on time and never stays up late.
3. 饮食健康：He often eats fruit and vegetables, and drinks milk every morning.
最后表达看法：I think good habits are important. They help us get good grades and live a healthy life. 整合后形成完整文章，确保语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【答案】
Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits.
He exercises three or four times a week. He is in good health. His room is very tidy because he cleans it every day. On the weekend, he often helps his parents with housework. He enjoys reading a lot. He reads books for half an hour every night. He always finishes his homework on time. And he never stays up. He thinks getting enough sleep is necessary for students. What's more, he often eats fruit and vegetables. He drinks milk every morning. He has a very healthy lifestyle.
I think it's important for us to develop good habits. They can help us get good grades and enjoy a healthy life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时、常用短语运用
【点评】
本题结合学生日常学习生活设计，考查信息整合与英语表达能力，要求学生将中文提示转化为规范英文，同时表达个人观点，贴近学生实际，易于理解和完成，能有效检验学生基础英语运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题要求以“良好习惯，伴其一生”为主题，介绍好朋友Danny的好习惯并谈看法，需包含表格中休闲活动、学习习惯、饮食健康的全部内容，语句通顺，字数80-100词。解题思路：先承接已给开头，依次将表格中的中文提示转化为符合英语表达的句子，适当补充细节使内容连贯，最后结合主题表达自己对好习惯重要性的看法，注意使用一般现在时描述日常习惯，确保词汇准确、逻辑清晰。
【解析】
首先承接开头，依次介绍Danny的好习惯：
1. 休闲活动：He exercises three or four times a week. He cleans his room every day and often helps his parents with housework on weekends.
2. 学习习惯：He reads books for half an hour every day, always finishes his homework on time and never stays up late.
3. 饮食健康：He often eats fruit and vegetables, and drinks milk every morning.
最后表达看法：I think good habits are important. They help us get good grades and live a healthy life. 整合后形成完整文章，确保语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【答案】
Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits.
He exercises three or four times a week. He is in good health. His room is very tidy because he cleans it every day. On the weekend, he often helps his parents with housework. He enjoys reading a lot. He reads books for half an hour every night. He always finishes his homework on time. And he never stays up. He thinks getting enough sleep is necessary for students. What's more, he often eats fruit and vegetables. He drinks milk every morning. He has a very healthy lifestyle.
I think it's important for us to develop good habits. They can help us get good grades and enjoy a healthy life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时、常用短语运用
【点评】
本题结合学生日常学习生活设计，考查信息整合与英语表达能力，要求学生将中文提示转化为规范英文，同时表达个人观点，贴近学生实际，易于理解和完成，能有效检验学生基础英语运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.3
