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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
学校英语报正在征集以"My sport life"为主题的文章,请你写一篇70词左右的征文投稿。内容包括:
1. 你喜欢的运动。
2. 你记忆深刻的运动瞬间。
3. 运动对你的影响。
My sport life
Sports play an important part in my life.
学校英语报正在征集以"My sport life"为主题的文章,请你写一篇70词左右的征文投稿。内容包括:
1. 你喜欢的运动。
2. 你记忆深刻的运动瞬间。
3. 运动对你的影响。
My sport life
Sports play an important part in my life.
Among all the sports, I love basketball best. When I am on the court, I move freely. Each good shot gives me a strong sense of achievement.
One unforgettable game was the school basketball final. Facing a tough opponent, we were behind at first. But we didn't give up. I passed the ball to a teammate. He made a great move and scored. Another teammate stole the ball from the opponent and quickly passed it to me. I took the chance and scored. With these plays and people cheering, we caught up and finally won.
Thanks to basketball, I've become stronger and learned teamwork. It keeps me energetic and gives me confidence to face challenges. All in all, basketball is a part of my life.
答案
One possible version:
My sport life
Sports play an important part in my life. Among all the sports, I love basketball best.
When I am on the court, I move freely. Each good shot gives me a strong sense of achievement.
One unforgettable game was the school basketball final. Facing a tough opponent, we
were behind at first. But we didn't give up. I passed the ball to a teammate. He made a
great move and scored. Another teammate stole the ball from the opponent and quickly passed
it to me. I took the chance and scored. With these plays and people cheering, we caught up
and finally won.
Thanks to basketball, I've become stronger and learned teamwork. It keeps me energetic
and gives me confidence to face challenges. All in all, basketball is a part of my life.
My sport life
Sports play an important part in my life. Among all the sports, I love basketball best.
When I am on the court, I move freely. Each good shot gives me a strong sense of achievement.
One unforgettable game was the school basketball final. Facing a tough opponent, we
were behind at first. But we didn't give up. I passed the ball to a teammate. He made a
great move and scored. Another teammate stole the ball from the opponent and quickly passed
it to me. I took the chance and scored. With these plays and people cheering, we caught up
and finally won.
Thanks to basketball, I've become stronger and learned teamwork. It keeps me energetic
and gives me confidence to face challenges. All in all, basketball is a part of my life.
解析
【分析】
首先要紧扣题目要求的三个核心内容展开写作：
1. 先点明自己最喜爱的运动，承接已给出的开篇句，快速切入主题；
2. 构思记忆深刻的运动瞬间，选取具体场景（如学校篮球决赛），加入细节动作描写（落后、传球、得分等），让内容真实生动；
3. 最后阐述运动对自己的影响，从身体素质、精神品质（如团队合作、自信）等方面入手，呼应开头，升华主题。写作时注意语言简洁流畅，符合英语表达习惯，字数贴合征文要求。
【解析】
步骤1：承接开篇句，点明核心运动。用"Among all the sports, I love basketball best."直接明确喜爱的运动，开篇简洁清晰。
步骤2：刻画难忘运动瞬间。选取学校篮球决赛场景，通过"we were behind at first""passed the ball""stole the ball""scored"等细节动作，展现比赛的紧张感与团队配合的过程，增强画面感。
步骤3：阐述运动带来的影响。用"Thanks to basketball, I've become stronger and learned teamwork."等句子，从身体、精神层面说明改变，最后用"All in all, basketball is a part of my life."总结全文，呼应主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
My sport life
Sports play an important part in my life. Among all the sports, I love basketball best.
When I am on the court, I move freely. Each good shot gives me a strong sense of achievement.
One unforgettable game was the school basketball final. Facing a tough opponent, we
were behind at first. But we didn't give up. I passed the ball to a teammate. He made a
great move and scored. Another teammate stole the ball from the opponent and quickly passed
it to me. I took the chance and scored. With these plays and people cheering, we caught up
and finally won.
Thanks to basketball, I've become stronger and learned teamwork. It keeps me energetic
and gives me confidence to face challenges. All in all, basketball is a part of my life.
【知识点】
1. 记叙文写作
2. 运动类词汇运用
3. 英语征文结构
【点评】
本文结构清晰，紧扣题目三个核心要点展开。难忘瞬间的细节描写生动，动作刻画让场景更具画面感；结尾从身体和精神层面阐述运动影响，升华了主题。语言流畅自然，符合英语书面表达规范，是一篇贴合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先要紧扣题目要求的三个核心内容展开写作：
1. 先点明自己最喜爱的运动，承接已给出的开篇句，快速切入主题；
2. 构思记忆深刻的运动瞬间，选取具体场景（如学校篮球决赛），加入细节动作描写（落后、传球、得分等），让内容真实生动；
3. 最后阐述运动对自己的影响，从身体素质、精神品质（如团队合作、自信）等方面入手，呼应开头，升华主题。写作时注意语言简洁流畅，符合英语表达习惯，字数贴合征文要求。
【解析】
步骤1：承接开篇句，点明核心运动。用"Among all the sports, I love basketball best."直接明确喜爱的运动，开篇简洁清晰。
步骤2：刻画难忘运动瞬间。选取学校篮球决赛场景，通过"we were behind at first""passed the ball""stole the ball""scored"等细节动作，展现比赛的紧张感与团队配合的过程，增强画面感。
步骤3：阐述运动带来的影响。用"Thanks to basketball, I've become stronger and learned teamwork."等句子，从身体、精神层面说明改变，最后用"All in all, basketball is a part of my life."总结全文，呼应主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
My sport life
Sports play an important part in my life. Among all the sports, I love basketball best.
When I am on the court, I move freely. Each good shot gives me a strong sense of achievement.
One unforgettable game was the school basketball final. Facing a tough opponent, we
were behind at first. But we didn't give up. I passed the ball to a teammate. He made a
great move and scored. Another teammate stole the ball from the opponent and quickly passed
it to me. I took the chance and scored. With these plays and people cheering, we caught up
and finally won.
Thanks to basketball, I've become stronger and learned teamwork. It keeps me energetic
and gives me confidence to face challenges. All in all, basketball is a part of my life.
【知识点】
1. 记叙文写作
2. 运动类词汇运用
3. 英语征文结构
【点评】
本文结构清晰，紧扣题目三个核心要点展开。难忘瞬间的细节描写生动，动作刻画让场景更具画面感；结尾从身体和精神层面阐述运动影响，升华了主题。语言流畅自然，符合英语书面表达规范，是一篇贴合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
