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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
学校即将举行"笔尖上的美食"活动,请结合图中提示并进行适当拓展,谈论你最喜欢的一种食物,参加学校的英语征文活动。
要求:1. 内容须涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My favourite food
My favourite food is
学校即将举行"笔尖上的美食"活动,请结合图中提示并进行适当拓展,谈论你最喜欢的一种食物,参加学校的英语征文活动。
要求:1. 内容须涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My favourite food
My favourite food is
fried rice
It's a popular Chinese dish.
Fried rice has a long history in China. People made it with leftover rice a long time ago.
It looks nice with eggs and green onions in it. It smells great and tastes really good.
When I was a child, my mother often cooked it for me as breakfast. It's healthy. Rice gives us energy, and eggs are good for our body. Green onions can also help us stay healthy.
I love fried rice very much.
答案
One possible version:
My favourite food
My favourite food is fried rice. It's a popular Chinese dish.
Fried rice has a long history in China. People made it with leftover rice a long time ago.
It looks nice with eggs and green onions in it. It smells great and tastes really good.
When I was a child, my mother often cooked it for me as breakfast. It's healthy. Rice
gives us energy, and eggs are good for our body. Green onions can also help us stay healthy.
I love fried rice very much.
My favourite food
My favourite food is fried rice. It's a popular Chinese dish.
Fried rice has a long history in China. People made it with leftover rice a long time ago.
It looks nice with eggs and green onions in it. It smells great and tastes really good.
When I was a child, my mother often cooked it for me as breakfast. It's healthy. Rice
gives us energy, and eggs are good for our body. Green onions can also help us stay healthy.
I love fried rice very much.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要紧扣题目要求，选择一种熟悉的食物展开写作。第一步，确定要写的食物，回答“What is it?”，可以简单介绍食物的基本属性；第二步，围绕“How does it taste?”，描述食物的外观、气味、口感；第三步，针对“Why do you like it?”，可以结合个人回忆、食物的营养价值等角度说明原因，同时要注意内容连贯，符合80词左右的要求，还要利用好给出的开头，让文章结构清晰、语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：根据开头，填入选定的食物“fried rice”，并补充其基本信息“It's a popular Chinese dish.”，回答“What is it?”的问题。
2. 补充背景：简单提及食物的历史“Fried rice has a long history in China. People made it with leftover rice a long time ago.”，丰富内容。
3. 描述口感：从外观、气味、味道入手，对应“How does it taste?”：“It looks nice with eggs and green onions in it. It smells great and tastes really good.”
4. 说明喜爱原因：结合童年回忆和健康价值，回答“Why do you like it?”：“When I was a child, my mother often cooked it for me as breakfast. It's healthy. Rice gives us energy, and eggs are good for our body. Green onions can also help us stay healthy.”
5. 收尾总结：用“I love fried rice very much.”强化喜爱之情，使文章完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite food
My favourite food is fried rice. It's a popular Chinese dish.
Fried rice has a long history in China. People made it with leftover rice a long time ago.
It looks nice with eggs and green onions in it. It smells great and tastes really good.
When I was a child, my mother often cooked it for me as breakfast. It's healthy. Rice
gives us energy, and eggs are good for our body. Green onions can also help us stay healthy.
I love fried rice very much.
【知识点】
食物类话题写作、英语记叙文写作、语句连贯技巧
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，涵盖了所有提示要点，还适当补充了食物的历史背景，内容充实连贯。文章句式简单易懂，语法正确，通过童年回忆和营养价值说明喜爱的原因，情感真挚，符合80词左右的字数要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们需要紧扣题目要求，选择一种熟悉的食物展开写作。第一步，确定要写的食物，回答“What is it?”，可以简单介绍食物的基本属性；第二步，围绕“How does it taste?”，描述食物的外观、气味、口感；第三步，针对“Why do you like it?”，可以结合个人回忆、食物的营养价值等角度说明原因，同时要注意内容连贯，符合80词左右的要求，还要利用好给出的开头，让文章结构清晰、语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：根据开头，填入选定的食物“fried rice”，并补充其基本信息“It's a popular Chinese dish.”，回答“What is it?”的问题。
2. 补充背景：简单提及食物的历史“Fried rice has a long history in China. People made it with leftover rice a long time ago.”，丰富内容。
3. 描述口感：从外观、气味、味道入手，对应“How does it taste?”：“It looks nice with eggs and green onions in it. It smells great and tastes really good.”
4. 说明喜爱原因：结合童年回忆和健康价值，回答“Why do you like it?”：“When I was a child, my mother often cooked it for me as breakfast. It's healthy. Rice gives us energy, and eggs are good for our body. Green onions can also help us stay healthy.”
5. 收尾总结：用“I love fried rice very much.”强化喜爱之情，使文章完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite food
My favourite food is fried rice. It's a popular Chinese dish.
Fried rice has a long history in China. People made it with leftover rice a long time ago.
It looks nice with eggs and green onions in it. It smells great and tastes really good.
When I was a child, my mother often cooked it for me as breakfast. It's healthy. Rice
gives us energy, and eggs are good for our body. Green onions can also help us stay healthy.
I love fried rice very much.
【知识点】
食物类话题写作、英语记叙文写作、语句连贯技巧
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，涵盖了所有提示要点，还适当补充了食物的历史背景，内容充实连贯。文章句式简单易懂，语法正确，通过童年回忆和营养价值说明喜爱的原因，情感真挚，符合80词左右的字数要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
